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Astrogamer7 is not online. Astrogamer7
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29 Dec 2011 10:29 AM
PrettyJackie was a forum-er with a lot going for her. She had fame, a high post count, and many ODers at her fingertips. Of course, with fame comes unfortunate occurrences. One night she came home from an OT Party and hound herself in the dark. Blinded by the lack of light, she had no idea the ultimate revenge against her was about to be executed


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A Case Rolled across thatsawesome's desk at about three in the afternoon. When it did, she hadn't time to look at it, she enjoys a late lunch. When she finally took a look, it seemed all too familiar. Some one dies, evidence too easily found, she was overqualified. She already had leads as it was. Oddly Enough It wasn't the same old scenario this time, little did she know this case would make or break her career.

She didn't get to the actual scene until about 5, when she got there, her partner had already arrived and was investigating, she decided to have a look with him. She yawned as she walked over to the body


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Spiderpig2398 was an aspiring journalist looking for a big story to make his name. He wanted something exciting like Watergate or Iran-Contra. But for now, he was stuck reporting murders like this one. He was very arrogant to this case. He saw a lack of sufficient evidence to prove anyone even remotely guilty. But he sighed and continued to photograph, unaware of the dramatic irony that he was reporting the case of the Year




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Cool story bro
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29 Dec 2011 10:31 AM
I'm liking this.
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29 Dec 2011 10:33 AM
I'm not sure if the majority feedback is positive or negative, considering half of the posts are irrelevant

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29 Dec 2011 10:34 AM
Reported for Pers...

No, it's not worth it...

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Continue please...
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interesting
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29 Dec 2011 10:44 AM
Thatsawesome went to the nearest police officer.

"What've you for me?" she said

"Homicide, young, approximately 13 or 14"

"Thanks" She Replied

She went to the body and examined the clothing, disgusting. She hated the California Girl look, she checked the pockets for a wallet and found a rather large sum of money, wrapped up with a rubber band. She moved on to the purse and found the same thing.

"Can we run a fingerprint analysis on this?" she asked,

She was answered with "Yes Madame"

She went back to the purse and found nothing else of value, she handed that to the cop for the requested analysis. She moved to the porch in hopes of finding a weapon, she found small traces of zinc, a possible lead to a weapon used. She continued to search and found a fake ID on the doormat. She nearly laughed out loud, how could she even pull that off? She put it down and continued to search and found the key under the mat, with permission, she entered the home and found something of high suspicion.

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29 Dec 2011 10:47 AM
Buy Us More Potatoes

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Woah, it isn't...

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29 Dec 2011 10:51 AM
LOLOLOL
JIHAD

haw

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Y U MEIK ME BUMP!

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29 Dec 2011 10:54 AM
I'll post moar in 10 minutes

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29 Dec 2011 11:18 AM
She was looking at a very strongly hand-written letter written by "Anonymous". It read as so


Dear Jackie,

We HIGHLY appreciate your concern, but you need to keep your nose out of other people's business. If you come over to our facility again, I'll skin ya for what you're worth. We have very important business to take care of, we're under enough stress without your interference

Sincerely

~The Corporation


"Interesting" Proclaimed Thats, "This'll be too easy" she said as she folded the letter and headed to interrogate the neighbor. Oozlebachr was trembling as she spoke to Thats. The interrogation followed a pattern along these lines

"Hello Oozlebachr, Good Day to You"
"And to you, thats."
"Ms. bachr, when were you last acquainted with PrettyJackie?"
"I haven't seen Jackie since last April"

Thats sat back and contemplated


"You're lying, Ms. Bachr, I know you went to a forum-er's party last night"
"Well Yes, but....It seemed so out of the blue, we hadn't spoken in months"
"Why?", Thats Asked
"I don't know, she just became more private, I suppose"
Thatsawesome sipped on water and asked the next question.
"Where and when was the party held?"
"...In the Billings Neighborhood from about 7-11 last night"
"Do you have the address?"
"I do."
Thatsawesome reviewed the address and decided to investigate, but first, one last question to try and stir her up.
"And PrettyJackie didn't make any enemies in the time you knew her?", she inquired.
"Not that I'm aware of", oozle replied.

That really set Thats off

"So your neighbor just gets murdered and you have no way to help us?"
"Well, Astrogamer7 and her...could've been better friends."
Thats wrapped it up.
"Thank you for your time, Ms. Bachr"

She headed off to the given address





I'm not posting for half an hour, M'kay?

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29 Dec 2011 11:25 AM
Awesome.

Can I be in it? It'd be pretty dang awshum
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29 Dec 2011 12:05 PM
Thatsawesome had never been too lucky with partners, Vunro was no exception. She hadn't spoken to him all day, and their was a reason, this is how the drive to the party went

"So you got promoted, eh?" said Thatsawesome, in an attempt to try and start a conversation.
"Yes", Vunro Replied
"How do you like my desk"

Vunro got irate quickly

"Listen, I don't know who you think you are, but I work alone, this is all temporary until I get out of this hellhole you call a desk"

"Fine...", replied Thats, "Can we at least go over the case"

Vunro agreed to that

"So we have 3 persons of interest, correct?", Vunro Asked

"Well, we have the owner of this house, Astrogamer97, and we also have this 'Corporation' item", Thats Answered

"What could the corporation be doing", Vunro Inquired

"Probably Illegal Trade, that's just my guess", Thats Replied, "Next Left"


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Fizz65 sat down in defeat

"SPIDER! WHAT IS THIS?" he inquired

Spiderpig2398 replied "It's a murder case! This is big news!"

"You call that front page material! That's bull is what that is!" Fizz insisted

"Well, what should I do about it" Spider asked

"I want something original, some..." Fizz started but was cut off

"Original! This is news, not storybook writing!" Spider Exclaimed!

Fizz was raging now

"Get me something no one's heard before, or you're done"

That shut spider up




Next Chapter....Soon

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29 Dec 2011 12:09 PM
Bump...Keep This Alive

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