Tonitoni
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| 10 Jan 2012 03:10 PM |
I have been working on the lyrics for several days now, this is the current state of the song:
I used to rule TRA noobs would die when I said the word Now in the morning I sweep alone Sweep the streets I used to own
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I used to roll the dice Feel the fear in my enemy's eyes Listen as the crowd would sing "Now the old leader's dead! Long live the new!"
One minute I held the key Next the walls were closed on me And I discovered that my bases stand Upon pillars of blocks and pillars of sand
I hear fort darox's alarms are ringing TRA infantry choirs are singing Be my gun, my sword and shield My soldiers in a foreign field
For some reason I can't explain We would never lose a game Allways a winning raid But that was when I ruled you all
(Break) It was many angry soldiers screams Broke down the doors to let me in Merry soldiers and the sound of joy People couldn't believe that I was back
Angry raiders wait For my head on a silver plate If they cought me I would sure be dead Oh who would ever want to lead?
I hear fort darox's alarms are ringing Robloxian infantry choirs are singing Be my gun, my sword and shield My soldiers in a foreign field
For some reason I can't explain I know I won't lead TRA again I said I would never fall But that was when I ruled you all
(Break) (oooooOOoooo)
I hear fort darox's alarms are ringing Robloxian infantry choirs are singing Be my gun, my sword and shield My soldiers in a foreign field
For some reason I can't explain I know I won't lead TRA again I said I would never fall But that was when I ruled you all
Leave comments and suggestions on how to improve this please :) |
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| 10 Jan 2012 03:11 PM |
| I stopped reading when it said 'I used to rule TRA' |
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meto02
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| 10 Jan 2012 03:16 PM |
| TRA got big because they are a super awesome group. To bad I left it during the TRA and UAF war because EJ is an idi0t but he is gone now and I joined back because Robo was Commander and I liked him but only to find out that it was going to be hard to get my major rank back. Its very sad to me because I worked hard for that only to be ruined by a Commander that doesnt know the difference between dictatorship and a Republic. Anyways nice song. |
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thorhayes
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rhinguin
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| 10 Jan 2012 03:47 PM |
| :O You used my pillars of sand! Even though I said piles of sand... :P |
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Tonitoni
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| 10 Jan 2012 03:50 PM |
| Pillars of sand was in the original text :P |
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Bahll
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cakeman45
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| 10 Jan 2012 05:52 PM |
| i like it you should keep it the way it is |
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| 10 Jan 2012 05:55 PM |
| Lots of work put in to it, Nice job bro. |
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| 10 Jan 2012 06:00 PM |
| Really nice so far. This will be great to improve TRA. I really just want to hear your singing :P. It really will work with TRA, it says a lot and bring's thoughts of the past when the first time I was raiding with you.. Etc.. |
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kjet
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| 10 Jan 2012 06:01 PM |
I didn't read it but good job tonimiester
http://www.roblox.com/My/Groups.aspx?gid=476568 |
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shane55
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tibiscus
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Artia44
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| 11 Jan 2012 04:43 AM |
| first stanza doesnt fit well |
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treetoad
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neirin123
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| 11 Jan 2012 08:29 AM |
| needs A piano in the main parts! il can gladly record me playing piano for you! |
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kingzeb
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| 11 Jan 2012 08:50 AM |
| I'll do piano. I have a book with Viva La Vida in and I can play the chorus very well, so I could record it xD |
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neirin123
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| 11 Jan 2012 08:55 AM |
| me and king can record! I do lots of intruments |
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Tonitoni
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| 11 Jan 2012 09:03 AM |
| I allready got the version of the song without singing. But thx anyway. |
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neirin123
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| 11 Jan 2012 09:03 AM |
| Hey can you add me? I have a song you might like to hear! |
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Kingruan
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| 11 Jan 2012 09:23 AM |
| post vid on yt with you singing this? |
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nukman1
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