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| 12 Oct 2011 07:21 PM |
Note to mods: mine is not about 2012 or anything like that. and if you like ill make it so its all resolved for the little 3 year olds on OT
part 1: the happening
john was a lonly man. always walking alone. one day he had gone to the shopping mart to buy new clothes. but when he came to the counter, there was no one there. as he thought about the possibilities he noticed none of the other counters had people at them. for he knew it was around noon so they couldn't be closed. but where was everyone?
Part 2: the unknown
he walked outside in confusion, oblivious to his surroundings. strangely this had never happened before. why would the store be closed? as he pondered through his memory he noticed something, different about the town. it seems as though something was missing. and then he saw it. nothing, nothing at all. no people, no cars, no noise. it was like he was in a whole new reality. though there had to be some explanation for all this. but how is it possible? how?
Part 3: John's thoughts
it seems as if when i talk i ear someone else repeating what i say. being by myself all the time is not new to me. though i whish i had someone to talk to. i really am lonly now. i miss the crowds and the people's conversations. i just want it all to stop. but now i feel that whishing is not enough, that nothing is possible anymor,. that all this is just a strange dream that im having and that ill wake up sometime soon. but i know thats a lie
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| 12 Oct 2011 07:23 PM |
part 3, sentence 6, anymor,.
i messed up ok its supposed to say anymore, but i clicked in the wrong place |
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| 12 Oct 2011 07:25 PM |
| srry bout the first sentence in part 3 and wishing with 2 H's i'll without the apostraphy and some others |
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| 12 Oct 2011 07:25 PM |
| also srry bout the titles ik there crappy |
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| 12 Oct 2011 07:29 PM |
Keep it up can't wait for the next! -Danger789 |
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| 12 Oct 2011 07:34 PM |
Part 4: parts
as he was walking around looking for his wallet (which seemed to have dissapeared too with everyone else) he stumbled apon a small metal disk lying on the ground. as it was picked up, he noticed that it had a blue smudge on one side. wondering what it was he instinctively went to his house. when he went in he had found that his house was empty. everyting was gone. even the small little ceramic duck he keeps next to his chair was gone. as startled as he was he immediately ran outside to check if it really was his house.
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| 12 Oct 2011 07:43 PM |
Part 5: it can't be
it was. at that moment he ran to the next house and the next and in each one he discovered, nothing. suddenly his mind was racing. how was he not missing like everyone else? why would i be the only one left to discover no one was here? why couldn't i have gone with them? but he knew, he needed to find out why. he had to peice it all together. and then he saw it.
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| 12 Oct 2011 07:50 PM |
@ Vunro
Obvious Troll is Obvious
and YES CONTINUE |
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| 12 Oct 2011 08:44 PM |
| YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY |
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