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| 22 Nov 2011 10:17 PM |
Two boys were staring each other down, until one stood up with a grin on his face,"Brad lets have a bet shall we" the now identified brad stood up with a frown on his face. "What kind of bet Matt", matt smirked,"we stay at the abandoned house for one night" Brad looked at Matt for a few seconds before answering,"what does the winner get out of this"? Matt grinned "how about 500 dollars", Brad smirked "deal". A few hours later both brad and matt were inside the house, matt was in the basement, brad was in a bedroom, brad was looking around the room, until he noticed a foul odor coming from somewhere, he searched high and low, but couldn't find where it was coming from. Brad had momentarily forgotten there was a bathroom(lol),what he saw almost made him puke, in the bathtub was a body with most of its organs on the floor, the body's eyes were gone, and its arms and legs were missing. Brad was about to scream before remembering who it was that he made a bet with,"I should of know he was gonna do something like this"brad started walking out, but his one mistake was the blood and body was real. Meanwhile matt was walking around the basement with a smirk," I got a easy win" he continued to look around the basement until he heard a "squeak" he turned around looking for where the sound came from, but couldn't find nothing, a few seconds later he heard the same sound again, finally getting annoyed he decided to look around completely. What he saw made him scarred for life, on a rope was a man with his arm, and legs missing, and from the expression on the mans face horrified. Matt started running towards the door until he tripped over something, he grabbed his flashligh and shined it right at the object, what it was, was a pair of arms tied together, matt started backing away until he felt something hit his back, he slowly turned his head and flashed the flashlight towards what it was, it was legs and arms mounted on the wall, that did it his mind had broke as he laid theere in fetal position. But what he didn't know was a shadow slowly making its way over to him with a sadistic grin, the shadow raised a axe high in the air and 'SQUELCH', the only thing heard was the sound of something rolling across the ground.
This only the first part tell me how I did. |
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| 22 Nov 2011 10:19 PM |
| Oh and I know theres alot of mistakes. |
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| 22 Nov 2011 10:22 PM |
| I can feel the laziness in the air. |
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| 22 Nov 2011 10:31 PM |
| @zebra As it says in the title I made this out of PURE BOREDOM!!!! |
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| 22 Nov 2011 10:31 PM |
NICE CREEPYPASTA OHMAIGAWD YES |
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| 22 Nov 2011 10:33 PM |
| @iIeInG Lol I was aiming for that and this was out of boredom, if I try it would be better. >:D |
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| 22 Nov 2011 10:35 PM |
This is really hard to read. Not because of the formatting or punctuation or anything like that.
It just sucks. |
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| 22 Nov 2011 10:36 PM |
| @prejudice Once again it was out of boredom. And I wasn't even trying. |
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| 24 Nov 2011 08:34 PM |
| what happens when you actally try? |
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| 24 Nov 2011 08:39 PM |
| Oh I don't know, if i tried it would be on the gross level of the human centipede actually I would make it more gross then that. |
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| 24 Nov 2011 08:47 PM |
More please, on the same thread so I can follow this thread
~Your friendly, neighborhood corndog, that's me~ |
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| 24 Nov 2011 09:05 PM |
Part 1/2 (lol) Its has been three hours since brad and matt had entered the house, but unknown to brad, his friend matt is dead. Brad was still walking around on the second floor searching every room, he had stopped at another room when he heard dripping coming from inside. Brad had entered the room, and noticed nothing out of the ordinary, he was about to leave when he suddenly heard the dripping sound in the room, he moved around the bed, and noticed a huge puddle of red liquid, he now found where the dripping was coming from. He looked around the room until he found what he need, a pole, he started poking at the ceiling, thats when it broke, what he saw made him lose his lunch, it was three broken jars, one contained a mixture of eyeballs, and fingers, the other two however is what made him throw up his lunch, one contianed human hearts with a mix of human skin, the other contained intestines with a mixed with a piar of lungs.
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| 24 Nov 2011 09:05 PM |
| It was terribly written and un-inspired |
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