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An Elite's Life - Chapter. 1: A War Raging On

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rattorobot is not online. rattorobot
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06 Jan 2012 11:28 AM
The fight rages on. Those parassites keep trying to defend Reach. Don't they understand it's useless? The Covenant arleady won. Yet they don't try to escape,they keep fighting. Bah! Those insects shall be crushed under the fury of my blade.

"Sir?" A little grunt shily showed up,the plasma gun charged.
"What do you want,Grunt?" answered Xel'quan,the Elite in-charge of the assault.
"The humans.. they still have very much food.. I fear we won't be able to win.. shouldn't we think of retre-"
The grunt didnn't yet finish the word that Xel'quan had arleady cut his head off. His squad was looking the corpse horrified,two nearby brutes lowly laughing. "Shall this be an example of what happens to diserters. Understood? Now go back to the fight!" The grunts ran out the main base. Xel'quan took his invisibilty device and actived it. "I'm going in the fight. Brutes,remain here; you are in-charge of the base until I come back." The Elite disappeared in the shadows in front of the brutes,arleady giving new orders to defend the base until the Captain had returned.

A plasma blade exited of the human's chest. His team was confused. Xel'quan appeared and trapassed another soldier. The remaining three opened fire,but the shields protected the Elite,which proceeded in killing the two survivors. The last one tryied to run,but taking his plasma rifle the Captain extinguished his life's flame. Xel'quan laughed at how the humans were easy to kill. Other two Elites appeared from the shadows. "Xel'quan,we heard of the grunt's execution. We fear a grunt rebellion. It would be easy to contain,but a civil war would ruin the invasion." The preoccuped Elite's name was Ajen'quax,Xel'quan's best friend. "Do not worry,old friend. One Elite on his own has the same power of an hundred grunts. We brought them with us only to have front-line soldiers that keeped the enemy occupied while the Sangheili cut his throat. We don't need them." "If you say so,Xel'quan. What's our objective,Mar'xul?" Mar'xul was a rare Elite that lacked the strenght of his race. Instead,he's an hacker; using his sophisticate programs,the human secrets never last more than ten days. Unluckily,the location of Earth was too much protected,and yet Mar'xul couldn't enter in the system. Of course,given a plasma blade he was as deadly as his brothers. "We need to infiltrate this human 'base'. Bah. Not even an anti-air plasma turret. It's going to be a cakewalk." "Off to our work,then." The three Sangheili disappeared again in the shadows,running to their objective.
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This was the first chapter of "An Elite's Life"! I hope there will be many readers that appreciate this story. My other account,GameStories,will begin the story "The Swarm",based about StarCraft 2.
Character List:
Xel'quan: The leader of the group. His fury is enough to tear apart the enemies.
Ajen'quax: The medic. Give him a pair of bandages,and Ajen can heal a broken bone.
Mar'xul: The hacker. Firewalls? "Waterbucket" will extinguish them. The best in the Covenant army.

Thanks for reading!
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rattorobot is not online. rattorobot
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06 Jan 2012 11:35 AM
Grunts and humans were hurt in the making of the story.
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mastercheifcarbine35 is not online. mastercheifcarbine35
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06 Jan 2012 11:40 AM
Lol you play Halo? XBL? What's your GT?
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06 Jan 2012 11:42 AM
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06 Jan 2012 12:06 PM
OT = OFF TOPIC = NOT ABOUT ROBLOX.

NEWB! OT IS FOR THINGS LIKE THIS NOOB!
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06 Jan 2012 12:07 PM
http://www.roblox.com/GET-OUT-item?id=69282044
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06 Jan 2012 12:07 PM
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06 Jan 2012 12:08 PM
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Get

the

hell

out

-toiletfromhell6478
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rattorobot is not online. rattorobot
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06 Jan 2012 02:19 PM
Instead of posting troll comments,think how this could be improved.

Never troll a troll.

[I Heart Sarcasm]
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PRINCESSWOONA is not online. PRINCESSWOONA
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06 Jan 2012 02:20 PM
THE ONLY WAY
THIS STORY MAY BE IMPROVED
IS IF IT IS DELETED
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06 Jan 2012 02:21 PM
Just get out of OT, no one cares about threads like ALL you make.

On the other hand, I'm left-handed.
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rattorobot is not online. rattorobot
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06 Jan 2012 02:22 PM
To all haters,please first make something better than this beginning. Only then I'll listen to your comments.

And remember,haters make me famous.

[I Heart Sarcasm]
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PRINCESSWOONA is not online. PRINCESSWOONA
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06 Jan 2012 02:23 PM
>Haters make you famous

No. Haters make you disliked and hated.

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rattorobot is not online. rattorobot
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06 Jan 2012 02:46 PM
Two UNSC marines were standing in front of the door. Warthogs were patrolling the walls. Some hornets,too,flying on the base. "Again,why are we doing this?" asked Ajen'quax. "If three Elites manage to infiltrate and destroy an human base,the war is won. And we're here to test it." "You know,Xel'quan,if I knew this,I would have not came." Ajen'quax slowly proceeded to assassinate a guard. Xel'quan attached a plasma grenade to one of the warthogs,while Mar'xul jumped on the other one. >Not a great defense, thought Xel'quan. >Should have put some automatic turrets,and given heat visors. It's too easy. As the Sangheili turned around,he saw the other warthog's crew being killed by Mar'xul,and the two guards being cut in a half by Ajen'quax's plasma swords. >It's useful to use two instead of one. Less problems. While thinking this,Xel'quan ran away from the warthog,which exploded few seconds after. The three Elites entered in the enemy base.. and found something unexpected. An unknown Spartan. An UNSC marine called him "Nicholas-091". Probably a new Spartan,seeing he didn't have any medals. Listening to the conversation,the three Elites discovered that new Spartans were being trained in this base. >This makes the mission not only fun,but important thought Mar'xul,which was in unagreement that this was only a test. The Spartan walked near to Xel'quan,while the UNSC marine walked away. The leader of the Sangheili team appeared and trapassed the new Spartan's body. But the plasma sword only deactivated the shields,and Nicholas-091 proceeded shouting in the radio the alarm. Twenty UNSC marines ran to the room,only to see the Spartan get killed by Ajen'quax. The UNSC marines opened fire,but a plasma grenade threw by Mar'xul killed them all. The Covenant infiltration team vanished in the shadows,running to find the energy core. And they found it. Guarded by four spartans. >It was better when it was easier,thought Xel'quan. Analyzing possibilties,the Elite Captain found a solution: plasma grenades. It was risky,but they had to try it. They threw two plasma grenade on the first two Spartans,killing them. One of the remaining supersoldiers came to see what happened,and two hits from Xel'quan blades closed his life. The last Spartan aimed the rifle at the door and began shooting. Xel'quan ran inside when the supersoldier was reloadin and proceeded to attach a plasma grenade to the Spartan's back. Then,the Sangheili leader threw the enemy in the core,destroying it when the plasma grenade exploded. The lights shut down,one by one. The candidates in the process of augmentation died because of it. By counting the screams,every soon-to-be Spartan was being augmented,and died. Xel'quan,Mar'xul and Ajen'quax put plasma charges in any place possible in the base,and then ran out. A Phantom escorted him out. Mar'xul pressed the detonate button. The mission was accomplished.
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This story is completely out of the Halo games,so don't complain about the possible new Spartans. Haters gonna hate,and readers gonna read. Thanks for reading.

On the next episode,a race that everyone who knows Halo might guess will appear. Stay tuned!
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rattorobot is not online. rattorobot
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06 Jan 2012 02:47 PM
Princess,more haters make me famous in a negative way.
And also,why hate on someone who enjoys writing stories on the Halo and Starcraft 2 universes? Go whine in your little corner.

Haters gonna hate,readers gonna read.

[I Heart Sarcasm]
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PRINCESSWOONA is not online. PRINCESSWOONA
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06 Jan 2012 02:48 PM
I'm not in a corner

this is a thread
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06 Jan 2012 02:49 PM
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rattorobot is not online. rattorobot
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06 Jan 2012 02:50 PM
And is it annoying you the fact that I am writing a story? Seriously. Your angry because I wroten something off topic on a forum called 'Off Topic'? No because,your doing this.

Haters gonna hate,readers gotta read.

And afterall,all good threads get haters instantly,because they want attention,no? Also,why your wasting your time here if you think this is a stupid post?

[I Heart Sarcasm]
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rattorobot is not online. rattorobot
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06 Jan 2012 02:50 PM
CrossArms,this is still the Off Topic forum. If the admins didn't delete this,there's a reason,no?
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PRINCESSWOONA is not online. PRINCESSWOONA
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06 Jan 2012 02:51 PM
>Your

You're*

I thought you were a writer.
Writers know basic grammar and spelling.
Your text is full of typos and obvious mistakes, perhaps you should re-read it next time.
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06 Jan 2012 02:51 PM
@heartstrings/princess

Damn, you beat me to it.

-toiletfromhell6478
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rattorobot is not online. rattorobot
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06 Jan 2012 02:52 PM
I'm Italian. And you are now taking this argument because I beated you on the other one. As I arleady said,you can't troll a troll; I know all your moves,your tactics,your schemes.
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PRINCESSWOONA is not online. PRINCESSWOONA
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06 Jan 2012 02:53 PM
You're not a troll

No one on this damn site can troll.
You're a poor writer that can't even place spaces between his commas and next word.

l2grammar please
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Namesuggestions is not online. Namesuggestions
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06 Jan 2012 02:53 PM
How is being Italian even relevant, broski?

-toiletfromhell6478
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rattorobot is not online. rattorobot
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06 Jan 2012 02:55 PM
"No one on this damn site can troll"
And so,why are you trying to troll my dear?

Also,as I arleady stated,I AM ITALIAN. Need proof?
Eccotela! Ora che sto parlando in italiano mi credi oppure andrai a chiamare un esperto di lingua italiana per assicurarti che non abbia fatto errori? O magari vai su google translate,esso ti traduce male,torni qui e fai "OMG NOOB WRONG".
I'm not a troll because I don't troll? Still,I once trolled,and you keep changing ground because I counter all your moves.
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