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| 23 Oct 2011 07:08 PM |
Hello I am Honors Officer jaydog1213, In these next few paragraphs I will talk about my history of FEAR, why I should become a General, and What I would do for the best group on Roblox.
In this paragraph I will talk about my past In FEAR.
When I first started FEAR it was amazing to see it be so big. When I first joined I when to all the training then my first promotion happened to Private. I was so thrilled then that made me want to get to the spot General. Now that I am an Officer and do things for FEAR like hold trainings that were posted that had no one to go to, help with listening to the High Ranks. Now that I have the chance I am trying to become a General to reach my goal. Next thing I know I am a Corporal after a few more trainings. After 10 more training I get the rank of Captain, then that's when I knew I had to step up and be more active in this group. 5 days later I go and train at the grounds with zach2222. I win one of the promotion challenges and then I knew that I was in a good spot as a major. The next thing I knew I win another challenge and then become a Officer When I heard I won and I was going to be an Officer I felt awesome and then it happened. I finally got the rank that I have now. Just after getting my new rank the AA happened, and I was very sad that all I worked for and lost it. That same day a Leader was giving the Ranks back to all those effected by the AA and I told him "Can I get my rank back I was an Officer". First thing I thought was I am not getting my rank back then I went to the FEAR home page and their I looked under My Rank, and it said Officer. That's when I knew that it was official I was now a official Officer. I started out as a nobody then got noticed and started working hard. Finally after all that work I got the rank just before my goal.
In this paragraph I will talk about why I should become a General over all the others running.
I should become a General because I care about all the people in FEAR. I go to all the trainings that I can and participate as an Officer even if its a training for Private to Captain. I also deserve the rank General because I focus on this group all the time and do only things that include this group. The rank General should go to me because I am involved in the group, I stayed up all night to make all the trainings, I am dedicated and will always fight for FEAR with Courage, Honor, Respect, Integrity, and never ever give up in a battle.
I will now say what I would do if I was picked General.
If I was picked as a General I would go to and help at all the training that were going on. I would post places for training when their is something that needs to be done, I would also take charge and be available for all questions and answer them with the best of my knowledge. I will not be a General that is inactive and goes to 1 or 2 trainings every month. I will be the type of General that is always active in a training and willing to help people that struggle. The last reason I would be a the perfect choice for General is that I follow orders at all times, I respect all that do or don't respect me, I do the best I can to work everything and do anything for this group. The last part to why I should become a General is I will be as active that anyone can be, I will be as active as the most active Leader in this organization, that is why I should become a General.
In this last part I will tell why you should pick me and not the other candidates.
I should be picked because I take responsibility, I am trustworthy, loyal, respectful, sharing, active, sharing, and always honest. I will take all of that and that is who I am. I will take all my time and use it as a FEAR member unlike people who go to places that have nothing to do with this organization I will be the exact opposite and be the most involved. That is me now and will be three times better and more active if I was to be a General.
This is all I have to say. Thanks for taking your time to read this and best of who become General sets in you hands. |
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| 23 Oct 2011 07:13 PM |
| Nice. I think you should get a chance at leading FEAR. |
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| 23 Oct 2011 07:27 PM |
| Hmm... great improvements, I think you should take the lead. |
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| 23 Oct 2011 08:37 PM |
| You can't be a General, you're grammar is way too off. |
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| 23 Oct 2011 08:44 PM |
| Sorry. How is my grammar off? |
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| 23 Oct 2011 08:48 PM |
Good speech. c:
~Glory to Venezia!~ |
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alkia
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| 25 Oct 2011 07:10 AM |
| I see alot of thought and hard work has been put into this ^_^ |
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| 27 Oct 2011 07:42 PM |
ok I guess I was being a little harsh, you can be General, but you do need to work on your grammar xP.
You have the experience, and you normally talk properlly, but this could be written better. |
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| 27 Oct 2011 07:43 PM |
| Yes sir, I know I was still working on fixing up my grammar. Have the elecions end already? |
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| 29 Oct 2011 06:24 PM |
| Leaders preferred that it wasn't THAT long. |
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| 29 Oct 2011 07:45 PM |
@Im Yes, but Jason hadn't picked who's going to be Gen.
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| 29 Oct 2011 08:02 PM |
| @punk you are right. I stll have a chance. |
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| 29 Oct 2011 10:39 PM |
@Im Jason is hosting it.
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| 30 Oct 2011 01:19 PM |
| I know. I just wanted to know if it was over DX |
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