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CVW is not online. CVW
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23 Sep 2011 10:53 AM
I have nothing against the clans in this story, I will try to be as non biased as possible. This story is for pure entertainment and reading, not for flaming. Posts calling this pointless or stupid will be ignored, those offering writing suggestions are warmly welcome.



Prologue:
[Keldin Airbase, Northern Pentecosta ,0630 hours]
The sun is slowly moving out from behind the horizon, while multiple crates are loaded on transport aircraft, bound for bases around the country. Soldiers man their posts around the base while the morning bugle call is sounding over the speakers. Base technicians work to fix a broken radar dish as helicopters patrol the airspace around the area. A normal morning at this particular base, but the day might hold unknown surprises........
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23 Sep 2011 10:57 AM
Chapter 1:
[Keldin Airbase, 0900 hours]
A light rain falls as two K-25 ground attack aircraft lift off from the runway, bound for WIJ territory. Heavily laden with bombs and rockets, the planes use up over half the runway before lifting into the air. Banking left, they fly towards WIJ territory. Just then, a MW25 cargo aircraft, with one engine on fire, swoops over a hill, nearly hitting the fence bordering the airbase, five seconds later it slams into the runway, and slides fifty yards. As it slows down and stops, fire rescue crews approach the aircraft. The rear ramp opens and the disheveled crew climbed out of the crashed plane.
We---- we were hit by some sort of missile----- came out of nowhere-------our hydraulics failed-----so we headed in this direction-------we were praying that we at least reached----this place, thank God, the pilot said. Do you know where the missile was fired from?, the base commander said. No, but whatever it was it wasn't affected by chaff or flares, the pilot said. This is a problem.....the commander said, we should investigate immediately.....................................................
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Deathjason06 is not online. Deathjason06
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23 Sep 2011 10:59 AM
I did read it. ^^
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CVW is not online. CVW
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23 Sep 2011 11:01 AM
Chapter 2 [next morning]
[200 miles north of Castle Cobalt, 0200 hours]
Multiple aircraft assemble into large formations over the ocean in groups of 5 and 10.
Several miles away at Cobalt, a small band of special forces members lead by General "Divot" Jones (aka Gallade) moves into position to perform recon on the enemy fortifications.

[50 miles north of Castle Cobalt, 0600 hours]
2 small helicopters fly over the ocean at around 150 miles per hour, just behind them is a massive strike package of over 100 planes, and 20 landing craft.

[Castle Cobalt ,0700 hours]
I bird chirps in one of the trees, as 4 small planes fly over the ocean. The WIJ base commander spots them. "I see four specks on the horizon, hand me those binoculars." he said,"I see 4 planes, unknown type approaching fast. Dont fire they could be ours." The bird chirped again, then there was a massive explosion which knocked everyone off their feet. "What in the heck was that?!?" the commander yelled. As he picks himself(and the binoculars) up he sees(and hears) a formation of attack aircraft diving on the fortress. He walks over to the edge of the wall, and hears a gunshot. Suddenly he falls backwards clutching his leg. One of Gallade's men had sniped him, hitting his leg. He hears a rocket launch, followed by a loud pop as the rocket exploded. "This is going to be a long battle" he said to himself. Then he blacked out.
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23 Sep 2011 11:04 AM
Chapter 3
[Castle Cobalt, 1100 hours]
"What the....where am I, who are you", the WIJ commander said. "Your at Castle Cobalt Sick Bay, and im Lieutenant Anderson the one who shot your leg,"said the Lieutenenat. "Oh now I remember", the commander said,"How are you in here exactly?"
"You haven't heard?" Jones said, "We captured the fortress. We are just going to occupy it for a short amount of time and move on. You can have it back as soon as we are done" he said smiling. "In the meanwhile, get some rest."

[Keldin Airbase, Exact same time]

"You still haven't been able to find the guidance system?",said the base commander.
"No sir we haven't" the technician said. "This presents a problem",the commander said. Just then the radio crackled to life. "Sir! Sir we found it!"said the voice."It looks like a Vaktovian Empire missile tracking system." "What?!", the technician said.
"Are you sure?" "As sure as we can be sir" the voice said. "OK bring it in" the technician said."This presents a major problem, if it is a Vaktovian guidance system then we may be invaded any day" he said to the commander. "Contact our northern cities, tell them to be on alert",the commander said. "Yes sir" the technician said. He raced off to complete the task.............
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voss100 is not online. voss100
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23 Sep 2011 11:07 AM
Will be UAF in it?
If so, I will read it.
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CVW is not online. CVW
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23 Sep 2011 11:17 AM
Chapter 4
[Castle Cobalt, 1300 hours]
A small patrol speedboat sits offshore of a small town near Castle Cobalt.
The radar scans a 15 mile radius, and it is just one of many radar stations around the Castle Occupation Force. The radar doesn't even register what happens next....

[Castle Cobalt, 1340 hours]
A small ballistic object rockets through the sky at over mach 2. Its nosecone is solid metal and the rest is filled with Kortex High Explosive. As it reaches the fortress it climbs to 40000 feet, and suddenly dives. 3 soldiers on the ground hear a whistling noise and rush to the air raid siren, but it was too late, the guided missile punches through the ceiling with a loud crashing noise, and lands in sick bay. Alarms sound all over the east side of the castle as multiple soldiers try to evacuate the sick bay.
Suddenly the missile detonates, ripping deadly shrapnel and chunks of concrete flooring through the air. Multiple soldiers are killed, including the WIJ commander and 12 WIJ captives in the adjacent room.
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CVW is not online. CVW
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23 Sep 2011 11:18 AM
@voss

I cant give out my story line, but UAF might be in it.
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CVW is not online. CVW
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23 Sep 2011 11:48 AM
bump

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voss100 is not online. voss100
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23 Sep 2011 01:02 PM
Mkay.
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26 Sep 2011 07:48 PM
bump
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CVW is not online. CVW
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04 Oct 2011 09:48 AM
bump..........

Going to write another chapter/part soon.
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05 Nov 2011 09:30 PM
Chapter 5 (5 months later)
[PAF Fort McHenry, 0700 hours]

SargeantVau slowly walks through the frigid morning air while the sun slowly rises over a snowy horizon. "Good morning", he says to me.
"Good morning indeed", I said, "the winter sun looks absolutely brilliant and the sky is cloudless." "Any news up here?" Gallade says as he climbs up the ladder.
"No", I said,"just watching the town and the gate" "Ok, well ill just take a seat and drink my coffie", Gallade said, "Hey whats that?"
"Whats what?", vau said. "Oh that! It looks like an airliner." Suddenly Gallade flinches. "Whats the matter?" I ask. "I hear explosions", he says. He stands up. A soldier hauls himself to the top of the ladder and hands me a radio."Sir",he said. "You had better hear this."
I take the radio from his hand, smiling. As I hold the radio to my ear, my smile fades. A loud booming noise comes out of the radio, followed by a soldier yelling. Suddenly a different soldiers voice comes through the radio. "Sir, sixteen WIJ tanks and around fifty infantry units are advancing on our positions!"
Gallade spits his coffie out, "WHAT?!", he yells.
The soldier on the radio stopped a second. The he continued. "They attacked us by surprise, we had no warning. We cant hold them, so we are falling back to the fort. We need you to cover us as we retreat! Ian out!" "Ok!", I shouted. "Im sending in some support! Just keep clear of their troops!" I radio to the artillery battery above the fort.
"Adjust trajectory and compensate for the wind, we need to cover our retreating units! Three, two, one, FIRE!" A loud boombing noise erupts from behind us as the guns open up. Five miles away at the entrance area to the city, the shells impact their targets. "Holy.....!", Ian yells. "Keep going! Keep going!"
Back at the fort, Gallade sips his coffie again. Suddenly two K-25UT's rip over the fortress with a loud whooshing noise. "I love when they do that", vau said.
"Yeah", Gallade said. "I just hope our guys are out of the way when they bomb the enemy units, or they will have a problem."
Four miles away, the soldiers are retreating through a field.
Ian glances back over his shoulder. Suddenly he laughs. "Hey guys, one of their tanks got stuck in a lake!" He sees two lights on the horizon.
"Ho ho, what have we here?" He says. He pulls out his binoculars and looks through them. " Two K-25's heading this way! Lets watch the fireworks!"
Bright flashes erupt from beneath the both planes wings. Twelve seconds later an explosion rocks the snowy ground, as the anit tank missiles slam into the ground. Ian whoops with joy.
The planes bank in a right turn over the snowy earth, and re-align with the target. Bright flashes erupt from beneath the nose of the planes and a stream of bullets streaks through the sky.
Four more tanks explode. The planes get closer, and they release their bombs. The two cluster bombs and four 1000 lb bombs slam into a group of five tanks, wiping them out completely.
The soldiers cheer loudly. Suddenly emerging from the smoke, were the rest of the enemy tanks! They charge towards the Pentecostans at high speed. The lead tank's driver was grinning at Ian.
Ian whips out an assault rifle and begins to fire at the tank, but he catches something out of the corner of his eye and begins to run like a mad-man. The K-25's had come around and were now bearing down on the tanks with their all purpose missiles and their heavy cannons.
After they had completed their pass, and the smoke blew away,revealing the smoking scrap metal that was left.
Ian walks up to the tank he had been shooting at, and picks up a shell from the K-25 that had embedded itself into the tank instead of exploding. He carried it with him as he retreated with his troops.
The rest of the morning went on unneventfull (other than Gallades coffie mug being broken by a careless private on KP duty).




I decided to have a big chapter to bump this thread. RMR and VAK will soon join the story line.
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CVW is not online. CVW
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05 Nov 2011 09:37 PM
By the way, if you like it, comment. Your feedback is welcome.
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05 Nov 2011 09:42 PM
I like it, esspecialy the last chapter
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05 Nov 2011 09:44 PM
Thanks.
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05 Nov 2011 09:45 PM
Was the mug his favorite?
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CVW is not online. CVW
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05 Nov 2011 09:46 PM
Second favorite.
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06 Nov 2011 04:49 AM
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SilentSwords is online. SilentSwords
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06 Nov 2011 04:52 AM
i like how you think a modern military can defeat a futuristic military in no time

other than that, good story.

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CVW is not online. CVW
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06 Nov 2011 05:05 AM
Sheer luck I guess.


Btw thanks, im glad people are enjoying it.
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06 Nov 2011 05:41 AM
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06 Nov 2011 06:22 AM
Add RSO in it CVW and we can have some real fireworks. New guns, new bases, new tech.
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CVW is not online. CVW
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06 Nov 2011 10:35 AM
k
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06 Nov 2011 03:59 PM
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