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| 08 Nov 2011 12:36 PM |
Chapter 3:
As we rode on the train out of the Districts, I glanced back at Nate. He was chatting with Purple and Shimmer. He looked at me and got up. “They are looking for more tributes like Sam and Travis.” Nate murmured. I blinked at him plainly in confusion. “What about Sam and Travis?” I asked. “Remember? Thacia is going to gather up all those tributes and take them away in the arena. She’s going to k*ll them one, by one. She’s asking around like a business woman, ‘Do you want to be k*lled at the Corpunia?’.” “I would say no.” I spat. Then I saw Thacia heading towards us. She put on her best smile. “Well?” She prompted. I glance at Nate with hesitation before answering. “I rather d*e in honor, thank you Thacia.” I reply with a grin. She smiles and walks away. Soon we arrive at the training center; it was a 13 story building, one floor for each District, and then a 13th for meals and training. Nate and I are led to our floor. Our rooms each have a bed, a TV, a personal shower with 20 settings, a balcony, and a sw0rd by the door. As I walk in I’m introduced to my mentor, Daniel. He was about 17. Then it hit me. I glare in h0rr0r at him. He won the 68th Hunger Games. I gulp as I meet his gaze. “Clove Pucket? I am your mentor, Daniel.” He stretches out to shake my hand but I move it away. “Cato eh?” He laughs. I snort in disgust. “My brothers name is not a name to be scorned.” I hiss. Daniel drops his smile and nods. “Course.” Daniel says. He takes me and Nate to the training room. I look down, I’m wearing my bronze kn*fe, I smiled, knowing I was strongest with it. I’m introduced to my stylist, La French Da Lo’. He had a white wig on and sun glasses, a black turtle neck on and jeans. “Make the angel spin for me.” He said smoothly. Then a Peace Keeper stripped me of all my clothing and ordered me to spin. My cheeks went red, I was n@ked! He nods and tells me again and again to spin for him. “Ok, I want diamonds and jewels right now.” He snaps his fingers and in a few moments he gets them. The next few hours are him making me model. Finally, I’m in a diamond covered dress with well…diamond everything! I smile. “Thank you so much La French Da Lo’!” I say with a fake smile. He grins. “Oh it was nothing honey.” He then walks away with his planner. I immediately drop my smile and glance to the Peace keeper. “Now what?” I ask. Soon I’m lead out to a run way. I have to watch the other tributes in their fancy dresses. Thacia was dressed in a beautiful golden dress, while Sam was in a yellow tuxedo. I was wearing my diamonds while Nate wore a shiny silvery suit. Travis and Roqueta wore spring time things. Blaze and Misty wore prom things. Jade and Mike wore purple things, and so on. Soon after that it was our interview, Sam’s and Travis’s were h0rrifying... “So Sam, what’s your plan for the Hunger Games?” The reporter urged. Sam glanced around. “I’m having Thacia k*ll me as soon as I step off the plate.” Sam admitted. There was a ripple of shock through the crowd. “Oh I see? And how do you feel about d*eing?” He gasped. Sam went blank. His hands began to shake. “I-I know what’s coming for me, p@in ,@gony but Thacia promised me d -do it as quick as possible, she said she would make a little p@in as possible by stabbing my heart.” Sam stammered. The reported sent him away. Then later when it was Travis’s I felt as if I was going to cry. “So do you have a plan?” The reported laughed. “Same as Sam’s. I feel as if my life is already the Games, it won’t be a slight bit different from District 3. I know, I’m enduring myself for the p@in and @goney Thacia will bring me, but Thacia promised she would do it quick.” Travis explained. Again the reporter sent him away. Soon after 2 days of training, the game were about to begin. All the tributes stepped on the metal plate. I ran my hand along my bronze kn*fe. When the bell rang I dived for the nearest backpack. Then I saw Thacia drag Sam and Travis to the woods, I followed to see what would happen.
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| 08 Nov 2011 03:02 PM |
| Wonderful!Yes so wonderful keep adding more, was I jade the one in dah purple?? |
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| 08 Nov 2011 03:02 PM |
| This is horrible and stupid. |
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| 08 Nov 2011 03:17 PM |
| you dont have to make the author feel bad. if you dont hvae anything nice to say, dont say it. i acctually think that this is probably much better than you can write. |
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| 08 Nov 2011 03:18 PM |
I wrote a story that got 6/5 stars on a website with over 60 Million page views.
I do believe I am at least slightly better than this awful insult to literature. |
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| 08 Nov 2011 03:22 PM |
| No one gives a damn about your sorry book or whatever words can be used to describe this crap. |
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Silvu
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| 08 Nov 2011 03:23 PM |
| I like how the beginning is right out of the Hunger Games. |
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| 08 Nov 2011 03:36 PM |
| Thx! Why Stop so agressive? I wrote it so fun .-. for my friend Silverstar. The first part of the story is made up but we actulley did this in rp with Silverstar360 ^^ |
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| 08 Nov 2011 03:37 PM |
Roleplaying is for stupid children. I can see how you roleplaying and the content of this "Story" are related. |
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| 08 Nov 2011 03:44 PM |
| Why you calling me stupid? Nvm...well im sorry you feel that way. Do you have any tips about writing for me? |
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| 08 Nov 2011 03:44 PM |
Yes, one tip.
Learn to spell. |
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| 08 Nov 2011 03:45 PM |
no no no! Those words's are things roblox won't let me post so I add @#$%^&* and stuff like that ^^" |
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| 08 Nov 2011 03:46 PM |
| -_- really, you dont even have the decency to even BLEEP cussing. i honestly feel bad for you. |
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| 08 Nov 2011 03:48 PM |
| no stuff like knife or death or kill idk why it wont let me... |
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| 08 Nov 2011 03:49 PM |
| I write freely so if roblox has a problem with my words they can talk to me.... |
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| 08 Nov 2011 03:52 PM |
| I think my writing is actulley fairly good thx very much. But I need improment and so do u. Everyone does ^^ |
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| 09 Nov 2011 07:17 AM |
| Well at least we know Spotted is tons nicer than you, and probably tons smarter.... I wonder what will happen when I tell everyone I know on Roblox and on the internet how mean you are. >=( |
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| 09 Nov 2011 07:18 AM |
| do you really need to censer knife? |
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| 09 Nov 2011 07:20 AM |
| THIS IS FOR THAT MEANY UP TOP I THINK THAT ITZ NAME WAS THECLOPPER OR SOMETHING |
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Meo1000
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| 09 Nov 2011 07:24 AM |
| StopClopping i mean sheesh what a jerk |
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