swany2
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| 29 Oct 2011 01:29 AM |
Swan Studious Brings you: Infected
This is the beginning of a series.
Fictional _____________________________________________________________________________
Its amazing how fast it started, one day the world of robloxia was thriving, the next day the ash colored sky darkened the world. The horror's of this time will haunt me to my dieing breath, which may not be long. It started in 1956 when the robloxian navy reported the disaperance of a vessel of there's. The "Black Duck" a grand battleship from the time of the great wars, it was considered an unstopable craft. No one exactly knew what happened, but there last comunication consisted of shouting and pleads for rescue and that something happened to a crew mate. When the radioman on the ship tryed to explain what was happening there was a scream and some sort of animal roar as the radio went into a static. The cause of the disaperance was classified as MIA (Missing in Action). But then 7 years ago, in the year 2017 on March 17, on the shores of Southern Robloxia a mysterious battleship washed up. A runner out for his daily exercise fell upon it and went in through a side hatch, he was never seen again. Reports of the lost man triggered police action and when they followed his path to the ship, they searched a report on the name of "The Black Duck". But before they could do anything The Robloxian Military sped onto the beach in there humvees and helicopters surrounded the area. They made all the personal in the area stay there, saying there was a ordered quarentene on code 5 (The highest code). The people tryed to argue, the soldiers argued back. Through the shouts and fighting of the Robloxians, a roar emerged from the vessel. Then there was complete silence as the roar echoed of the side of the ship. They waited 5 seconds, 10 seconds, 15 seconds nothing seemed to happen. They sent 5 soldiers to investigate the ship. After entering 2 minutes passed then the sound of gunshots and screams. It went quiet again, then out of the vessels hatch emerged a soldier crawling, a Sgt. ran up to him and asked him what happened. The Crawling soldier whispered," There coming". All of the sudden out sprung 4 soldiers, and other naval personal. The bit into the flesh of the Sgt. and charged at the other soldiers. The Robloxians didn't stand a chance. Within Days, The Infected reached the cities, weeks they took over Robloxia, Months over the world. I am Swany2, and possibly one of the last Robloxians in the world. _____________________________________________________________________________ To be continued...
Chapter 2 out tomorrow
Message me if you want to subscribe or post on the wall, subscribing will let me tell you when the next chapter is out.
Please put comments on here or ideas, also if you would wish to be in the series post on here that you would.
Brought to you from ~Swan Studious~ |
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mbest
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| 29 Oct 2011 01:30 AM |
Look up the Zombie Research Society.
Is more legit, and non-fiction. |
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| 29 Oct 2011 01:30 AM |
You should write a book. It would be very cliche. |
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swany2
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| 29 Oct 2011 01:31 AM |
| Thank you if you want to read it easier with double space I posted it again on the Roblox Talk Forum |
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sadredas
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| 29 Oct 2011 01:32 AM |
You should NOT put this into RT. But still, Good |
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swany2
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| 29 Oct 2011 01:33 AM |
| Thank you but didn't know where else to put it haha. |
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| 29 Oct 2011 01:34 AM |
| Awkward. I read it, even when I said I wasn't planning to. |
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swany2
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swany2
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| 29 Oct 2011 01:38 AM |
| Chapter 2 out tomorrow and don't worry I will double space tomorrow I know its hard to read. |
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| 29 Oct 2011 01:40 AM |
It has potential, but make sure you're doing your research, and you might want to type it in Word, then import it from there so you can spellcheck it.
But the only thing I really want to point out is the research bit, you always want to make sure everything is correct, fanfic. or not. For instance, the 'Level 5' would be 'Level 1'. The emergency system is descending, sort of like a list of importance. #1 is always the most important. Other than minor stuff like that, great story. :P |
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swany2
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| 29 Oct 2011 01:40 AM |
| Also please feel free to post ideas |
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| 29 Oct 2011 01:41 AM |
| Thank you sir I was just trying to have some fun and give some people to read something, and I will remember to research next time, and great Idea with M. Word |
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swany2
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| 29 Oct 2011 01:45 AM |
| I will also repost this once tomorrow for some more readers to catch on, then later in the day chapter 2 |
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swany2
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| 29 Oct 2011 01:49 AM |
Tl;Dr = Too long; Didn't read
A forumer's way of saying they don't give a crap. Post cravers. -,- |
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swany2
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| 29 Oct 2011 02:03 AM |
| The real question is why do people forum so late haha now Im going to sleep at 2:03 AM |
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| 29 Oct 2011 07:17 AM |
| Lol I'm pretty sure it's cause their epic! |
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