rsmithnvm
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| 07 Oct 2011 09:22 PM |
[If you haven't read Chapter 7, Do it now. http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=55941515] [Also this Chapter is all Blue Striker's Point of View, you would know who he is if you have read the previous Chapters, Enjoy.]
I wandered the place, blood on the walls, dead people laying down, weapons laying on top of them. I was with Ghost Dagger, Vetor, Zeno, and Vextrona. We turned corners aiming our guns, we walked down halls. We saw nothing, "LET US..." Someone yelled near by. We walked down to the end of the hall, and turned the corner where we saw R.A.T holding Vextrus and Vivex Xul. Guns straight at their heads, they didn't spot us though. We crouched and walked down the hall quietly, and then the R.A.T dragged them away. -- Vetor walked in front of me, and we looked over the corner, and a R.A.T popped out with his gun hitting Vetor in the face. The R.A.T reacted fast and pulled his trigger, and the bullet landed into Vetor's middle section of his chest tearing his bones, ripping them like paper. "Ah!" He let out a little scream, but his breath had been clogged, he has been killed. - We stood over Vetor, and his ribs were bleeding. Blood coming out of his mouth like a waterfall, the others looked at him disgusted, yet they were sad. They've lost a friend which they met in a prison cell. Not a good way to meet, am I right? - We stepped over dead Vetor, and continued. We followed the trails of blood, and there stood R.A.T guarding the hall staring us in the eye. They aimed their guns quickly and they held them steady. Ghost quickly ran up with a knife in his hand, and dug it into a R.A.T's neck. The R.A.T aimed his pistol at Ghost and shot him in the side, and then in the neck. Ghost fell over the dead R.A.T's body, and layed dead. Vextrona had a tear come from her eye, and it hit the bloody ground. - "Your going to hell." I told them, "Shut it kid, we already made a place for you." The R.A.T told me with a gun at my head. "Well, atleast I can do this." I said. I grabbed his gun and put it against his neck making him pull the trigger. The R.A.T behind me shot his gun and it landed in the wall, Zeno ran up, and shot the R.A.T in the head. And we walked through the halls over the bloody dead R.A.T, and my fellow dead friend, Ghost. - We came up to a door, smoke came through the bottom crack. I opened the door, and took a peak with my eye. - Vivex had his hands and legs tied against a stick. Vextrus was on the floor getting kicked in the face; bleeding to death. We walked in with risk, pointing our guns at the R.A.T. My mind was cleared of all things, I closed my eyes, and quickly forced them open. I ran quickly towards a R.A.T; gun and sword in my hand. I dug my sword into the R.A.T's back, and shot him in the head. I ran to the R.A.T killing Vextrus, and shot him in the head twice. - Vextrona ran to Vivex, and cut the ropes that held him. We all grabbed our guns facing the R.A.T that guarded CT. I looked at the R.A.T's finger, and they all had their finger on the trigger ready for a massacre. "Well, how does it feel? How does it feel to be ready to die?" CT asked. "A-awesome." Vextrus said bleeding, and his face hit the pavement. - The door creaked, and I turned around seeing the other VAC and VAK. Xevon stood by Javier, and the other VAC with their guns pointing at the R.A.T. Xenondryyak came out of the crowd of R.A.T. "You pathetic traitor!" Javier yelled giving him an evil look. "Xevon, lets finish them all." Vextron said taking a look at all of the VAC and VAK that stood. Then CT walked back, "Kill them all, I don't want to see anyone alive!" CT yelled at his men. - Vextrus stood up with a gun in his hand, and we all stood there in a crowd, side by side. We put our fingers on the trigger. "Kill them!" Xevon yelled. Then hell flooded the room.
[Vaktovian {2} Chapter 9, Coming Soon] |
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123John3
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| 07 Oct 2011 09:25 PM |
Cool Story Bro
No im serious. I read it and it was decent enough for a good story. |
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Ipwny0u
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| 07 Oct 2011 09:39 PM |
| Good story, but you really should work on grammar. I mean, it Chapter 7, you said "there" instead of "their" and "Are" instead of "Our". Now I'm no English Professor, but anyone should know that. |
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| 07 Oct 2011 09:49 PM |
| I..died..in..this...chapter...I can't belive it. I died in a bad way. Killed by a R.A.T...That's not right. |
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| 07 Oct 2011 10:01 PM |
| Yay I didn't Die "YET" Still who is Xenondryyak? |
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| 07 Oct 2011 10:31 PM |
| I would hate being kicked to death. Yet if your getting kicked in the gut like 50 times you would probobly be dead already or have broken ribs.... or both. |
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Dravolt
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| 08 Oct 2011 01:12 AM |
"Zeno ran up, and shot a RAT in the face." Now thats me.
That kill above was for all my comrades who died. So, if I die next, make it epic, for all my comrades.
~Zeno~
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skwert711
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| 08 Oct 2011 07:30 AM |
| I would have died in e heroic way. D: |
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| 08 Oct 2011 08:43 AM |
Amazing. Can I be in the next story? |
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| 08 Oct 2011 09:01 AM |
| Can I be in it? I'm a supervisor in RAT. |
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MannyPeng
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| 08 Oct 2011 01:28 PM |
| Yay, I still haven't died yet! Sad face for you dead guys. |
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ib252190
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| 08 Oct 2011 03:05 PM |
| I wish to be in it, it's awesome. |
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ib252190
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| 08 Oct 2011 03:06 PM |
| My Vaktovian name is Sulvak if you want to use it in the story instead of ib252. |
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| 08 Oct 2011 03:07 PM |
The-?
I was writing something with the same title.
Y r meh from teh future? :O
So........Still playing riblox am I? D: |
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moaf
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| 08 Oct 2011 03:10 PM |
| In reality, the VAC's would be asking the VAK's for promotions, or shooting eachother. |
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MannyPeng
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| 14 Oct 2011 08:38 PM |
| @Moaf: Not in a -life-and-death- situation! |
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| 03 Jan 2013 10:45 PM |
| Good times... I am Xenondryyak, by the way. |
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