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| 27 Nov 2011 12:07 PM |
"The ninja's truth" here's a sample.
"Ah, Luke you have finally arrived" said the sensi. While Luke was walking up the steps to the dojo, he slipped and landed on his face. He was the worst ninja in the village. "Luke... You have allot to learn, not just skills but being able to walk up steps!" laughed the sensi. Luke felt embarrassed after all he was still stuck in first class when Jason and Lee where in third class.
what do you think of it so far? :P |
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Ryki97
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| 27 Nov 2011 02:06 PM |
| It's pretty cool. Are you gonna upload more? |
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| 27 Nov 2011 02:18 PM |
It's pretty cool. Are you gonna upload more?<
Yes, once I get some ideas. Of what to do next I'm trying to work out what to do. :P |
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| 27 Nov 2011 02:29 PM |
Teaser 2. (First teaser.) "Ah, Luke you have finally arrived" said the sensi. While Luke was walking up the steps to the dojo, he slipped and landed on his face. He was the worst ninja in the village. "Luke... You have allot to learn, not just skills but being able to walk up steps!" laughed the sensi. Luke felt embarrassed after all he was still stuck in first class when Jason and Lee where in third class.
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"Luke! Stop dreaming!" Sensi shouted as Luke jumped. "Now, we will be learning out to do a backflip..." sighed sensi -For the tenth time- thought Luke, "now, watch me" sensi sighed. -If an old man can do it, I can do it - Luke thought. He done it but he landed on sensi. "That's a start... Now get off me!" shouted sensi. "Sorry" stammered Luke. |
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