Devirox1
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| 01 Nov 2011 06:14 PM |
Ribbons of color dance in the night sky. Brilliant greens and pinks intertwine together, and the lights dance on your face, reflecting against the brass city. You wrap you arm around my waist, and I breathe in the scents of life. The abrupt sound of bombs pierce the air. Taking cover, we hide in the tall grass. My eyes turn panicked, and you hug me tight, squeezing the air out of me. Like it was our last embrace. "They're coming for you," he breathes, eyes turning glassy. I close mine, shaking my head. "I won't let go," I say. My haggard breathing picks up. I hear leather boots stomping the grass, searching for us. For me. I can only pray they won't hurt him. I am deadly silent, but it's no use. A glove grabs my shoulder. Kicking and thrashing, I desperately search for my Daniel, but I am being pulled away. I scream for 5 counts. My throat now feels enflamed. The last thing I see is his face. His lips are moving, and it almost looks like he is running toward me. He's trying to say something, but it's too late. I wish the moment was frozen forever, but no. I am shoved in to the carraige roughly, nothing but my footprints left behind. This is because of the vice, and the virtue.
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PLOT
You are either one of the vices or the virtues. You were marked at birth as being the human portrayal of one of these emotions, a special breed, created for unknown reasons. Each vice has a counterpart; a virtue. These play hand in hand together, polar opposites of one another. Now an elite government agency is determined to separate the two. They plan to reward virtues and punish vices against they're will. They also plan to pit them against one another in a war of the mind, and a war of weapons. These government people are known as the Captors. You are taken against your will, ripped away from your family, friends, companions and everything you have ever known.
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VICES- If you choose to be a vice, you portray this in what you wear, how you act, and everything you do. It doesn't control you, but it IS you.
LUST- Self-explanatory. Should be a very beautiful, but troubled character.
GLUTTONY- Self-indulgence. An unattractive vice, this character should be slightly chubby and have an excessive desire for food, although it is also a sign of status.
GREED- Self-explanatory. Should have a thirst for nice things.
SLOTH- Laziness, pretty much. Procrastination.
WRATH- Should have a tempermental emotional scale and wild rages.
ENVY- Self-explanatory. Should also be a beautiful, but bitter character.
PRIDE- A noble character.
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VIRTUES- Same as above. Portray it in your character. In order, these are all counterparts to above. So if you don't understand something, match your virtue to above and just flip it around.
CHASTITY- Purity, knowledge.
TEMPERANCE- Self-control
CHARITY- Generosity, sacrifice
DILIGENCE: Persistence, determination.
PATIENCE- Self explanatory.
KINDNESS- Self explanatory.
HUMILITY- Humble, bravery.
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RULES
~ This is a mature RP. Grammar is expected, and good writing is appreciated. Detailed CS is required. ~ Romance at your own risk. ~ NO mary sues or garys, naturally. ~ No godmodding. ~Respect the admins and me. Be mature. ~Take flame wars to the PMs, please! ~If you have any concerns, PM me. ~If you plan to do something crazy to your character, PM me first. ~PM is there for a reason. Use it. ~Above all, respect is key.
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CS
Name:
A.ge:
Gender:
Appearance (Physical):
Appearance (Clothing):
Personality:
Deadly Sin:
Items:
Bio:
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| 01 Nov 2011 06:21 PM |
| Longest. Roleplay Message. Ever. |
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seabass14
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Devirox1
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| 01 Nov 2011 06:38 PM |
(@Ice- Haha I take that as a compliment.
@Sea- Awesome.) |
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ix3Candy
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| 01 Nov 2011 06:43 PM |
| [I ask that you reserve pride.] |
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ix3Candy
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| 01 Nov 2011 06:45 PM |
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Name: Nicolas Claus
A.ge: Seventeen
Gender: Male
Appearance (Physical): Nicolas is a pale person that's 5'11" tall. He has rather long orange-blonde hair that is cut at the middle of his neck, with his bangs covering his eyes. It's okay though, he can still see. Speaking of eyes, he has ocean green ones, but it won't matter, seeing that you can't see his eyes anyways. He has a slim build and has long legs so he can run swiftly.
Appearance (Clothing): Nicolas usually wears a small, white crown on the side of his orange-blond shaggy hair. He wears a white dress shirt, with its sleeves scrunched up to the elbow. He wears a black aviator jacket over that. Nicolas wears navy blue jeans as his pants and then wears black combat boots as shoes.
Personality: A co.cky attitude, acting like he's the king of everything. He is quite snarky and sneaky too, plus he has a short temper. Just...don't put insults on him.
Deadly Sin: Pride
Items: A pouch stored with a notepad, a VERY sharp pencil, and some money.
Bio: Nicolas is a...special boy. He was born into the world as the heir for the rich family company, Clauds Inc. He was spoiled. He always got what he wanted. He was proud. But...He was too full of it. It was too much. Because of Nicolas, the family company shut down. Because of him, he got kicked out of his house. Because of him, he ended up in the streets.
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Devirox1
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Devirox1
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| 01 Nov 2011 06:49 PM |
| (not the longest word wall I ever seen.) |
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| 01 Nov 2011 06:50 PM |
(so.....the odds are in the Virtues favor? or am I reading this wrong? Regardless sounds fun)
Name:Cole Young
A.ge:16 or 23 (not sure how old they should be :P)
Gender: Male
Appearance (Physical): (can we lump these together? I'll obey regardless :D) He has messy Black hair that reaches down to his eyebrows. He has hazel eyes and a fair skin tone. He has an average build but tends to slouch slightly
Appearance (Clothing):He wears a pink T-shirt with the word RAVE on it with the V replaced with a heart he also wears a tan coat that has the words itallian Stallion rider equipments since 2009 on the shoulder of the jacket, He also wears denim jeans with black and white checkered shoes
Personality: He's the comic relief he likes to keep the mood bright and not worry about things which applies well to his deadly sin. He cracks stupid jokes and usually doesn't apply himself to much unless the situation demands it.
Deadly Sin: SLOTH (Laziness)
Items: A whip and a dagger (allows him to kill without much effort)
Bio: : Cole's life was dull and without incident; just the way he liked it. He had a go nowhere lifestyle , a group of friends who were always more than willing to grab a few bites to eat at the local pizza joint. With no ambition no goals and no pressing need to push himself in any way, Cole was set to cruise through his life with a minimum of effort. But, the universe had other ideas for him.
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| 01 Nov 2011 06:51 PM |
(oh wow items I'm illiterate and read that as Weapons -facepalm-) Items (REVISED) - A few pieces of candy and his Cellphone. |
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ix3Candy
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| 01 Nov 2011 06:51 PM |
[@Ice: *cough* I am slightly offended. http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=55244898 Go check that out.] |
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Devirox1
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| 01 Nov 2011 06:54 PM |
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Name:Dia Viria
A.ge:17
Gender:F
Appearance (Physical): Dia has thick, dark brown hair that flows in neat waves to her waist. She has fair skin and flawless facial features. She has emerald green eyes (get it- green with envy haha). She has long legs but a small frame. She has a petite nose and a harsh jawline. She has thin, arching eyebrows.
Appearance (Clothing): Dia wears tight, dark skinny jeans and black high-top chucks. She wears a floral shirt under a wrinkled pleather jacket. Her look can come off as poser-y, or as if she is trying too hard.
Personality: Dia can be bitter and needy. She looks up to people but also despises them. She isn't all bad, though. She is loyal and brave. She just wants to be the best at everything, therefore she has mastered many skills. SHe can be a good friend, despite everything.
Deadly Sin: Envy
Items: A small comb and a pocketknife.
Bio: Dia has had an envious thirst for as long as she's known. However, she has made tight, unbreakable bonds with people and had a boyfriend back home, whom she adored. He broke up with her, insensitively, when the Captors came a-coming. |
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Devirox1
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| 01 Nov 2011 06:57 PM |
| (Yeah. This isn't very long considering some standards. But I still worked hard, nonetheless.) |
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Devirox1
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| 01 Nov 2011 06:57 PM |
(Yeah. This isn't very long considering some standards. But I still worked hard, nonetheless.)
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| 01 Nov 2011 06:58 PM |
| (...save wrath for me please? I'll make cs asap) |
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Devirox1
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| 01 Nov 2011 06:59 PM |
| (Yeah sure, you got wrath) |
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seabass14
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| 01 Nov 2011 07:04 PM |
| (I had mine but then I accidentally exed out of the page. Save me charity. Unless we're supposed to be vice. In that case save me greed.) |
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Devirox1
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| 01 Nov 2011 07:06 PM |
| (No you can be either. Charity it is.) |
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| 01 Nov 2011 07:08 PM |
| (Can you PM me the link to the old one so I can dig up my CS and edit it? Also, can I have more than one character?) |
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seabass14
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| 01 Nov 2011 07:11 PM |
CS
Name: Dexios(deck-see-us)
A.ge: 17
Gender: M
Appearance (Physical): Dexios has a small, athletic build, elven-like features with curly, fire red hair storm grey eyes and pale-ish skin. (WRITERS BLOCK >_<)
Appearance (Clothing): Im sad I have to ask this. Can I post a link?
Personality: Dexios is known among his friends as a very giving person who is one of the nicest people you can ever meet except for when you mess with the people closest to him.
Deadly Sin: charity
Items: N/A
Bio: Do I have to? If so I will. |
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Devirox1
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| 01 Nov 2011 07:16 PM |
| (Bio is required. And I'd rather you copy and paste your clothing rather then make me go to a link.) |
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Devirox1
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