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| 16 Dec 2011 08:23 PM |
I am trying to write more to my story... But I just can't think right now...
Anyone want to help me with my book??
~Buh- Bye~ |
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MangoJack
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:24 PM |
THINK OF IDEAS THEN IDEAS INSIDE THE IDEA THEN THINK OF INCEPTION |
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roman117
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:25 PM |
| Just go do something else; you might get an idea. |
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:26 PM |
well to start you might want to learn how to spell worth a damn |
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:26 PM |
Title fix is fake.
/trollface |
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:27 PM |
| Take a break and take a hot shower. |
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roman117
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:28 PM |
"Take a break and take a hot shower."
How's that going to help? |
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:29 PM |
@roman It won't He just wants to watch her in the shower. |
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:29 PM |
Sorry about the title.
Basically it is about a teen formed terrorist group that causes corruption among the world in large ways. They have asked Aiden Hearshmen to join them because they know he is elite. But Aiden is hesitant Because they are being paid to do something that will kill millions, even his own 'family'. But he has come to trust them, as they have trusted him too, and he finds it hard, and maybe impossible, to betray them...
~Buh- Bye~ |
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roman117
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mack118
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:31 PM |
| have them try to do it then he kills a coulpel of them and hides then they try to find them |
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Boeing717
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:31 PM |
>teen formed terrorist group
Motives? If you can't think of any motives for the group, it's not worth continuing the story. |
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lion9031
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:41 PM |
~BuhThere motive is to bomb a meeting of some really important people. Rich, powerful, people that will be listened too. I am still trying to figure out who is going to hire them... Probably some rich person I can think of...
@ lion, No thanks... |
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:46 PM |
| Why do they want to bomb the meeting? What was the original motive for the founding of the group? |
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