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After the flash...PART 1 CHAPTERS 3-6

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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 05:32 PM
CHAPTER 3

The 3 teens were sleeping in their rooms, with the cool breeze blowing on the base. Toby was laying in his bed, staring at the ceiling..."This is NUTS!" He thought. "I can't believe we're in the middle of CANADA, in a high-tech base, probably surrounded by un-holy mutants! Then Toby decided that thinking about it wasn't going to get him to sleep any faster. So he decided he should just wash his face...To cool off a bit. When he reached the bathroom, he felt a chill down his spine. He turned the light on. And standing in fron of him...Was a yellow-green human-like-creature of some kind...Toby watched in horror as the creature's face looked at him. Time seemed to freeze between that second and the next. Then he saw something next to him...It was a tooth brush..."If I could just throw that past him..." He thought, "The beast would look at the toothbrush to see what it was." "In that instant, I could just get a weapon..." The creature jumped at him, and in the same instant, Toby grabbed the tooth brush and threw it into the shower. The creature landed next to Toby, and spun around to track the noise the toothbrush made when it fell into the shower. And when it turned around, Toby was gone...
CHAPTER 4


Toby was in a cold sweat as he raced to the artillary room. He grabbed a weird looking gun and hid behind a desk in the corner. As he did, the creature leapt into the room and landed on a table not 3 feet away. Toby could hear its raspy breathing, and it made him think of something you would hear in a movie. with one shot, he jumped up, and hit the creature in the stomach with a weird energy-bullet thing...The beast howled in pain as it fell back. Toby then took another shot, but at the head this time. The neck cracked and Toby could see it falling limp. And it cocked as a weird angle before the creature finnally, lay still, and was stiff as wood. Toby was shocked. The thing was so repulsive, he wanted to heave everything he'd ever eaten. Just then, Meg, and Alex rushed in. "What is going ON in here??!" Meg asked with fright. "And what is THAT??!!" exclaimed Alex, turning green. "Well, glad you asked!" Toby said sarcastically. "It's just a relative stopping over for a visit!" "Well, I'm glad you're ok." Alex sighed. And after they all clamed down, they went to bed.

CHAPTER 5

Toby was dreaming: He was in the kitchen, his kitchen. His mother was cooking something that smelled great. "What's cooking?" Toby said hungrily. When his mother turned around to look at him, he noticed her face resembled that of the beast he just saw! Toby sprang out of bed. And hit a desk as he jumped. His head cracked against it. He almost fainted from the pain of hitting your desk as hard as he did. he realized he was scared stiff. "It was just a dream...If it was real, I wouldn't be here, I would be in the kitchen...With my zombified mother." The next morning, Alex was cooking breakfeast. Toby was still a bit groggy from last night..."Why aren't you eating?" Meg asked. "What?" Toby asked. "Do you NOT remember that "Incident" last night?!" "Well, you're still alive, aren't you?" Alex had sat down and was eating the egg he had prepared. "I'm just worried..." Toby muttered nevously. "Well, get used to it. It's gonna happen at night all the time while we're here...Alex said. Toby shot a glare at him. "Thanks, Alex! I'll remember the while I'm trying to go to sleep tonight!" "Well, today, we're going to go kill some beasts!" Alex exclaimed. "Wha-?" Toby chocked on his food, "But...This is so sudden! We've only been here a DAY!" "It's been long enough for me!" Alex said boldly. "Well, not for me!" "Dude, you're coming, whether you like it, or not. Alex said, his mind obviously made up. And it was settled.
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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 05:35 PM
Part 1, chapter's 1 and 2:

http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=58449687
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falconsniper is not online. falconsniper
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23 Nov 2011 05:40 PM
Chapter 6


falconsniper spawnkilled them all into ragequitting.

The End.
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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 05:40 PM
Just so you all know...I am going to post this as a series, and this will get better...(Especially afte one of the team mates get bitten...
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23 Nov 2011 05:40 PM
inb4tl;dr

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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 05:41 PM
@Cool ...It's a story. It's meant to be long.
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sun is not online. sun
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23 Nov 2011 05:41 PM
Why are all stories based on nuclear bombs?
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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 05:41 PM
@Sun This is based off of something in a book...
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Vergeltungeswaffe2 is not online. Vergeltungeswaffe2
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23 Nov 2011 05:44 PM
It's pretty good. I'm not a great writer, but I have made the series Retaliation, Hammer Blows, Winter's End, and Black Moon.
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cod0078 is not online. cod0078
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23 Nov 2011 05:44 PM
We don't care.
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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 05:45 PM
@Cod Don't say that, his series could be great! This will turn to be a great series, I can assure you.
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Vergeltungeswaffe2 is not online. Vergeltungeswaffe2
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23 Nov 2011 05:50 PM
Black Moon and Winter's End were the most popular.
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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 05:52 PM
@Verge Really? Well, can you show me? I'm just shy about my writing...I don't know whether I should just write what I feel...
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ethanfireeyes is not online. ethanfireeyes
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23 Nov 2011 05:59 PM
I might just post the rest of part 1 tonight...What do you think?
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23 Nov 2011 07:31 PM
MOAR!

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Melwolf122 is not online. Melwolf122
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23 Nov 2011 09:10 PM
I really like this series ethan espacially sense it was inspired when we were playing that game "after the flash" and its also pretty nice to know your one of the characters <3
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Melwolf122 is not online. Melwolf122
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24 Nov 2011 12:32 AM
Iam one of the characters everyone!!
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thatcrazyguy122 is not online. thatcrazyguy122
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24 Nov 2011 12:33 AM
*sigh* borrriingg
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Monork is not online. Monork
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24 Nov 2011 12:37 AM
hey, newpuppy, i'm gonna go ahead and ignore the terrible storytelling and just tell you to post this in Roleplaying. where it belongs. ROBLOX Talk is not your personal dump where you can post whatever lame thing you've concocted in your mind. keep it related, or don't post.
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