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Re: A story I typed in the middle of class today

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Yui810GhostofOTPast is not online. Yui810GhostofOTPast
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21 Oct 2011 04:48 PM
We're supposed to be making a movie for the raven, but..

My head had already been a complete split. I found it hard for quite some time to see the difference between the reality I was forced with and my fantasy, as if I was completely separated by the thought of what had happened to me after the past few weeks. I sat still, as a bird in the night, looking over the mass of tall erected buildings that stood to establish the large city of New York.

I remember vividly the first phone call I received that day on the frosty morning of November, my colleague and co-worker Harold had come in an distasteful tone to meet at his apartment in the Southern shore area. In a curious haste I drove through the snow up to the door, giving a slight knock at the door. Harold usually only had an negatively energetic mood in a serious condition, so I was worried for his sake what was wrong with him.

As the door opened, I was meet by a frail maiden that had been simply tidying up the halls. As it happened, she was courteous enough to let me in and show me to my objective. I came to the study to find a clearly distressed shell of him. “Harry, what’s wrong?” I asked, trying to be clear enough to show concern. His face was greatly pale, with a grim look that one would seem like it had been there forever.

“My friend, I had never before experienced the guilt I have now. Say you, can you hear it?”

To an obvious extent, I was perplexed at his question.

“Have I heard what?”

“These voices that have been plaguing me, separating my rights from wrongs very clearly. I have to no doubt that as of recent they have gotten worse, the voices more angry.”

I was beginning to fear for my friend’s health and well-being. Surely he was going insane, and a shiver went up my back just thinking about it.

“I’m sure it’s just your mind playing with you.” It was the only thing I could think of saying at the time.

Fortunately, after some hesitation, he came to his senses.

“..Yes, right. It must just be my conscious playing tricks.”
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Yui810GhostofOTPast is not online. Yui810GhostofOTPast
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21 Oct 2011 04:49 PM
@OP

That's just all I made in class. It's not finished or anything.
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Darkian2 is not online. Darkian2
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21 Oct 2011 04:50 PM
"the raven" as in edgar allen poe's the raven?

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Yui810GhostofOTPast is not online. Yui810GhostofOTPast
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21 Oct 2011 04:51 PM
""the raven" as in edgar allen poe's the raven?"

Yes.
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LupinPerplexton is not online. LupinPerplexton
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21 Oct 2011 04:53 PM
:o
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Yui810GhostofOTPast is not online. Yui810GhostofOTPast
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21 Oct 2011 04:56 PM
":o"

Is that a negative or positive reaction?
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Yui810GhostofOTPast is not online. Yui810GhostofOTPast
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21 Oct 2011 05:00 PM
B-b-b-b-bump
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21 Oct 2011 05:06 PM
Bumper

floodcheck:remove()
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21 Oct 2011 05:10 PM
Bump
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21 Oct 2011 06:14 PM
Bump

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Yui810GhostofOTPast is not online. Yui810GhostofOTPast
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21 Oct 2011 06:20 PM
bumpa
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river0222 is not online. river0222
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21 Oct 2011 06:22 PM
Epic.
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Yui810GhostofOTPast is not online. Yui810GhostofOTPast
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21 Oct 2011 06:24 PM
"Epic."

Thanks for the comment and for ending the streak of bumps.
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river0222 is not online. river0222
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21 Oct 2011 06:37 PM
My pleasure! [:)]
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Yui810GhostofOTPast is not online. Yui810GhostofOTPast
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21 Oct 2011 10:48 PM
Bump again

-- "That judges name? SNIDELY WHIPLASHO"
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Yui810GhostofOTPast is not online. Yui810GhostofOTPast
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21 Oct 2011 11:52 PM
Bump...

-- "That judges name? SNIDELY WHIPLASHO"
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21 Oct 2011 11:56 PM
I enjoyed it. It was short, but cool. It seems the narrator wasn't being that sympathetic by telling the person his mind was playing tricks on him. Then Harold agreed, and it almost seemed as if he was calling himself crazy now. Just the impression I got. Liked it.
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Yui810GhostofOTPast is not online. Yui810GhostofOTPast
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21 Oct 2011 11:58 PM
"I enjoyed it. It was short, but cool. It seems the narrator wasn't being that sympathetic by telling the person his mind was playing tricks on him. Then Harold agreed, and it almost seemed as if he was calling himself crazy now. Just the impression I got. Liked it."

He was trying to get Harold out of the state he was in. It worked successfully, and Harold realized that he was saying ridiculous things. Just to clear that up :)

Thanks for the comment.

-- "That judges name? SNIDELY WHIPLASHO"
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22 Oct 2011 12:29 AM
Bumpz

-- "That judges name? SNIDELY WHIPLASHO"
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LupinPerplexton is not online. LupinPerplexton
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22 Oct 2011 09:10 AM
":o"


Positive comment, mate.


}Ohwinful L{
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22 Oct 2011 10:40 AM
lol
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22 Oct 2011 11:03 AM
lawlz.
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Yui810GhostofOTPast is not online. Yui810GhostofOTPast
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22 Oct 2011 11:21 AM
Bunp
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Pwnmaster109 is not online. Pwnmaster109
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22 Oct 2011 11:27 AM
Yugi are you leaving ROBLOX because usually when someone post something like this there about to leave.
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Yui810GhostofOTPast is not online. Yui810GhostofOTPast
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22 Oct 2011 11:38 AM
"Yui are you leaving ROBLOX because usually when someone post something like this there about to leave. "

..Do you mean my bumping?
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