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Re: A story i wrote when i was 9.

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mitchz is not online. mitchz
Joined: 30 Jan 2010
Total Posts: 151
25 Dec 2011 03:03 AM
It was a cold September day when General Mitchz was preparing to go see his old pals Captain Royald1 and Leutennante Bubbabob27.
Captain royald1 and Leutennante bubbabob27 were stationed in afgahnistan. General Mitchz was stationed in pearl harbor preparing
his 2nd trip to afgahnistan. He knew that his arch-enemy Macey the deadliest assasian who had a chrush on royal would be there
to kill Mitchz. There battle had begun when General Mitchz was stationed in Ohio where he met his arch-enemy macey
and met his best friends Captain royald1 and Leutennante bubbabob27. But now Mitchzs fleete was prepared to kill macey. His
last time in afgahnistan he had met a group of kids. He is now not in touch with these kids but soon he knew he would be
intouch with lena one of the kids he met. lena wanted to comeback for revenge of what macy did to her people.
As they boarded there ship lena said "i wonder how my familys doing over there." General Mitchz was so happy to see his
friends again that he forgot that macey was going to be there. Once they reached the docks to go there he had bad news.
Sargent redd came to him and said "Unfortunatly the base were going to where your friends were positioned was attacked
by Macey and her team. There were no survivors." General Mitchz gasped in fear. redd continued "but your friends bodys
were not found so we think they were captured." Mitchz knew where they were being held. Lena knew her family was there and
they had died. Lena said " we gotta avenge them!."
They got into there helicopters and in General Mitchz helicopter was him,Redd,Lena,Bell,and piolit Brown. They landed
at an old base. Everything was running exept for the xBox360. Mitchz said"wow this would be the only broken thing!"
Mitchz,Redd,Bell,Green,and Piolit Brown set off to maceys old jail. They saw 12 AA turrets firing at them. Green said
"were going down we gotta land!" They landed in a open field surrounded by trees. Mitchz said "ill go on you stay here!"
Redd said "sir you cant its suicide!" Mitchz said "your right.you all make a distraction but stay safe. Redd since your
the one who said its suicide your coming with me!" They all went to there positions. Mitchz and Redd went right in the
door. There were no guards to stop them. Mitchz said "you stay here and guard the door." Redd saluted and stood his position.
Mitchz reached the 5th corridoor when he saw Macey. Macey said "well well well i finally get to kill you mitch!"
Mitchz said "its not the time for me to die! when my friends are free i can die then!" Macey drew her pistol. She fired 3 shots.
All the shots missed. Mitch drew his pistol. He fired 2 shots. They both missed. Macy and Mitch nodded at each other
and said at the same time "i missed the days where we just chased each other on the playset. who knew towslee would teach
4 killer people." Macey then said "you know i dont have james. he escaped looking for you. Poor guy lost his ear escaping.
Got it knifed off in a knife battle with a guard." Mitch said "so wheres royal?" Macey said "10th corridor."
Meanwhile Bell,Green,and Brown were searching the 10th corridor. Green said "hey i found Captain Barton!" They rushed
and unlocked his cell. Barton said "james james! dont go therell be help soon! watch out for the guards!" Bell and Brown
took Barton and rushed to the crashed helicopter. Bell ran to go help Mitchz and Redd. Green tripped over a recoring tape and
the tape turned on. It said " Royal if your hearing this youve been freed. i hope you dont find Mitch before i do cause
he cant leave us like this. im living in a village preparing to kidnap Mitch to talk to him. My right ear is in the air ducks.
If you can find it and bring it to me that would be great. Ice it first ill be in the city of meetings. you know wat i mean."
The tape went off. Royal was puzzled. Green rushed to find his ear while Royal and Brown went to go to the helicopter.

Bell had finally reached Mitch and Redd when Macey escaped through the air ducks. Bell said "We are the wierdest army there is.
God Bless the U.S.A!" Everyone laughed and rushed to the helicopter. While everyone was going to the helicopter Green found
James ear next to Macey. Macey said "Who are you and why are you looking for an ear!?" Green said "im darnell green and i dont
know why im looking for an ear. Hey can i borrow some ice?" Macey threw him out of the air ducks. As he was falling
he saw a freezer and he said "FREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!" He shot a cable to the window
and broke threw it. Darnell grabed a cooler some ice and put the ear in it. Then he jumped out the window and landed on a tree.
He ran out to the helicopter by the time he was there it was fixed. Then they all flew back to Main Base Camp. Mitch and royal
were singing god bless the U.S.A.
At the Base Camp everyone was celebrating the sucsess. Everyone besides Mitch,Royal,and Bell. They were thinking what
that message ment. Then it came to Mitch. Mitch said " Alismoyla!" Royal knew exactly what he ment. That was the name
of the city Mitch,Royal,and James met in afgahnistan. Mitch,Royal,Bell,Green,and Brown flew to Alismoyla. Green said"why do
i go on all of the hard missions!" Everyone laughed.
James was eating a steak saying "nummy nummy!" When he saw the Helicopter he started to run. He didnt know who was in it.
Then they droped a tape recorder out the helicopter and he knew who it was. It was Royal and Mitch. When they landed James looked
very angry. He shot Mitch in the foot with a pistol. Everyone fled from the helicopter and hid in a building. Green was a medic.
He fixed his foot and said "whyd he shoot you?' Noone knew why. Then they heard the helicopter explode and Macey say "good job tricking
your friends now they will finally die!" Macey started laughing evily. Gun shots fired like crazy. Mitch screamed "i came back for my friends!
IM NOT LETTING ANY OF THEM DIE! He ran out into the battle shooting 2 ak47s at everyone. The rest of his team safely in a building.
23 of Maceys troopers died. Mitchell got shot in the right arm 3 times. Macey had 2 guards run and knock out Mitch. James screamed and ran
at the guards. He stabed one of them but then he got knocked out and captured to. Royal stood there in shock as Macey glanced at him then got
in the helicopter and screamed to him "THERE GONNA DIEEEEE!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Brown,Bell,Green,and Royal ran back to base camp.
Mitch was sleeping when James was done with innterigation. James woke up Mitch and said "im sorry i shot you. I was insane. I let my
friends almost die." Mitch said "its not your fault. Now go to sleep i gotta plan in the morning. James jumped up in the top bunk and fell
asleep whiile Mitch was in the bottum bunk sleeping. Mitch was half asleep when he heard a local screaming "Nuuu nuuu you cant do this to me!
help anyone help!" Then he heard a guard say "ya ya you stupid local. NOW GET IN THE CELL whats your name? Uhhhhh Stan?" Then the guard knocked
out Stan.
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Optimus557 is not online. Optimus557
Joined: 03 Apr 2009
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25 Dec 2011 03:03 AM
Jesus, what are you wearing?
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VladimirSmirnov is not online. VladimirSmirnov
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25 Dec 2011 03:03 AM
Tracing doesn't count.
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Flames838 is not online. Flames838
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25 Dec 2011 03:04 AM
tl;dr
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PointlessChris24 is not online. PointlessChris24
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25 Dec 2011 03:05 AM
It's better than your other stories.

~The Derpy Man~
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Positi is not online. Positi
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25 Dec 2011 03:06 AM
Lol ... He is wearing what I was yesterday.
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Japanaholic is not online. Japanaholic
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25 Dec 2011 03:07 AM
tldr
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mitchz is not online. mitchz
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25 Dec 2011 03:07 AM
@Chris Better then what you have ever wrote. I printed your story and printed this story and my social studies teacher said GO AWAY!!!!!!!!!! But my pre algebra teacher said mine was better.
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Twister31 is not online. Twister31
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25 Dec 2011 03:08 AM
Must say: tl;dr
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mitchz is not online. mitchz
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25 Dec 2011 03:09 AM
Wdf does that mean anyways?
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PointlessChris24 is not online. PointlessChris24
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25 Dec 2011 03:10 AM
Lol...mitchz. In your dreams.
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Japanaholic is not online. Japanaholic
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25 Dec 2011 03:11 AM
oh, by the way



OT.
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mitchz is not online. mitchz
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25 Dec 2011 03:11 AM
Pointless, My teachers friend who is a publisher said this could be published.
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mitchz is not online. mitchz
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25 Dec 2011 03:12 AM
tl;dr? OT? WDF DO THEY MEAN!?
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1WOOF1 is not online. 1WOOF1
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25 Dec 2011 03:12 AM
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Optimus557 is not online. Optimus557
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25 Dec 2011 03:14 AM
Published? Published in the 5th grade hall, probably.
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mitchz is not online. mitchz
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25 Dec 2011 03:21 AM
Optimus do you stalk me? XD
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mitchz is not online. mitchz
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25 Dec 2011 03:22 AM
But im in 6th grade. XD
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PointlessChris24 is not online. PointlessChris24
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28 Dec 2011 04:51 AM
Lol. Opitimus, it was probably in the 3RD GRADE hall.
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subbelowzero is not online. subbelowzero
Joined: 13 Sep 2008
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28 Dec 2011 04:58 AM
China wants there wall back.
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PointlessChris24 is not online. PointlessChris24
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28 Dec 2011 04:59 AM
Haha. No.

~The Derpy Man~
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wordlefan is not online. wordlefan
Joined: 07 May 2011
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28 Dec 2011 05:01 AM
Are you girl...? -falls asleep from lack of sleep-
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subbelowzero is not online. subbelowzero
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28 Dec 2011 05:01 AM
"Published"

Because everyone loves three page long books.
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Stanleyjustrocks is not online. Stanleyjustrocks
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28 Dec 2011 05:01 AM
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PointlessChris24 is not online. PointlessChris24
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28 Dec 2011 05:02 AM
Now that sir, is humor.
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