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Re: After the flash...PART 1 CHAPTERS 1-2

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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 03:19 PM
...It was cold the night the bomb went off....Children screamed, mothers jumped in fright, and animals ran...As the nuclear explosion swept across the state...


1 MONTH LATER

After the flash...Nothing. Barely anything was left. Plants were flat, and only 4 teenagers stood in the middle of it all..."Well" Alex said calmly, "I guess that this is the place?" "Yea." Toby thought. He was thinking about how this happened...The noise, the clutter...And the mutants...Oh, yes, the mutants...How they ate meat...raw. Toby jerked back to reality. He was nauseous thinking about it. Toby was a spirited boy with dark hair, and blue eyes. Alex was a more "Silent" type of player. He had fairly good muscles for a 14-year-old...But when he was angry, he might snap. Alex had black eyes and black hair...But didn't whear black today. Instead, he wore a dark-blue suit of armor that was supposed to protect him from the mutants affected by the explosion. The last comrad that would be assisting them in their mission was a 14-year-old named "Meg". She had light-brown hair and sparkling teal eyes. She wore the same armor as Toby and Alex, except a bit thinner. Toby found it strange that Alex seemed to blush when near her...But she hasn't noticed yet. "So..." Meg said, "Where's the place Jon said he'd built us?" "He said it would be around here somewhere..." Alex almost whispered..."There!" Toby exclaimed. He pointed at a small building the was crude...But decent. Jon didn't have much more than a thousand dollars left after the explosion, so he said they would have to make the best of it. "Ok." Toby said, "Let's go!"


CHAPTER 2

Once they got inside, the air refreshed them. Meg took off her helmate, letting the cold air fill her breath. "AAAhhh..." Toby sighed. "Feels good after being in the heat of the desert-like terrain, huh?" "Yea," said Meg. "I bet we'll enjoy it in here. Alex shrugged and said: "It's not like we'l hae power for long...The power is sure to cut off, and then bye-bye goes our air conditioner..." Toby thought that through...That they might burn like bacon without electricity. But at this point, it sounded better then being eaten alive by some yellow-green-cannibals..."Is there a bathroom in here?" Toby asked. "Well, one way to find out?" Said Alex. "We should explore!"






The next chapter in this series will be posted really soon...Stay tuned!
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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 03:24 PM
We need to make sure this stays aliv for a LONG time...
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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 03:29 PM
...Whatever, I'll repost this sometime later...
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lewdan is not online. lewdan
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23 Nov 2011 03:30 PM
I didn't read it but it seems to be good!
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23 Nov 2011 03:30 PM
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=58449571





























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Sprocket is not online. Sprocket
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23 Nov 2011 03:30 PM
tl;dr

ORLY? A POST APOC STORY? THAT'S SO ORIGINAL, I'VE NEVER EVER HEARD THAT ON ROBLOX, EVER BEFORE!
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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 03:32 PM
@Sprocket ...So?

Besides...It's SUPPOSED to be long...There's no TL;DR for it because it's like a book...
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ToxicityIII is not online. ToxicityIII
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23 Nov 2011 03:33 PM
I leik.

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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 03:34 PM
@Toxicity


Show it to your freinds! My imagination leads me to post stuff like this!
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Sprocket is not online. Sprocket
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23 Nov 2011 03:34 PM
"But didn't whear black today."

lrn2spell
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Sprocket is not online. Sprocket
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23 Nov 2011 03:35 PM
It's a fail story.
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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 03:36 PM
ots of stories have typo's...Spro. Besides, I spell A LOT better then lots of you...Other then that, nothing was misspelled.
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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 03:40 PM
NOTE: This story is meant to be shared! I'm proud to have people know about it!
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Sprocket is not online. Sprocket
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23 Nov 2011 03:41 PM
Fail story is fail.
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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 03:45 PM
...How is it a fail? Besides...Just because one butt-hurt troll hates my story doesn't mean I'm gonna stop posting them...
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Sprocket is not online. Sprocket
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23 Nov 2011 03:48 PM
It's just stupid. How did a few teenage kids survive, yet an entire city get wiped out?
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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 03:51 PM
No,only one part of the world was destroyed, the teenagers were from Florida...That war happened in Canada and some other places...They signed up for a special orginazation (Hence, the uniforms.) With other people, they were chosen for canada...The other states that were hit are still a mystery to the fellow readers...:)
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23 Nov 2011 03:53 PM
TL;DR
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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 03:55 PM
@Quin ...It's the first part of a sotry, of course it's long!
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Quintin551 is not online. Quintin551
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23 Nov 2011 03:56 PM
Do us all a favor and type it somewhere else than in ROBLOX. No one will read them here. ROBLOX Talkers never learned to read books.
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Sprocket is not online. Sprocket
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23 Nov 2011 03:58 PM
If they were from Florida, why did they go into the nuked part of the world?
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Sprocket is not online. Sprocket
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23 Nov 2011 04:02 PM
"Meg took off her helmate"
"we'l not hae power for long..."

lrnspell
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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 04:42 PM
So? Just because a couple of typo's popped up, doesn't mea it ruins the story...But from now on, I will check it.

Oh and, "Learn to spell" is how you say it...
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mebot1 is not online. mebot1
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23 Nov 2011 04:44 PM
QUICK

Make cheap shots at the spelling and question the logic of a piece of media

Look cool because you're a cynic
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ToxicityIII is not online. ToxicityIII
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23 Nov 2011 04:44 PM
Chaps 3 and 4 now?

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