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| 29 Nov 2011 02:26 PM |
I can post it if you want, and I'll post the image link incase anyone wants it.
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| 29 Nov 2011 02:31 PM |
K, let me go find my notebook...then type it all paragraph by paragraph.
NOTE: I saw that "Bea the Killer" pasta, and thought it looked terrible...another mash-up Happy Appy rip off...
Be right back.
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| 29 Nov 2011 02:33 PM |
| I don't know why, but Happy Appy is the scariest Pasta I've read. O_o I've read Suicide Mouse, Squidward's Suicide, Dead Bodies Everywhere, and tons of those like that. :| |
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| 29 Nov 2011 02:40 PM |
I read "Squidward" and jumped. Don't bring it up....I don't want to bring up what happened last nightANYWAY, I have my notebook! Here is the beginning: -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Everyone knows Disney Channel, the classic channel now ruined by unhumourous shows and such, but recently, I got into the show "Fish Hooks". I found it's humor reasonable and such, but also met the creator, Noah Z. Jones last week at a party. I told him how much of a fan I was, and that I loved the characters and everything, yet I wanted to know more about Bea, the female main character. He stopped immediatley, shivered, and left, as if he was in a rush. He gave me a hard drive, and I went home to plug it in. There was one file called "Bea.png" and "Bea.avi" (NOTE: This isn't the name of the story, [Bea.avi]).
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| 29 Nov 2011 02:46 PM |
I ignored the .png file, and was more interested in the movie file. A unreleased/lost episode perhaps? Being the die-hard fan as I was, I loaded the file, and hit play. The intro was cut out, but I didn't really care. The title card appeared, and I found a lot of odd things. First of all, the episode was entitled "Bea's Rampage", as if she was mad or something. A few other things were: There was a fire in the background, which I found weird because they were underwater, everything except the name was tinted a dark red, and there was a skeleton of a fish hanging by the eye on a hook. I kinda starting to get creeped out by all of those items, and continued the episode. The usual "Bud's Pet Store" had all it's windows busted out, a CONDEMED sign, and the usual happy music wasn't added. The scene faded into the fish tanks. The city looked horrible. Ruined buildings, dead fish people (I saw a few main characters such as Clamantha, Finberly, etc.), organs hung by lamp posts, blood stains, it made me want to vomit. I couldn't believe what I was watching.
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| 29 Nov 2011 02:56 PM |
The beggining seems like a ripoff of dead bart. ._. |
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| 29 Nov 2011 02:56 PM |
I guess I'll continue, with only one vote. ----------------------------------------------
The screen cut to black for literally half of a second, and I saw a back shot view of Bea slowly, but weirdly, walking into the doors of a damaged Freshwater High. She span around fastly, and I almost crapped my pants at her face. [Insert my photo here] She was smiling, he hair was a mess, both eyes black, right red pupil crying blood, and the other had her eye hanging out. I lost it, and vomited. I kept watching. She yelled SO loudly, but I could make out these words: "COME OUT, OSCAR AND MILO! HAHAHA!!!". She ran around the school at a fast rate, crying blood, and smiling, holding a knife. She stopped, and put her hand to her ear (Do fish even have ears?). She heard whimpering. She whammed open a locker, to reveal Milo crying and staring in horror. I couldn't believe it. She stabbed him 3 times, decappitated him, and tossed his lifeless corpse on the floor, laughing. The screen cut to Oscar in his bedroom, crying on the floor. Not just that normal, fake cry. It was that loud ear-piercing cry that pains to hear.
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| 29 Nov 2011 02:56 PM |
@Person who said Dead Bart
I'm sorry, I tried my best not to copy another creepypasta, but I couldn't think of a good opening.
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| 29 Nov 2011 02:58 PM |
| Continue! It's good so far! Not that scary to me (Especially after I read Happy Appy which showed me what true fear was) |
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| 29 Nov 2011 03:02 PM |
The beginning sounds like a rip-off of a old Creepypasta I saw once. Something like "Stopbreathing.avi" or something...
Also, I don't know if it's the atmosphere, or what, but this seems pretty lame. |
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| 29 Nov 2011 03:02 PM |
Oh, but more.
It seems like a nice little story. |
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| 29 Nov 2011 03:06 PM |
K...I'll upload the pic after I end this, which is soon. ----------------------------------------------------------
I kind of felt bad for Oscar, feeling how your crush turned into a physcotic murderer. He slowly, limply, floated to his dresser, opened a drawer to reveal a rope, knife, and photo of Bea. He threw the knife at the wall, still crying, and held up the photo of Bea to his face. He cried louder and louder, and it rang in my ear for a good 3 minutes. I closed my eyes, crying, and looked back at the screen. Oscar was hung, by the top of his bed with his dead brother laying beneath him. I noticed Oscar was still holding the photo of Bea, and there was no sound at this point. My speakers were still working. The camera zoomed in to the photo of Bea, with Oscar's fin at the top, and a drop of blood dripped on the photo. It also did one of those things where there's a black shape (In this case, a heart) and shrunk onto the photo. The video ended. I stared at my screen. My favorite show ruined, and never to be watched by me again. I walked to my room, quietly, and got all the Fish Hooks items I owned, and burned them into a fire. I will never forget that episode, of my favorite show, that still haunts me today.
End. I'll upload the photo too.
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| 29 Nov 2011 03:09 PM |
http://www.roblox.com/Bea1-item?id=66727372
I made the photo in like 6 minutes, it's not "scary" or "good" perhaps, but it's a first.
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| 29 Nov 2011 03:17 PM |
BUMP
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| 29 Nov 2011 03:18 PM |
Is the photo done loading for any of you?
Rate my story. 1 - 10
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| 29 Nov 2011 03:20 PM |
| 6. Not too scary but a little scary. =3 I couldn't take much horror at one point, but since I'm torturing myself with Creepys I'm much tougher. |
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