smilex
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| 17 Dec 2011 03:58 PM |
http://www.roblox.com/The-Secluded-Town-of-Hardesham-V-1-3-7-place?id=19500475
What I'm mainly looking for is feedback on the design of the mountain and the surroundings. Basically, the asthetic value of it.
Issues brought up before that I refuse to fix: 1. Able to see into mountain through cracks. (This would be way to time consuming for me to fix.) |
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| 17 Dec 2011 04:00 PM |
| Isn't this your 4th time posting this? |
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smilex
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| 17 Dec 2011 04:01 PM |
| Yes, but each time I don't get very helpful feedback. Also, where do I find the Fog settings? I can't find it anywhere. |
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| 17 Dec 2011 04:03 PM |
For the fog question: http://blog.roblox.com/archives/6398
Also what is your goal for this place? |
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smilex
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| 17 Dec 2011 04:04 PM |
| It will turn into a large PVP arena with exploration aspects as well. |
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smilex
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| 17 Dec 2011 04:08 PM |
| And thanks much for the link! I feel like a total idiot for not finding it before, but now it has that omninous feel to it that it didn't have before. |
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smilex
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| 17 Dec 2011 04:10 PM |
| If you were in it before, try again now that it's been updated. |
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| 17 Dec 2011 04:11 PM |
I honestly think that this place would be better for an RPG. If you also think you would like to this instead here are my recommendations: Add an exit button for the GUI shop, add different terrain features such as a lake, add Non Person Characters (NPCs) for quests, have certain sections for defeating bosses like a secret cave, and a changing time of day script. This is just some of my suggestions.
If you want it to remain a PVP arena, I recommend: Down-sizing the area, make the GUI shop have a bigger variety,add small one person vehicles, add secret places for hiding, have an exit button for the shop GUI, and make it a mega place (30 people). Also, maybe have an AFK button where it freezes the play yet gives them a force-field.
Hope I could help! |
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smilex
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| 17 Dec 2011 04:16 PM |
As for the secret places, you didn't look hard enough. ;3 There's 8 secret rooms.
As for NPC's, that can't really be possible since the town was long abandoned. Some poeple believe the shopkeeper wasn't one of the original settlers, but was instead someone who came across this place and set up shop.
Bosses and sentinent enemies may be harder to do, I'm not skilled with scripting. I may add spirit enemies and such, and a level system could be in order. The lake can be made for sure, though maybe not inground. |
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| 17 Dec 2011 04:32 PM |
| It's okay to add some free models. Don't overload though. I am just giving my suggestions, for what I think would make game-play more enjoyable. I think you should tweak the story so that the civilization starts again or something. When I meant secret rooms, yes I saw all of them (or most of them) but I meant something like I could just quickly slip into a little crevice then attack somebody from behind. |
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xne
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| 17 Dec 2011 04:35 PM |
I am a great scripter, If you need help with any scripting, Message me!
~Game Design |
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smilex
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| 17 Dec 2011 04:48 PM |
@Carnation: Oh I see now. I may add more terrain and ranged weapons outside. Also, I try to use as little free-models as possible. Right now the only thing not made by me in there is the shop script. All the rest was either retextured or built by me.
@XNE: Well I have a few lined up right now, so I'll PM you and we can work a deal. |
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smilex
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| 17 Dec 2011 06:46 PM |
| Bump. Still looking for feedback. Is the fog too much? |
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| 17 Dec 2011 06:49 PM |
When you have the lake, how about you CFrame into the base, that'd make it look much nicer.
( I hate it when the lakes look like swimming pools. >_< ) |
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smilex
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| 17 Dec 2011 06:56 PM |
| Explain what you mean by CFrame into the base. |
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| 17 Dec 2011 07:09 PM |
| Like, fix the blocks to make some sort of crater. Not a pool. But make it where there's a hole or something, make it look detailed, not a pool. |
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smilex
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| 17 Dec 2011 10:52 PM |
| I see. Well, that was the plan, which will continue tomorrow. ROBLOX's decline in making the building system better has frustrated me to the point of ragequitting. They tried to make it more friendly to new users, by taking out all convinient ways to edit your place. |
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