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spartan3384 is not online. spartan3384
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22 Oct 2011 10:46 AM
(WARNING: WALL OF TEXT STANDS BEFORE YOU. You cant just skip it if you want.)

About a year ago, i started a halloween thread called Cryingspider. I wanted it to be Blair Witch Project meets Marble Hornets meets House Of Leaves. Unlike my other storys, where they were told in third person, first person, ect. i tried to make Cryingspider seem like a person had just wrote down what had happend, and had no idea what would happen next. In order to do this, i made the story up as i went along.

At about the same time, there were threads that were stating that a killer was inside their house. So instead of dialing 911, they gossiped about it on a kids site. People got the wrong idea about MINE, so MSE6 took all the threads down, mine was inculded. Cryingspider, will never see the light of day.

As a sort of middle finger to the admins, i started the story over, this time calling it Crying Spider. As much people told me it scared them and made for good haloween reading, i concider Crying Spider to be a failure. Because the origonal was taken down, and people were sending me messages left and right about what happend to it, i was rushed, and left a lot of typos, unexplained plotholes, hell it was becoming LOST all over again.

The ending was the biggest dissapointment for me. I had this giant idea going on inside my head, only for the story to just....end. I was planning to re-make Crying Spider this summer, only work and such kept me away from my computer. Well, now its almost halloween, and i'v run out of excuses.

So before anyone starts freaking out and reporting me because they think that a paranormal entitey is stalking me...well dont. I know Slendy and I have had our differences in the past, but we got some therapy in there, and now we're brahs. So sorry about being a killjoy but the story you are about to read is entirly fake. There is no Refox California, and there is no Redfox forest.


Or is there....
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SUBJECT No. 230137543926

PROPERTY OF U.S GOVERNMENT DO NOT DUPLICATE

MULTIPLE "SLENDER MAN" SIGHTINGS ON CASE KNOWN AS "CRYING SPIDER"

ALL WITNESSES MISSING/DEAD

Mead © composition
100 sheets/200 pages
WIDE RULED

Well, what better way to start this than by introducing myself. My name is Lyonal Theadore Johnson. Im 17 years o.l.d. And my brother is a biker. Not some hardcore BMX punk. His idea of a friday night is to take his bike out to Redfox woods, and just ride it. He would get home pretty late too. One day he never came back.

I passed it off that he had just lost track of the time, and would barge into the house, apologizing to my worried sick mother. This never happend. It was morning when we got the police involved. Of course, my father did, because Greg is his favorite. They called in dogs, helicopters, the whole 9 yards. They never found anything. Well...they did find something.

About 8 miles from our house, they discoverd a slope that stopped, and the leaves all over it made it look like it was part of the path. On the bottom of it, they had found my brothers bike. His name, Gregory J. was still sharpied on the front of his handlebars. They came back, and told us the story.

The police claim to know what happend. Greg had mistooked the ledge for part of his biking path, fell, and broke his arm. He might have been delerious, and wanderd untill he fell into a river that carried his body out to the ocean. That was that. End of story. Now back to the donuts?

I dont think so. There are a couple of flaws in their statement. I know that falling off that ledge would hurt, but i dont think it would even twist an ankle, let alone break an arm. Gregs broken his arm before, and he's never been delerious. And another thing. There isnt a river in Redfox woods. There are small streams of water, but none of them lead to the ocean.

I just...HAVE to belive my brother is out there....somewhere....calling for help...help that will never come. Im using this journal to document whatever happens. Call it being a crazy American, but i think something big is going down here. Something the government dosent want us to know about. In case...in case anything happens to me, i hope somehow this journal reaches the people...and my family...and they know what happend.

Pray for me.

-LJ
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Thedndfan77 is not online. Thedndfan77
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22 Oct 2011 10:53 AM
Can this be a joint story? I write good stories, and this looks fun.
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supercommander is not online. supercommander
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22 Oct 2011 11:01 AM
Awesome so far, spartan.

:D
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Darkian2 is not online. Darkian2
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22 Oct 2011 11:19 AM
Still a bit too much like marblehornets.
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spartan3384 is not online. spartan3384
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22 Oct 2011 12:11 PM
Thats cool, ms. obc. How many stories have you written?
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Darkian2 is not online. Darkian2
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22 Oct 2011 12:19 PM
A lot, actually.
Not many I have posted, because the ROBLOX forums are horrible 96% of the time in my honest opinion.
But I do Roleplay here a lot, and many people will tell you I do. Lately, not so much, because of the poor quality of the forums stated before.
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drwho101 is not online. drwho101
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22 Oct 2011 12:19 PM
ITS DA RETURN OF THE CRYING SPIDER..............BETTER THAN DANCING WITH A TIGER!! :) now a word from our host.....mr old man dude @ @-Eye have only Ies
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spartan3384 is not online. spartan3384
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22 Oct 2011 12:33 PM
Thats so super cool. Really. Im jealous off my ass right now. By the way, its "Marble Hornets".
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madnesscombat12 is not online. madnesscombat12
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22 Oct 2011 01:13 PM
hmm.. who to support.. darkian or spartan.. darkian.. spartan.. darkian... spartan... meh,whatever,STILL AN AWESOME E STORY!
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masterx is not online. masterx
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22 Oct 2011 01:15 PM
Didn't you post this months ago?
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Darkian2 is not online. Darkian2
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22 Oct 2011 01:35 PM
Actually, no.
It's Marblehornets.
That's the Channel's name.
That's what it says on the DVD.
The title of the movie IN the series is Marble Hornets.
The title of the series is Marblehornets.
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Thedndfan77 is not online. Thedndfan77
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22 Oct 2011 03:32 PM
Doing the Slendah Man Thang!
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spartan3384 is not online. spartan3384
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22 Oct 2011 04:08 PM
Acually, yes. Shouldent you be uping your post count right now?
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spartan3384 is not online. spartan3384
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22 Oct 2011 04:09 PM
Ya, i put this up months ago. Frikin retard.
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Thedndfan77 is not online. Thedndfan77
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22 Oct 2011 06:07 PM
I look like slendy, no?
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alpha8 is not online. alpha8
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22 Oct 2011 06:10 PM
Love this. Better than my stories.
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Thedndfan77 is not online. Thedndfan77
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22 Oct 2011 06:12 PM
SLENDERMANSLENDERMANSLENDERMAN
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spartan3384 is not online. spartan3384
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22 Oct 2011 07:13 PM
Your gunna need some life sucking tentacles for arms, bro.
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spartan3384 is not online. spartan3384
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22 Oct 2011 07:14 PM
sucking tentacles.....
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JellyWaffle is not online. JellyWaffle
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22 Oct 2011 07:19 PM
I likes story.

♬ Ideas are like cookies♬
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ScubaDivingForFood is not online. ScubaDivingForFood
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22 Oct 2011 07:21 PM
When you said sucking tentacles,

I got a strange image in my head. :U

ANYWAYS. ​>-> Hehehheh....

I like teh stori.

P0ST M0R3 N@0W.
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TAYtayisGR8 is not online. TAYtayisGR8
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22 Oct 2011 07:31 PM
He didn't SAY sucking tentacles!

He TYPED sucking tentacles!

._.
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JellyWaffle is not online. JellyWaffle
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22 Oct 2011 07:43 PM
You. Shoobulatyurio.

TERMINAL DAMAGED W̦̮͍̹̫̳̮̾̇̈I͉̠̪̦̮͐͑̔͢͞L̶̨̥͍̞̤̘͂̃̍ͧ͆̾̈̉L̙̝̭̘̠͕̼̫̮ͨ̒́ ͓̯̘̈ͨ̊̋̔̀͒̅ͯ͢͠B̴̶̌ͭ̇҉̦̭L̶̰̟͍ͪ͑ͨ̓̎͛̅͛̽͞E̸͍̝̜͖̋͆́͜Ë̡͉͎̞͓̳̣͈́̈́ͫ͊͛ͥ̏̚͡D̸͔̺̲͔̯͒̏̑͑̿ͭ̐͘͠ ̧͓̯̙ͦͫ̊ͦ̇͟Ś̸̢̆̄̌̔ͦ͏̮͔̘H͙͙̭̺̜̱ͭ͋̌͛̄͘͢A̢̛͙̺̖̝̙͈͉̤̥̿ͣͧ̈́ͩ͂Ď̷͍͕̗̬̮͚̹̌̔ͬͫ͢ͅȎ̮͕͇̗̜͚̪͕̎̒͆̿͒͊̀W̵̛̗̖͈͑̀͌ͣ̇S̨͉̞͔͕̥̖ͤ̐͂́͐̌͐̕͡ ̶̝̮͋ͣ̎̊ͨ̎͞ͅF̳̱̭̻̦̞͕̍̍̊̋͐̇̽̅͘͝O͍̽ͫ͌͛ͪ̋͋R͊͏͈̗͔͎̖ͅ ̴̺̰͉̓̎͠Ẹ̤̮͍̘̗̟ͣ̈̅͆͛ͭ̆ͩ͘T̗͇̥̫̠̼͗̄ͪ̅͟͝E̹ͩ̾̇̇ͮͪ̋R̨̤̫̹̹̾̐̂ͤ̉̽̚ͅN̶̏̽͑͑ͧ̇͏̬̝͕͕I̽ͧ̍̅̆͗̍̾̅҉́͏̪͕̬̮T̨̺͕̹̾Ỵ̙̺̼͉̬ͩ͊̑̊ ̴̼̻͗ͫͭͧͦͫ͒͢͡
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spartan3384 is not online. spartan3384
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22 Oct 2011 08:41 PM
Jellywaffle, whatever your smoking, pass it around.
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Thedndfan77 is not online. Thedndfan77
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22 Oct 2011 08:42 PM
Eyeless, he sees.
Earless, he listens.
M(X)uthless, he speaks. (X)r devours your insides.

Slender Man.
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