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| 06 Dec 2011 03:11 PM |
This is a made up story. Yes. :) I know this story will suck, in many ways. But I apreciate you for reading my story. It's called The First Day Of RAT. Thanks:
I stood at the dock with a friend of mine, called Jark. We slowly entered the plane with exitement. It was going to be our first day joining RAT. The plane moved forward, making it's way to the RAT enterance. But, I knew something was going to happen. It just clicked at me.
"Wake up!" Said jukk
"Wha - ...'
"VAKtovians!" Shouted a clear voice from the pilot.
My eyes opened wide. I ran to the armoury, I had no clue what the guns were called. I took a cylone and a pulse with me. I gave Jark the pulse.
"We need to get out of here!" Jark said
I know there was someway I could get out. Alive. I suddenly smelt strong smoke. A huge ammount of fire caught the corner of my eye. A VAK plane went passed. I turned around...
"JARK?" I yelled
I looked down and unexpecting saw him on the floor with blood dripping from his head. But that wasn't it - Everyone was dieing... I just noticed the plane was crashing on flames down on the see.
-Part 2 coming out soon. This story isn't a good one. It's crap. Really. Seriously. :u. Thanks for reading.
-KTTDS |
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| 06 Dec 2011 03:14 PM |
| u need me in it to make it seem coolerrr it's not too bad |
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voss99
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| 06 Dec 2011 03:34 PM |
Add me to part 2.
That will make all the difference.
I'll be that random wise stranger. |
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| 07 Dec 2011 01:37 PM |
Err. RAT Members only
-KTTDS |
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voss99
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| 07 Dec 2011 02:59 PM |
-10/10
DUn liek et.
~ZGMF-X10A VS ZGMF-X20A Who wins?~ |
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| 07 Dec 2011 03:00 PM |
adm me to it then
FUN FUN FUN ON THE WEEKENDS WEEKENDS |
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patgogo12
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| 07 Dec 2011 03:01 PM |
add me*
FUN FUN FUN ON THE WEEKENDS WEEKENDS |
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