dudeguy12
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| 16 Dec 2011 07:56 PM |
December 16, 2011 Mission Time: 0653 Sector Oscar-Bravo 332, Afghanistan United States Army Reserve Pvt., Roy L. Miller
Roy sat in the back of a crowded and dark LAV-25. His shaking fingers clutched a photograph of a dark haired boy and a blonde young woman. Across the bottom was written “Lone Star”, a memory to their first daughter’s favorite artist. “Miller, stop slacking off.” The Sergeant was clearly heard as the rest of the squad left the safety of the Bradley. Roy stood in a half-crouch and walked out of the back of the LAV, careful not to slip up on his first mission. The heat of an Afghan village took him by surprise and he grimaced. The whole squad moved through a series of alley ways, littered with garbage and rubble from careless civilians. The Corporal remarked, “What a s**t-hole.” Roy continued to think about his family and then it happened. “Contact! Contact! Three PLR, 2:00!” Roy scrambled to disengage the safety of his standard issue M16A3 Assault Rifle. He shouldered the weapon and fired two shots. “Watch those grenades!” Fire, shrapnel, and hot lead filled the area around Roy’s position. A Private was hit in the shoulder and then in the chest, about five times. Blood splattered onto Roy’s face and the surrounding walls as a PFC was sent to the pearly gates by an HE Grenade. “Miller! Get up and DO something!” Roy tried to stand up and was hit in the right knee by an AK-47, typical insurgent armament. He clutched his bloody fatigues and was forced to watch his Sergeant get riddled with bullets from an RPK. An insurgent with a bandolier tied around his chest turned the corner and struck Roy in the face with the stock of his rifle. Roy fell to the ground and the bright muzzle flash was the last thing he saw….
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dudeguy12
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:27 PM |
This sucks like crap.
You know why?
BECAUSE YOU STOLE IT FROM BATTLEFIELD 3! |
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OldMan207
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:40 PM |
Ok let me extend upon the story:
Roy, a magnaminous role-model, took it upon himself to review the questions on tonights homework,
"Aye, it ain't quite the quenched lil' thin' ain't it eh?" He said with a glimmer in his crusty, dry eyes.
"Duhyes" |
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roman117
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:45 PM |
| WOW FAIL YOU TOOK THIS FROM MODERN WARFARE 3. NOW YOU ARE GOING TO GET SUED BECAUSE YOU TOOK THEIR STORYLINE PLOT... WOW NOOB. |
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dudeguy12
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:56 PM |
"WOW FAIL YOU TOOK THIS FROM MODERN WARFARE 3. NOW YOU ARE GOING TO GET SUED BECAUSE YOU TOOK THEIR STORYLINE PLOT... WOW NOOB."
You sir, are a fail troll.
For those that said I copied Battlefield 3, yes it is based on it, actually just the fact that the PLR, which are also real life terrorists, is the only thing I got from Battlefield... |
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| 16 Dec 2011 08:59 PM |
Dudeguy12: Hmm? Calling me a fail troll when you can even right a decent paragraph. Go back to school you idiot, and maybe learn something.
Idiot. |
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| 16 Dec 2011 09:08 PM |
HAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Yeti, you fail at life and should go back to your box house in the alleyway. |
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dudeguy12
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| 17 Dec 2011 10:16 PM |
"Dudeguy12: Hmm? Calling me a fail troll when you can even right a decent paragraph. Go back to school you idiot, and maybe learn something."
Calling me an idiot when you can't even spell 'write' correctly. End of discussion.
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