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| 13 Dec 2011 07:40 PM |
Once upon a time there was a girl named Elske. She was overall a happy person, but she was a little lonely. She wasn't sure if her friends were true. Sometimes it seemed like no one cared. Yes, sometimes Elske felt very sad indeed. One day, she was taking a walk on her own. She wasn't watching where she was going, and she bumped into someone. "Sorry! I wasn't looking!" She said. "It's okay," The boy replied. "My name's Bing." "I'm Elske." They started talking, and soon they were friends. Bing did more than he would ever know for Elske. And she wants to thank him for it.
~The End~
This is dedicated to my best friend, even though he probably won't see it. It's also for everyone who veried from the norm and decided to try putting up with me. Thanks much! |
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Venrate
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| 13 Dec 2011 07:44 PM |
| Thanks for constructive criticizm. Elske and Bing are not the real names, by the way. I just didn't want to use actual names. |
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| 13 Dec 2011 07:50 PM |
Lol I was about to say.. Who in this universe who can make a though would name their child Elske or Bing?!
~Hippies Are Hippos~
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| 13 Dec 2011 07:51 PM |
Good start.
good day gentlemen |
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lib4by39
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| 13 Dec 2011 08:10 PM |
| Thanks, lib! And Bing and Elske are German, Elske means "devoted to God" and I...Don't know what Bing means. :) |
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