generic image
Processing...
  • Games
  • Catalog
  • Develop
  • Robux
  • Search in Players
  • Search in Games
  • Search in Catalog
  • Search in Groups
  • Search in Library
  • Log In
  • Sign Up
  • Games
  • Catalog
  • Develop
  • Robux
   
ROBLOX Forum » Club Houses » Off Topic
Home Search
 

[ Content Deleted ]

Previous Thread :: Next Thread 
Prejudice is not online. Prejudice
Joined: 28 Oct 2009
Total Posts: 1087
25 Nov 2011 12:01 AM
It was the strangest feeling waking up. I found myself staring at nothing for a while and slowly, I could hear the sound of a ceiling fan growing louder and louder until I suddenly could feel my arms dangling over the edge. My eyes snapped wide open and I sat up with a loud gasp.

There's something particularly unsettling about waking up not knowing where you are. Nothing makes sense. Your brain goes into overdrive trying to fill your head with information on your surroundings so things can make sense. What you get is a splitting headache, like when you decided to eat too much ice cream at once and got a killer brain freeze. So far my brain was telling me that I was in a hospital. How did I know? Everything looked sterilized. I had a tube running from an IV into my wrist. I was wearing some robes instead of my usual clothes.

My brain was also telling me that I was alone. I hated that feeling.

"Hello? Nurse?"
Report Abuse
Prejudice is not online. Prejudice
Joined: 28 Oct 2009
Total Posts: 1087
25 Nov 2011 10:26 AM
Badumpadump
Report Abuse
Prejudice is not online. Prejudice
Joined: 28 Oct 2009
Total Posts: 1087
25 Nov 2011 09:06 PM
I yanked out the IV from my arm and stretched my legs in the room. I racked my brain for anything. But nothing came up. My mind went blank. What was my name? Why was I here? Where was everybody?

I'd been listening for signs of any life and the silence was the only thing that screamed at me. White noise rang in my ears. I pressed my face against the window and tried to find out where I was, but the fog was too thick to see anything. I found a track suit and tennis shoes. I didn't know what I was doing. I didn't know what I was trying to find.

I slowly slid open the door and cautiously peered out into the hallway and turned my head a bunch of times before I thought it was safe to step out.

I needed to find a phone to call...somebody.

First I had to find out where I was.

This place was creeping me out. Everything was so clean and polished and white and sterilized and there was nobody around. And there was nothing as creepy as flickering lights. There had to be some kind of map around here.

I started to jog to the end of the hall, glancing sideways, peering into the glass doors to see if there were any other patients. But there were none.

What was that?

I turned my head and stared at the end of the hallway for a bit.

I coulda sworn somebody was just there.

"Hello? Is anybody there?"

I turned around and started to move a little bit faster, watching over my shoulder. The map I found told me that I was on the fifteenth floor. This must be a huge hospital.
Report Abuse
pikachucrazy1 is not online. pikachucrazy1
Joined: 13 Jul 2009
Total Posts: 5585
25 Nov 2011 09:09 PM
*Sits in Chair, eating a cotton candy cloud with explosive chocolate milk*

You have an explanation for putting this on OT? Do you?
Report Abuse
THoarfishrule is not online. THoarfishrule
Joined: 04 Aug 2011
Total Posts: 3766
25 Nov 2011 09:11 PM
Beautiful. Just beautiful.
Report Abuse
toiletfromhell6478 is not online. toiletfromhell6478
Joined: 24 Oct 2009
Total Posts: 3543
25 Nov 2011 09:11 PM
[ Content Deleted ]
Report Abuse
XxDreamXx is not online. XxDreamXx
Joined: 10 Apr 2010
Total Posts: 1138
25 Nov 2011 09:15 PM
Please continue!
Report Abuse
Prejudice is not online. Prejudice
Joined: 28 Oct 2009
Total Posts: 1087
25 Nov 2011 09:25 PM
I was making my way to the elevator. After all, that was how you get from floor to floor, right? So imagine how surprised I was when the power went out. Just great. Now I had another problem on my hands. It was dark. And despite not knowing much about who I was, I knew that I hated this place and I hated being alone and I especially hated the dark.

There had to be some backup generator, right? Of course. The lights would come back on soon.

I felt my way along the walls, moving as quietly as possible. It was irrational of me, yeah. But paranoia was taking over and I probably wasn't thinking straight.

Elevator.

Out of the corner of my eye, I saw something move.

"C'mon, c'mon!"

The elevator was down. Fine. The stairs. I wouldn't mind. Fifteen flights. Not that bad. Just get out of here.

Door. Stairs.

I reached out and grabbed the door knob and yanked it.

"No no no no!"

I pressed myself against the wall and took a few deep breaths. Was I hearing things?

I saw a utility closet and quickly threw myself in there and shut the door.

Darkness. Pitch black darkness.

My hands found a flashlight. I thumbed the switch and cast the beam across the floor. There were these brass casings all over the floor. From a gun?

In the corner of the closet was a semi-automatic pistol with its slide locked back. I reached down and picked it up and smelled the port. The smell of gunpower was strong. That meant that somebody had been using it. For what? I dropped the empty magazine into my hand.

I decided to keep it.
Report Abuse
XxDreamXx is not online. XxDreamXx
Joined: 10 Apr 2010
Total Posts: 1138
25 Nov 2011 09:29 PM
:) MOAR.
Report Abuse
nixe12345 is not online. nixe12345
Joined: 01 Aug 2010
Total Posts: 808
25 Nov 2011 09:31 PM
You make a dang good story man, keep going!! :O
Report Abuse
Felix2231 is not online. Felix2231
Joined: 29 Aug 2010
Total Posts: 528
25 Nov 2011 09:33 PM
Awesome, keep it up.
Report Abuse
Prejudice is not online. Prejudice
Joined: 28 Oct 2009
Total Posts: 1087
25 Nov 2011 09:45 PM
After a little pep talk I decided to step out again.

Deep breaths, deep breaths, don't make a sound...

There was a second staircase. Of course. Just go over there, right?

I made my way over there as quickly as I could and found that it was open. Thank God. Down to the first floor, down we go, yes HOLY FUDGE BISCUITS WITH BUTTER SPREAD ACROSS BOTH SIDES.

I caught myself as I stepped into nothingness and held onto the railing for dear life. Was this place OSHA compliant?! Sweet Jesus! The entire thing had collapsed! I slowly pulled myself up and quickly tore open the door into the fourteenth floor and slammed the door behind me. I sat down and took a few quick breaths.

The ceiling creaked loudly. There were a few more muffled footsteps from upstairs.

My heart raced. There was somebody there! I wasn't alone! But now the idea of another person freaked me out.

The footsteps stopped.

I saw an office. An office had to have a phone, right? I lunged for the phone and picked it up.

Nothing.

The stupid electricity! Where's a cellphone when you need one? I rumaged through the drawers of the office desk and lo and behold, I found a holster, with one magazine.

First off, why do hospitals need security? And why are they packing heat?

Whatever. Who cares, at this point? I slapped that thing in and tucked it into my pants.

CRASH!

Must be the wind! I wasn't worried or anything! I wasn't worried about a crash from the other room that was really really loud and came out of nowhere.

OKAY! I was scared. But you shoulda seen me. I dropped to the floor and held that gun close to my chest and turned off the flashlight. I rolled onto my back and swallowed as much air as a could. I felt like throwing up. I slowly pulled myself into a low crouch and shakily pulled the door open.

Maybe I should just hide.

I poked the barrel out and kept my finger off the trigger. I didn't want to accidentally fire.

That sound came from the other room. I held the pistol out with two hands and pressed myself against the door, like in those action movies. The glass was broken and shards littered the floor. A quick glance into the room told me everything I needed to know.

I wasn't alone. In fact, there was a shadowy figure standing in the corner. I gulped and turned on my flashlight. The thing jerked and twitched spasmodically.

"Hello?"

It turned around and screamed at me.
Report Abuse
nixe12345 is not online. nixe12345
Joined: 01 Aug 2010
Total Posts: 808
25 Nov 2011 09:49 PM
Keep.. Going... O.O
Report Abuse
XxDreamXx is not online. XxDreamXx
Joined: 10 Apr 2010
Total Posts: 1138
25 Nov 2011 09:50 PM
I have chills... Honestly, I'm staying up just to read the rest. :)
TYPE LIKE THE WIND!
Report Abuse
nixe12345 is not online. nixe12345
Joined: 01 Aug 2010
Total Posts: 808
25 Nov 2011 09:51 PM
Not leaving until this story is ANSWERED!!
Report Abuse
XxDreamXx is not online. XxDreamXx
Joined: 10 Apr 2010
Total Posts: 1138
25 Nov 2011 09:56 PM
You really have some talent if you wrote this all from your mind.
Report Abuse
nixe12345 is not online. nixe12345
Joined: 01 Aug 2010
Total Posts: 808
25 Nov 2011 09:57 PM
I so agree Dream! Now I'm aching to go write a horror story of my own.. But I NEED.. ANSWERS!
Report Abuse
XxDreamXx is not online. XxDreamXx
Joined: 10 Apr 2010
Total Posts: 1138
25 Nov 2011 09:58 PM
Mine would never be as good...
lol.. WE NEED ANSWERS!
Report Abuse
nixe12345 is not online. nixe12345
Joined: 01 Aug 2010
Total Posts: 808
25 Nov 2011 10:01 PM
Lol I'll rage if he logs off XD
Report Abuse
justin575 is not online. justin575
Joined: 24 Jun 2008
Total Posts: 550
25 Nov 2011 10:02 PM
OLOLOLOLOLOLLOLOL
Report Abuse
Prejudice is not online. Prejudice
Joined: 28 Oct 2009
Total Posts: 1087
25 Nov 2011 10:04 PM
I didn't think twice. I jumped back and shot it. The first shot had actually managed to connect. I fired again. A second shot barely grazed it. A third and a fourth finally managed to drop it. It fell, twitching. Okay. What do those police officers do after they waste the suspect?

Check the body.

I held the gun out ahead of me and did that weird shuffle and held the gun over its head. Now I could see its grotesque features. A pale, hollow face. Sunken eyes with blood dribbling down the cheeks. Its hands were in a clenched position, as if they were like claws.

This was starting to turn out like a really, really bad zombie flick. You know that part where the camera usually zooms up close to the zombie and you think everything's alright and then it's not?

Yeah.

My finger was already on the trigger by the time that thing had jumped back to life and grabbed my wrist.

There was a gunshot and the spent casing clattered to the floor. I don't really want to go into detail, but I guess I should. Lemme tell you what it's like to shoot somebody in the head at near point blank range. You probably don't wanna hear it. But I'm gonna tell you anyways.

The lead comes out and cuts its way through all that skull and flesh and blood there the other end. And it's nasty. It's not clean at all. The face practically deforms and there's this huge ugly hole. Pieces of flesh dangle from the exit wound in the back of the head and bone fragments and blood is everywhere, including on you and your clothes.

I shook uncontrollably, hot and wet and sticky fresh blood oozing down my face and oh, Lord, it was disgusting. I fell back and cried.

Yeah. I cried. The hot tears slid down my face, mixing with the blood.

This sucks.

Report Abuse
soshywoshy13 is not online. soshywoshy13
Joined: 18 Aug 2008
Total Posts: 4412
25 Nov 2011 10:07 PM
[ Content Deleted ]
Report Abuse
XxDreamXx is not online. XxDreamXx
Joined: 10 Apr 2010
Total Posts: 1138
25 Nov 2011 10:07 PM
More.. and more... chills... oh lord...
Report Abuse
Chrisdawgo is not online. Chrisdawgo
Joined: 10 Nov 2009
Total Posts: 2721
25 Nov 2011 10:09 PM
MOAR
and make him die at the end
NO HORROR STORY ENDS WITH HAPPINESS
Report Abuse
nixe12345 is not online. nixe12345
Joined: 01 Aug 2010
Total Posts: 808
25 Nov 2011 10:09 PM
OH god man GO
Report Abuse
Previous Thread :: Next Thread 
Page 1 of 1
 
 
ROBLOX Forum » Club Houses » Off Topic
   
 
   
  • About Us
  • Jobs
  • Blog
  • Parents
  • Help
  • Terms
  • Privacy

©2017 Roblox Corporation. Roblox, the Roblox logo, Robux, Bloxy, and Powering Imagination are among our registered and unregistered trademarks in the U.S. and other countries.



Progress
Starting Roblox...
Connecting to Players...
R R

Roblox is now loading. Get ready to play!

R R

You're moments away from getting into the game!

Click here for help

Check Remember my choice and click Launch Application in the dialog box above to join games faster in the future!

Gameplay sponsored by:
Loading 0% - Starting game...
Get more with Builders Club! Join Builders Club
Choose Your Avatar
I have an account
generic image