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Re: Battlefront - The Big War - (Story)

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danial828 is not online. danial828
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28 Nov 2011 03:00 PM
Well, I'm Corporal Thomas. I'm in the 48th Battalion of the U.S.M.C, United States Marine Corps.

I'm going to tell you how the war began, as a quick briefing;

Heres the timeline;

2012- Japan and China signed a treay, Stating that they're not allowed to attack each other for 4 years.

2013- Japan, China, North Korea and Vietnam form an alliance. The U.A.C.A
(United Asian Countries Alliance)

2014- U.A.C.A Attack Australia, causing global conflict as the United Kingdom and United States join in, creating the A.F.U (Allied Forces Unit).

2016- Russia is voted the most powerful country in the world, U.A.C.A wish to change this, Russia makes a new alliance U.S.S.R (Union of Soviet Socialists Republics), Germany, France and Poland join this Alliance.

2017- U.S.S.R Promises not to attack the A.F.U, causing a 2 on 1 war against the U.A.C.A

2018- The Southern American Empire is left out, causing massive disturbances. As always the Militia has to get involved, Brazillian and Argentinian Militia join the war, but as the Southern American Empire (S.A.E)

The U.S.M.C is the fourth most elite branch of soldiers in the A.F.U, Which we serve and protect our innocent allies. U.S.S.R is also our allies, but the Southern American Empire isn't, their going on about signing with U.A.C.A.
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danial828 is not online. danial828
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28 Nov 2011 03:19 PM
Day 1 - 2nd January 2019
United States Marine Corps.
48th Battalion (Devils Children)
Leader of Squad: Lt. Jefferson
Sydney, Australia

I walked upon the empty streets, spotting nothing but wreckage from bombings and battles. The Australian Rebellion hadn't done much of a job, they lost every battle they did. The most tragic thing is that the Queen of England has refused to allow extra troops to help Australia. But the troops that are in are allowed to stay, also the Queen is adding the S.A.S to help this place out.

Our Navy Seals are sorting out a crisis with a Nuclear Submarine off the coast of the Great Barrier reef. But my job is to defend Sydney, at all costs.

First of all, a Scout came round from the 20th Battalion, saying that basically theirs 4 U.A.C.A tanks coming round with atleast 5,000 soldiers. "Hit the dirt!" I yelled, as a shell from the tank came flying towards me and my squad. I was flew 13ft in the air, straight through a window into a building.

10-15 Minutes Lt. Jefferson picked me up, I slowly awoken from the Knocked Out part. I was being carried towards an underground base dug by the resistance. Aparently the battle had happened when I was knocked out, We only just fended off the U.A.C.A.

I woke up fully on a blanket in the underground tunnel. I asked a resistance member where my squad was, they were up the tunnel at a grassland. They were fighting to retake Sydney Opera house.
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videogamesteelers43 is not online. videogamesteelers43
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28 Nov 2011 03:45 PM
Don't mean to discourage ya mate, but you have some major plotholes. The thing I noticed the most was japan and and the U.S.S.R.; I mean, really? The first nation to begin real liberty and regarded as the 2nd most 'free' country would join a former communist nation, a nation with major population problems, and the biggest eastern europe nation in a seperate alliance from the United States, the single most powerful country in the world, in an attempt to overtake the most major asiatic countries within the past century? [excluding india] and at a time when revolts are happening more often within the country, after a recession, I mean really?! What are you thinking! We already have alliances. NATO and the UN! NATO consists of most all countries that resided west of the berlin wall in the 1950s and is considered the 'western world'. Oh, and how can a debt-strapped, alco---ic nation become the most powerful country within the span 7 years!? and at a time when there had been no war to exchange power?! WTF!? And since when did a FREE country like japan, the single most electronically advanced nation on earth I should add, ally with actually communists!? Who in their right minds would tolerate this?! Did the U.K. and the U.S. give up on being proactive in the world? Did france have a radical socialist movement that impacted germany somehow? Did japan suffer from financial debt!?!! MATE! LISTEN! No RP is ever gonna fly with a plot this bad. I'm saying this so you'll put more effort into your next RP, not to diminish the good facts about it, mainly the way you presented it, and the fact that you did actually research some things. But mate, at least refresh yourself in social studies on how politics impact war. Because that's the only way war can be achieved. Please heed my advice and make this a better RP. Im asking though. Not demanding, not forcing anything. So please re-write this.
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danial828 is not online. danial828
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28 Nov 2011 04:17 PM
Dude, its the first thing that came to my mind, sorry for it not being perfect..
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videogamesteelers43 is not online. videogamesteelers43
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28 Nov 2011 04:19 PM
I never asked you to be.
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isherloxi is not online. isherloxi
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28 Nov 2011 04:33 PM
Video

it's a story not real life
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videogamesteelers43 is not online. videogamesteelers43
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28 Nov 2011 04:37 PM
exactly my point. a story needs to be plausible if it's realistic fiction. Which is what all military RPs are. If it's just plain fiction I don't care. And I already said I was ASKING him to re-write it. So stop treating me like I'm a troll.
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isherloxi is not online. isherloxi
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28 Nov 2011 05:22 PM
Most real stories that are books aren't possible

A story is meant to entertain not be real
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videogamesteelers43 is not online. videogamesteelers43
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28 Nov 2011 05:37 PM
Wrong. A story has 1 or all of the 4 purposes:
To entertain,
To persuade,
To inform,
To [i forgot the fourth].
Trust me, I learned that in english class. Also, the first line you said is a paradox, so I'm going to ignore it. Unless you meant realistic fiction novels aren't possible, in which case your an idiot, and I can prove it.

Today, Charlie Sheen walked down to rainbow foods, bought a mango, and got sick because someone sneezed all over the food earlier.

That sentence is realistic fiction because it is plausible that Charlie Sheen would do such a thing, but it never happened.
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TylerStone34 is not online. TylerStone34
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28 Nov 2011 05:39 PM
Realistic Fiction. <--- FICTION. CoD is realistic Fiction, look at half the crap in that game. And yes, a story is to entertain, but there should be some logic and sense when it comes to Realistic Fiction.
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videogamesteelers43 is not online. videogamesteelers43
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28 Nov 2011 05:43 PM
I KNOW ITS FICTION.
Thank you for supporting that it needs to be plausible though.
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isherloxi is not online. isherloxi
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28 Nov 2011 07:08 PM
Fiction

CoD
The story is completely unreal

Russia couldn't manage an invasion even with the us radar down

Battlefield bad company

Russia taking over ze world?

Impossible

then theres a ton of books

You don't understand

A fictional story is something made up,imagination,etc

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podraptor is not online. podraptor
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28 Nov 2011 07:20 PM
From my observations Realistic-Fiction is an oxymoron that is hard to explain.
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videogamesteelers43 is not online. videogamesteelers43
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28 Nov 2011 08:46 PM
@podraptor ain't that the truth mate

Cod is actually acurate if you payed attention to the storyline. Basically, in cliffhangar, russia had the ACS module. They managed to crack it before you got it back. Therefore, ultranationalists [those who want to restore the glory days of the USSR] could mess with our satallites and make our radars seem blank. Honestly, don't blindly play through it. It actually does have a story, just like BF3. In that one, solomon buys nukes from russia, and thats why russia sent troops to get them back from kaffarov.
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isherloxi is not online. isherloxi
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28 Nov 2011 09:07 PM
Canada,nato would of seen russian troops heading to the us and announced it

And Russia faileed in the war against georgia

How would they get past poland and all those other countries in mw3 and get to germany?

The us navy would of also noticed the russians in the west and east

i said battlefield bad company not battlefield

Russia took over the entire world in bad company

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isherloxi is not online. isherloxi
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28 Nov 2011 09:10 PM
Realistic Fiction

Non-realistic Fiction

Semi-fiction

A story can be any 3

Non realistic is what most fiction is

Non realistic cannot happen

Realistic can

Now it all depends on what your writing and which you pick
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videogamesteelers43 is not online. videogamesteelers43
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28 Nov 2011 09:34 PM
MY BAD ON THE BATLEFIELD THING.

anyhow, I don't think they went across all of europe, and I doubt canada has it's own sattelite. That's the only thing that could detect them because they were stealth aircraft. At least that's my best theory. Honestly your getting to in-depth at that point. I mean, even if canada did warn the U.S., russia still could've attacked. besides, that cod, which is seperate from this. I'm not going to explain this anymore because your a close-minded idiot. well just close-minded.
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isherloxi is not online. isherloxi
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28 Nov 2011 09:44 PM
No Russia would have to save they're sel;f in europe

Since poland and others don't like them

They'll attack russia and nato couldn't capture russia but destroy it's army,military

Close minded
Intolerant of the beliefs and opinions of others; stubbornly unreceptive to new ideas.

We're not talking bot beliefs,etc

We're talking cold hard facts
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videogamesteelers43 is not online. videogamesteelers43
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28 Nov 2011 10:01 PM
WTF seriously, Im pretty sure that proves my point because this whole conversation was about my opinion of the story's plot in the first place. Why can't I keep it without you denying it? dude, you can't prove anything unless the whole population of the world can agree on the exact same thing. The way to truly express a fact is when it isn't based off of an opinion or certain Point of View. I used facts to rationalize my opinion which was based off of logic, so yes, maybe I presented myself wrongly, but I don't know any other way to. P.S. I think you are still close-minded because you were trying to prove what close-minded meant. Really dude? I use close-minded as intolerant to both facts and opinions. You don't have to speak to king's english to know WTF I was saying in my posts. I'm done.

P.S.S. I think ignorant would be a better choice instead of close-minded.
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isherloxi is not online. isherloxi
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28 Nov 2011 10:06 PM
Lacking knowledge or awareness in general; uneducated or unsophisticated.

Now really

You said it made no sense since it could never happen and i proved you wrong with non realistic fiction
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danial828 is not online. danial828
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29 Nov 2011 11:19 AM
Flame war.. Please stop it :( Its not real, its Story Fiction :)
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Sahanke is not online. Sahanke
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29 Nov 2011 12:45 PM
Who thought it real? I wana see big sucker!
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danial828 is not online. danial828
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29 Nov 2011 02:48 PM
@Sahanke, I know your a true Roleplayer. And they all believe this is real! This is the fakest war story I could come up with.. I didn't mean it to be real...
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