Imperius
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| 16 Dec 2011 10:08 PM |
Gunfire blazed in the distance. I managed to pick my head up, dazed, I looked around. There was debris everywhere, the Capital City was in ruins. The buildings were crumbling, there were large holes in the streets, and the battle was still being fought.
"Mason, can you hear me? Mason? MASON!" I heard someone yell. I turned over and looked up, it was Anderson, one of my squad mates. "Time's running out Mason, we need to get moving. We only have a few hours left!" he said. "Well, we better get started," I said as I began to get up.
I looked around the remains of the crashed helicopter. The pilot was dead, and I took his M4A1.
"Lock and Load" I said.
[Rate it so far, I was improvising the entire time as I read this.] |
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Celestus
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| 16 Dec 2011 10:13 PM |
[Continued]
Suddenly twenty hateful looking men with guns appeared, Mason knew it was over... Then all of a sudden Celestus appears, shooting through the sky like an arrow shot by Apollo himself, he fearlessly lands onto the ground causing the ground beneath to shake. The men then lose their balance and three of them trip and obtain fatal head injuries. Celestus then pulls the gun off of Mason and takes out the remaining seventeen gunmen as they observe in awe.
It turns out Mason was a terrorist and the twenty men were simply legitimate policeman. Well the morale of this story is don't jump to conclusions. |
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Celestus
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Imperius
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| 16 Dec 2011 10:16 PM |
What?
No, that's not at all what happens.
The story is about a group of soldiers stuck in a capital city as they try to deactivate a nuclear launch facility aimed at several, important locations. |
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Celestus
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| 16 Dec 2011 10:18 PM |
my story is far better, more original and will appeal to the masses.
sure you can be a small-time punk trying to bid off his novels for the left overs in a pint glass. but with the right woman, there's no stopping me. I could go right to the top. |
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Imperius
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| 16 Dec 2011 10:22 PM |
Your story lasts about a paragraph...
That's just a beginning to my story |
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Celestus
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| 16 Dec 2011 10:23 PM |
'my story'
oh so your taking all of the credit now are you?
well that dont float with me sunshine. let me tell you ive dealt with plenty of crooks like u and trust me u aint gonna be the last. |
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Celestus
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| 16 Dec 2011 10:30 PM |
And then everyone died.
The end. |
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