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| 17 Dec 2011 09:45 PM |
Firstly... Which would be the best title?
-Winds of Rivalry -Winds of War -Winds of Strife -Breeze(s)
Or, if you have an idea, I'd love to hear it!
Anyways, there's these two floating chunks of land. Flying creatures -- this includes fictional creatures -- are nurtured on each piece of land. The two lands battle for the skies. However, if this war continues, both lands may crumble.
Some oppose the war, others approve of it.
Any improvements/thoughts? :3 |
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:46 PM |
| Winds of Strife. Breeze/s is a little too misleading. |
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:47 PM |
| Alright. ;P I WILL improve the plot, of course, but I need your thoughts on it. Perhaps I could include a bit of history, and characteristics of the two lands... |
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Xilirite
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:47 PM |
First of, Winds of War. Second, each one should have it's own unique theme or style. If there are any kind of buildings, then maybe one island could be sharp, angular, and hard, while the other could be smouth, soft, and soothing. Think Morder and Elves from Lord (of the) Rings. |
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Role996
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:47 PM |
| Would you be a flying creature, or a human on each Island? |
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Xilirite
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:48 PM |
| Oh, well... Winds of War, or Winds of Strife? ._. |
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:49 PM |
| It sounds alright so far. I might even take part in it, depending on when it starts and the race choices provided. |
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Graulas
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:49 PM |
| Winds of War. Sounds nicccccce. |
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:50 PM |
@Role,
A human. It'd be senseless to be a flying creature, considering they're kept in stables most of the time unless preparing for war/in the war. |
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Xilirite
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:50 PM |
WAAAAAAAAAR! (SCIIIEEEENCE!) |
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:51 PM |
| "War" is a word tossed around far too frequently in RP titles on this board. "Strife" means the same thing, but sounds a bit more unique. |
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Xilirite
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:51 PM |
| Tai, as long as we get to ride the creatures, then I'm good. |
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:52 PM |
| Although 'Winds of War' has a somewhat decent ring to it, I'd have to agree with Nuka. I want the title as original and intriguing as I'm capable of. :P |
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Role996
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:52 PM |
| I side with Nuka, and pick," Strife. " |
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:53 PM |
@Xil,
Yus. The best part is that you have to fight on your creature. Otherwise, you'd be plummeting to your death. :D |
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:53 PM |
| I'm more of a "be the creature" kind of guy. Hoomins are too.... Smooth. And not "smoove" smooth, I mean..... Human smooth. I don't know. |
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Graulas
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:54 PM |
| Lemme help with the thread Tai? |
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Xilirite
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:54 PM |
Winds of War is Alliteration. My case is closed :P |
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:54 PM |
SKY COUNTRIES? AIRBEASTS?
*Runs off to get my leviathan fan-outfit and signed hardcover copies* |
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:54 PM |
@Nuka,
Would I win over your approval if I allowed dwarves/hobbits/elves, and the like? :3 |
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:55 PM |
@Graulas,
What do you want to help with? The plot? You're good at those. O: |
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:55 PM |
Yes, but it's a W alliteration, which isn't as smoove as others.
Plus, as I've said before, "war" is just seen way too darn frequently here. Variety is a good thing. |
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:55 PM |
Cap. +1 Respect Point.
I love those books. |
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| 17 Dec 2011 09:55 PM |
Cap. +1 Respect Point.
I love those books. |
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