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| 07 Dec 2011 04:27 PM |
your poem is miss a bit hit n miss no rythm, no rhyme no beat, no time have another try or let sleeping dogs lie it's all up to you but i wont read it if you do
and this one:
She whispered "will it hurt me?" "Of course not" answered he "It's a very simple process, You can rely on me."
She said "I'm very frightened, I've not had this before. My friend has had it five times And said it can be sore."
It was growing rather painful Tears formed in her eyes It was hurting quite a bit now It must have been a size.
"Calm yourself" he whispered "His face filled with a grin "Try and open wider So I can get it in."
"It's coming now" he whispered "I know" she cried in bliss Feeling it deep within her now She said "I am glad I'm having this."
And with a final effort She gave a frightened shout He gripped it in anguish And quickly pulled it out.
She lay back quite contended Sighed and gave a smile She said "I'm glad I came now You made it worth my while."
------ She then came back from the dentist. The results was good. |
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| 07 Dec 2011 06:28 PM |
Roses are Blue Violets are Red Zombies are Green And they're going for your Head!
~@# The Enrichment Center regrets to inform you that this next test is impossible. #@~ |
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