Aizec
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Aizec
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coppermop
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| 08 Sep 2011 09:10 AM |
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Aizec
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coppermop
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| 08 Sep 2011 09:33 AM |
| (I'm not hating. There's no plot at all.) |
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Aizec
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| 08 Sep 2011 09:50 AM |
CS: Name: Saku Ag3: 14 Gender: Female Clan(King's army,Orc's Horde,Elf's tribe,etc): League of Combative Females Rank(Soldier,Archer,Captain,Knight,Berseker,etc): The leader of the group. Bio(Opt): DERP Personality(Opt): DERP Appearance: ...I'm not explaining this time. |
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Aizec
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boomer549
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| 08 Sep 2011 05:00 PM |
CS: Name: Braden W. Ag3: 21 Gender:M Clan(King's army,Orc's Horde,Elf's tribe,etc): Elven Tribe Rank(Soldier,Archer,Captain,Knight,Berseker,etc):Leading Wizard Bio(Opt) ... Personality(Opt)... Appearance: Elven Tunic. Wizard hat (To conceal the Elven Ears, DERP) |
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Aizec
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boomer549
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| 08 Sep 2011 05:20 PM |
PROLOGUE(for me):
The kingdom of Azaorth didn't seem menacing, but their king was out of control. Luckily, the Elves weren't a part of the Kingdom. Well, most of them...
Braden, a young elf trained in the power of Earth Magic, is one of those Elves, but he doesn't work for the king. Then again, who wants to be serving such King? As well, he's easy to spot, if you can catch him in his Tunic. Otherwise, he looks like any other Earth Wizard in the Kingdom. That doesn't eat meat. He tends to tip his hat, to cover at least the pointy parts of his ears. There, nobody knows if he is Elven or not.
(Yes, Elves are Vegetarians) |
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Aizec
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boomer549
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Aizec
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IcyBlu
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| 08 Sep 2011 05:50 PM |
(Honestly, this RP needs work. AND LOTS OF IT.
T.T Call me a troll, whatever, but you should listen:
No plot No rules Eh atleast you have a CS Better title is needed.
This constructive critism.) |
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Aizec
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IcyBlu
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| 08 Sep 2011 05:54 PM |
| (*Shrugs* Only trying to help. Fine. Just be stubborn, and ignore my advice.) |
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Aizec
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Xilirite
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| 08 Sep 2011 07:14 PM |
(Damn-Damn. WORK ON YOUR RPS! EFFORT! PLEASE! I (And many other people) will join the RP if you actually add a plot, rules, and some effort, because you clearly just made a CS and a name. Whats the world called? Where are we? What's going on? Why are we starting a new kingdom? Is it fantasy or medieval? You need to EXPLAIN! We need DETAILS! And again, EFFORT!) |
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boomer549
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| 08 Sep 2011 07:35 PM |
| (Person above did not read Aizec's post about constructive criticism.) |
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Xilirite
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| 08 Sep 2011 07:39 PM |
| (Person above does not realize that the person above the person above really doesn't care all that much.) |
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IcyBlu
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| 08 Sep 2011 07:39 PM |
| (-.- He is only trying to help improve this RP, so more people would join.) |
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boomer549
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| 08 Sep 2011 07:40 PM |
| (Person above is a complete idiot for not reading. Learn to read, noobily.) |
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