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| 09 Oct 2011 05:24 PM |
Can you guys try to think of a name for this novel I made? It's about a research team crash landing on an alien colony. They have to survive. Which means searching for food, defense against hostile aliens, searching for shelter, and many more.
Characters: Corporal John Wayne-(Sam Worthington) A super soldier who was asked to defend the research station against hostile forces. He now has to fight for survival on this planet. Freddie Carter-(Joseph Gordon-Levitt) A Special Ops soldier (Not a super soldier) who is John's friend. Major Orlando Jackson-(Dwayne Johnson) A tough-as-nails weapons expert who is one of the most feared humans in the galaxy. Will he meet a challenge in the colony of aliens? General Mickey Woodson-(Tommy Lee Jones) A head representative for the human race in defense and military, will he meet his doom? Doctor Derick Cranley-(Cillian Murphy) A doctor and a research expert, will his experiment conclude in the colony? Doctor Erika Woodson-(Olivia Wilde) The General's daughter, John's love interest, and Derick's long time childhood friend, will she survive in the alien aftermath?
Alien Races: Infantry Soldier-The basic soldier about 6 feet in height. Wolverines-Tougher soldiers with huge claws and can regenerate wounds quicker than you can say "Planet." Buggers-Bug creatures about the size of a coffee table and annoying in swarms. Dirtbags-Huge dog-like creatures who hunt for food. Predator-A creature skilled in athletics that can run far distances. Apes-The only non-alien on the planet. They are tough and intimidating. Hunter-Killers-Humongous aliens about the size of a bodybuilder that carry acid guns.
What should be the title for this? |
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| 09 Oct 2011 05:28 PM |
Alpha.
Colombus.
Plymouth.
I dunno. |
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| 09 Oct 2011 10:47 PM |
Hi Fireball.
Firstly the story sound's pretty "Rad" and I liked the casting, Dwayne Johnson is pretty awesome (anyone seen him in faster?)
I'm thinking Survival is a pretty good title for the novel it's simple and it pretty much describe's what the character's are going through.
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| 09 Oct 2011 10:56 PM |
(sorry for another post) I'm sorry for a second post and I should've posted this in my previous post on this thread, but I've got another Title Idea it's not exactly the best or the most creative but it's Alpha Survival
Alpha can mean "Beginning" meaning it's The Beginning in a Series based on Survival it's just a idea.
I'm sorry if it's not exactly creative but it's the best I can come up with at the moment, It's fun creating a story but the title's are alway's the hardest IMO.
I wonder will you release it on the ROBLOX forum's? it sound's good. |
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| 09 Oct 2011 11:31 PM |
| This actually sounds pretty good! Crash, that is really good name! Hope the plot is as good as it sounds! |
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| 10 Oct 2011 12:56 PM |
| Chapter 1: Corporal John Wayne woke up from his bed. He had a horrible premonition about a beach on fire and aliens chasing him and Dr. Erika Woodson. Dr. Derrick Cranley woke him up. “Wake up sleepyhead. You’ve been asleep for 2 days.” John was barely awake. “What happened?” John replied in a cranky mood. “You transformed into the first supersoldier two days ago. You needed your rest so I gave you a shot making you fall asleep for two days.” The alarm then went off. “Get in your armor!” yelled Derrick as he ran out the room. John then got up and opened the closet. “Daaaaarn.” He said in surprise. He was looking at Mark IV Ranger Armor. He then jumped into the outfit. He ran out the room and saw a few infantry aliens. A few lasers hit him but he wasn’t severely wounded. He punched the alien in the face and took his laser from him and used it against him. He then took out the other two aliens. He headed towards Dr. Erika Woodson’s office. “Are you OK?” asked John. “I’m okay.” She replied. John feels a rumble. A soldier is running firing rounds from his grenade launcher at the aliens. “Good morning Major Jackson.” says John. Major Orlando Jackson then ignored him and kept on firing rounds. John then took a pistol out of Jackson’s back pocket and began to fire at the aliens. “I think that’s all of them.” says Orlando. “DO YOU THINK SO!?” yells an unknown voice. It’s an infantry alien. John then shoots him with the pistol. “No, I know so.” A soldier then runs through the hallway “The ship is crash landing on an unknown alien colony!” said the soldier. “Aw crap, what are we going to do?” The engine is destroyed along with the cooling chambers. It is headed very fast towards the planet. It then crashes into a forest. |
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| 10 Oct 2011 01:46 PM |
| Chapter 2: “Is everyone all right?” a voice says in the rubble. John gets out of the rubble. He then checks the communications antennae. “Communications are out. No internet reception. We cannot communicate at all.” says John. John then walks towards the forest. He exchanges his rifle for a sniper. A soldier, Freddie Carter follows him. He has a silenced SMG. “Shh… Let’s do this quietly.” They then take out 2 infantry troopers. They then move up towards the mountains. They then find a destroyed robot drone. John examines it. It has ancient markings on it. “Were these robots here first? Or were they sent out by us humans?” asked Freddie. “I don’t know. But they are way too ancient to be sent out by humans. And it looks like a fossil now.” says John. “Looks like something from Half-Life if you ask me.” says Freddie. They both continue towards the mountainside. John takes out his sniper rifle and he is looking at a group of soldiers. 6 soldiers have been captured by infantry aliens. “I think they’re going to kill them.” says Freddie. “Not on my watch.” says John as he pulls the pin of a frag grenade and throws it towards the group. The soldiers then duck for cover and the infantry troops get killed in the blast. John and Freddie then slide down the mountain and recruit the 6 soldiers. “They took the General and the female scientist!” says a soldier. John then grabs him by shirt and pushes him to the tree. “WHERE!?” yells John. “Towards the huge space ship over there.” the soldier says as he points out to it. “Freddie, stay here and look for more soldiers. I’m going to rescue Erika and the General.” |
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| 10 Oct 2011 01:50 PM |
| Chapter 3: John enters inside the space carrier searching for the General and Erika. He silently assassinates two infantry soldiers. He then runs towards the prison chambers. He then presses the green button on each door and frees all prisoners. No luck finding the two yet. But he found soldiers and they joined him. Two Hunter-Killers then corner John in the hallway. “Okay tough guys. You win.” John drops his weapons. But he pulls a frag grenade out of his pocket and throws it at one of them. He uses the acid gun from the downed Hunter-Killer to take out the other one. He then goes to the captain’s quarters by using the elevator. But, danger awaits. Two wolverine soldiers jump down the shaft and land on top of the elevator. John then puts his shotgun into the vent on the elevator ceiling and fires. Both wolverines got killed in one shot. He then makes it towards the quarters. Erika and the General are in arm chairs. A Royal Infantry soldier then enters through the main entrance. He throws him a laser katana. John uses this to his advantage. He constantly blocks his attacks and eventually fires a pistol shot from the hip and downs the Royal Soldier. He isn’t dead, but wounded. John takes the other katana and brings both towards his neck. “Don’t tell your master who did this. Or it will be over for you.” He then kicks him aside and frees the two prisoners. Meanwhile the other soldiers are placing explosives into the engines room and all around the ship. They even found a nuclear bomb. “We gotta leave now.” says John. He picks up Erika and runs to the elevator. The elevator wasn’t there but he jumped through the shaft and landed onto the docking bay’s floor. He then hijacks a space carrier that could fit 3 people. The three get in and leave. The space carrier then explodes. “Where are we going?” asked Erika. “We’re headed to the citadel. But we are taking the shortcut through the beach. It’s much easier for them to track us if we fly straight there. We’re going through the beach, then through the swamp and to the citadel to end the longtime alien conflict.” replies John. “So we are going to assassinate the alien leader?” “Yes. Yes we are.” |
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