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| 12 Nov 2011 11:30 PM |
You were an experiment, but remember only the dark days of being tested on in a place you called 'The School'.You finally escaped and plan on getting your life back on track.You are chased from every spot you touch to the end of your fingertips.They want you back badly.Can you make it pass a bunch of Erasers, mad scientists, and other villians on your path?
Max Powers:3
~CS~ Name: Fake Name:(If meeting up with humans.) Experiment:(What kind of experiment were you?Winged, dog, cat, etc..) A.ge: Gender: Powers:(like mind reading, telekinesis, fire control, water control, etc..) Personality: Bio: Appearance: Other:
~My CS~ Name:Angel Darks Fake Name:Kate Darwin Experiment:half hawk(makes her half one red eye), A.ge:16 Gender:Female Powers:Controls dark power, mind control,telepath Personality:sweet, kind, sense of humor, can be serious when needs to,when angry red eye glows(as in she wants to kill the one that made her mad but no killing) Bio:N/A Appearance:She has straight blonde/brown hair, one red eye the other icey,torn up skinny jeans, white tank top,red torn converse, a red hawk necklace(to go with her eye) Other: |
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banshee7
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| 12 Nov 2011 11:31 PM |
| *Shoots thread* Overused Cliches are taking over Roblox. This is most overused of them all. |
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| 12 Nov 2011 11:38 PM |
| Not many people like threads that are copied from books. Make up your own thread, and it will thrive. |
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| 12 Nov 2011 11:40 PM |
| We are not hating you, we are giving you critique. Please accept the criticism and don't pull the pity card. |
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banshee7
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| 12 Nov 2011 11:40 PM |
| (I wasn't planning on continuing, for your information. Also, These Maximum Ride things really are overused on the RP forums. I've seen about 15 Maximum Ride RPs, and 7 remakes. In the last week. I was just saying Maximum Ride/ Bird People is overused.) |
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banshee7
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| 12 Nov 2011 11:52 PM |
Try something orignal. Example:
Insect-Like aliens invade. They release headcrab-like bugs that cover peoples heads, taking over their bodies. In some occasions, it turns human body parts into bug parts. Killer virus escapes lab. Zombies, Bugs, and Zombified Bug Men attack. The International Virus and Extraterrestrial Infastation Defence Force, (IVEIDF, or Inveedif, as it is sometimes called) kills them and saves the Earth. Or, for additional plot twist, they do- Then they don't. The aliens return, and destroy most of the IVEIDF. They leave again, and Earth is a wasteland of zombes and bugs. |
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Sahanke
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| 12 Nov 2011 11:53 PM |
(Only fun I ever had was when my friend did a Book report on Maximum Ride... Friend:"And these kids, get expirimented on and they get wings!" Me: "Did they drink a Red bull?" |
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| 12 Nov 2011 11:54 PM |
| (I only made this because I was asked to and because the other one I was in got ruined!! So I made a new one.) |
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Seblene
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| 13 Nov 2011 12:16 AM |
(I'm going to make a post because I'm nice! =D)
N@me: Krystal Lucet Fake N@me: Cassie Moon Experiment: A half-raven (She has black wings that some shine a purplish-blue color when sunlight shines onto them.) A.ge: 13 Gender: F Powers: She can turn into a shadow, and control wind.
Personality: She likes to keep to herself. She's a bit shy around strangers, and doesn't like being in the middle of a large crowd or group of people she doesn't know very well. But she is a very nice and helpful person if you get to know her.
Bio: Her mom disappeared when she was 6, the police suspected a murder, and she lived with her dad and two older siblings, Molly (15) and Josh (17). Her dad had to work full-time as a bank guard to earn enough money to take care of Krystal and her two siblings. They lived in a small 2-bedroom apartment building, Krystal had to sleep on the couch and Josh slept on the floor in a sleeping bag, while Molly and dad took the two bedrooms. They were a good family, hardly ever mean to each other. Then Molly's dad got killed in a fire, Josh ran away, and Molly got into a car crash and went into a coma. (YAY! HAPPY ENDING!!! Thank you, thank you very much.)
Appearance: She's 5' 3" and weighs 102lbs. She has violet eyes that sometimes turn a lighter blue color. She has short, chin-length blonde hair that gets shorter in the back, with two shoulder-length strips of hair on either side that she dyed black at the bottom, with bangs that hang across her forehead. She has light skin. She wears a black shirt with purple edging (Around the neckline, sleeves.), gray jean shorts, and black knee-high boots with buckles.
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banshee7
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| 13 Nov 2011 12:22 AM |
(Sorry, The RP Forums ban: -Modern Expression -Human Rights -Romance -Being nice (<-- Right there!) -Epicness)
(Just kidding) |
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Seblene
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| 13 Nov 2011 12:38 AM |
| (XD! Wow...you know, 5 of those 5 rules are broken on 99.99% of RPs.) |
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| 13 Nov 2011 12:41 AM |
| (Human rights are given up technically once you join ROBLOX.) |
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| 13 Nov 2011 06:36 AM |
Name: Luce Fake Name: Bailey Nonthrop (lol) Experiment: Bat wings with fang teeth? A.ge: 14 Gender: Female Powers: Mind reading Personality: Cautious. But likes to have fun every now and then. Bio: (um i was tested on?) Appearance: Shoulder legth wavy black hair and pale green eyes. Likes to wear black things, and shortish layered skirts. Other: (um... shrug) Likes birds.
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| 13 Nov 2011 06:37 AM |
| (oh and iwas kept alone at all times when being tested on.) |
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| 13 Nov 2011 08:37 AM |
| im good at plots i can make you one...anyways i gotta go to church so il join when i get back :P |
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| 13 Nov 2011 08:38 AM |
| of course, you already know i think alot differently than you, so i mightmake something sciency XD |
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| 13 Nov 2011 11:12 AM |
| (All three accepted and all three admins.) |
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| 13 Nov 2011 11:15 AM |
| (cool. So where should e start exactly?) |
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| 13 Nov 2011 11:17 AM |
| (You start like you running and then you wake up.) |
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zachbl
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| 13 Nov 2011 11:21 AM |
~CS~ Name: John Ryan higonsin Fake Name: John! Experiment: Have you read the book, human with 2% avian! A.ge: 13 Gender: Male Powers: He doesn't know yet... Personality: Meet Him! Bio:....... Appearance: I will go get a pic! Other: Nope!
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| 13 Nov 2011 11:22 AM |
| (Please hurry on the pic and tell me your personality please.) |
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