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| 22 Oct 2011 02:21 PM |
Thursday 6:04 PM. You are at home having game night with your family. You are playing a board game. You have the news on in the back ground, turned on volume 5. Your sister rolls a 12, and screams with joy. She then boasts about it. Your sister has dirty blonde hair, full pink lips, and dark brown eyes. She has straight and long hair. She is wearing designer jeans and a pink hoodie. Your mom is not with you anymore, she has passed away sadly. Your dad is a very tall man, standing at 7’2”. He has a mustache and a go-tee. He is also bald. The news lets out loud beeps. A message scrolls across the screen. Your dad reads it out loud.
“Warning, a chemical called the Storailer has broken loose. It is believed to give the person an urge attack human's if they are infected. Please get some food and board up all windows. Be sure to have waepons. This disease could be fatal if not dealt with properly. Thank you.”
Your dad tells you two to stay here, and he will be right back. He tells you to make sure to open the door to no one, unless they say our secret word. He drives out somewhere. You lock the door and board up the windows. You find your dads CZ750 and prepare. Your sister hides in her room. It started with one infected… then two… then four… then eight, then sixteen, then thirty-two, then sixty-four, soon, the human race was endangered. Your dad never returned. And you expect the worst. You hear slamming on the windows, the door, the walls. You look out the window and see them. Infected. You just keep repairing the windows, not letting them in. But then a big one approaches. 8’4”. He is carrying an axe, stumbling straight at your house. You get your sister and get into the cellar. You hear the axe pierce through the wood that you used to blockade the windows. Then you hear all the zombies pour in. You are ready for it all. You hear your front door slam open. But then you hear human screams from inside your house, all the infected groaning. The cellar doors rip open, your sister starts to cry. You look up, scared out of your mind. Then you see… [ To be continued. ] ________________________________________________________________________ Please comment, and no hate please. tell me what you would like to see too! :D |
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| 22 Oct 2011 02:26 PM |
| There will probrally be 5-6 more addons to this, 1 everyday or every two days. Do not get impatient, and I hope you become a fan of what I write! ^_^ |
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| 22 Oct 2011 02:28 PM |
It's good but just a bit cliche, but well since lately all stories are...
:p Santa Claus... No wait, wait... Your mother(Not a joke or somehthing) or no... no wait, your father :D
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| 22 Oct 2011 02:33 PM |
Bumping it 3 minutes later? Start thinking up the next part?
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| 22 Oct 2011 02:38 PM |
| I already have it thought up, but I'm going to add one on each day, instead of just keep making them when nobody knows about them. It's good to have fans waiting for the next one instead of having no fans and people just joining in late and not getting to read the first part. |
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| 22 Oct 2011 02:40 PM |
Just like Darth Vader said: "Luke, I am your father!!!", He said very dramatic. "No, I don't have a father!", Luke replied crying. "Yes, Luke I am!" "Father? Oh, I missed you so much", He hugs Darth Vader. "Hey!, Hey!, get off of me", Darth Vader shout."This is not the script!" "But father, don't you love me", Tears came in Luke's eyes. "NO I DON'T!!", He replied loudly. "NOOOOOOOOO", Lukes jump on the spaceship...
R.I.P Luke who broke all his legs for jumping on a spaceship...
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Tony1346
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| 22 Oct 2011 02:41 PM |
| It was your father, he was carrying a hammer, with blood on his arms and scratches and bite marks everywhere. You raise your CZ75 at his head."I'm sorry. Forgive me." And you shoot a 9mm cartridge through his head. You run to your sister's room. she's hiding in her closet and refuses to move. You make a daring escape through the chimney after being chased out by the Infected. You have a backpack full of supplies, and it is heavy when you run. You jump off the roof and begin running to the City, running in moonlight, and you know you are ready, for this may be the apocalypse that ends us all... |
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| 22 Oct 2011 02:41 PM |
(Sorry for the typos)
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| 22 Oct 2011 02:43 PM |
| No, tony, sorry, thats not it, and the CZ750 M1 is a sniper, not the pistol from black ops. |
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| 22 Oct 2011 02:59 PM |
Dun, dun, dun...
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| 22 Oct 2011 02:59 PM |
You lol a lot... That sounds weird in one word...
Lolalot...
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| 22 Oct 2011 03:11 PM |
You B-B-B-Bump it up too fast...
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| 22 Oct 2011 03:13 PM |
Like 6 minutes later?
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| 22 Oct 2011 03:16 PM |
Ow, your sad now. Want a cookie? Yes, you want a cookie, do you? *Firepoint369 looks with big eyes to the cookie* Well it's mine >:D *Firepoint369 cries* -Evil laugh-
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