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| 08 Nov 2011 04:45 PM |
The UNSC Story of JohnnyDeath2011
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And so our story begins, in the year 2542. John had just got out of bed, he walked over to his brother, " Hey, wake up! " Nathaniel groaned and looked up at John, " I heard something outside, lets go check it out! " John kept attempting to wake Nathaniel up, finally he decided to get up. John and Nathan, for short, walked to the door, " See if you can get a closer view.. " Nathan said to Johnny as they walked outside. John ran to the closest tree, and looked at what he had heard. " What, what is that? " John looked confused, his pale eyes glimmered with reflection of the light the object gave. John reached forward, and tried to touch the mysterious object in front of him. " Don't touch that! " Nathan yelled from the house, " You don't know what that is, or where it came from! " John didn't hear Nathan, and grasped the object by its handle. John immediatly felt a surge of energy, he saw visions, slaughter, men, women, and children lying dead everywhere. A huge city he had never even dreamed of. The vision disappeared, and John looked down. He was examaning the object, sharp edges, almost as if it were a dual blade. He noticed thin streaks of energy flowing through the blade, he jabbed it in the ground, and it cut with ease through the soil and dirt. John pulled the mysterious blade out and looked at it. ~Not even a scratch..~ He thought, what he held in his hands, he realized, was a material unkown to humanity, he re-imaged the vision again, and saw that what he held, was used to slaughter thousands of people. He dropped the blade instantly and looked at the strange pod where he pulled the weapon from, and stared right into the eyes of an unkown creature...
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| 08 Nov 2011 04:54 PM |
AWSOME. I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT THE STORY OF HALO IS, BUT THIS IS EPIC. |
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| 08 Nov 2011 07:20 PM |
| Glad you liked it, Misterio587. |
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| 11 Nov 2011 06:14 AM |
| It will be posted on Tuesday, one Chapter a week. But believe me, I have been thinking about it since I posted Chapter 1, and I have grand ideas. |
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| 21 Jun 2012 12:59 AM |
| Great story. A few grammatical errors here and there, but overall I love it! |
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| 21 Jun 2012 01:05 AM |
| I've read the original Halo books so, you're filling in some big shoes here. It's good but I'm also a bit confused why touching the energy sword handle gave him visions of death and such. |
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| 21 Jun 2012 01:07 AM |
| >.> Atleast you enjoyed it, there are two other chapters available as well :P |
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| 25 Jun 2012 09:17 PM |
| You know, you never sent me those links... |
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| 03 Jul 2012 12:53 AM |
I'll get to that when I have time. PLUS I HAVE A WEBSITE NOW! It sucks. I'll just send you links >.> |
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| 03 Jul 2012 01:12 AM |
Chapter Two: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=57950046 |
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