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| 07 Oct 2011 10:13 PM |
Memorial Story on how Crak spent his last hours, this story is of course exagerated.
"Hey Crak wake up!" called a Private in the same drop ship as Crak. Crak Grunted and sat up in his seat, He gave the Private a "Im going to kill you if this isin't important." look and said "What is it Now?" the private pointed to the ground under them, the wilderness of the Karzan Outpost was one to be feared, but Crak saw nothing moving in the trees. He looked at the Private iritated and said again "What is it now!" the private look at the Colonel and said "Sir, General Korvak and a Unit of Grey Knights are approaching the outpost, crak looked down and sure enough, he saw Generals Korvak's cape behind the man himself, He ordered the pilot to land infront of them, the Pilot did just that. "Just the Man I wanted to see." Said General Korvak as Crak climbed out of the drop ship, Crak Saluted The General and they shook hands. "Take a walk." Ordered General Korvak to the Private aboard the ship and then he turned his attention to the Grey Knights. He spoke like the Autarch " Listen up Grey Knights, I want you to make a full sweep of the Jungle, leave no inch of the Jungle un checked leave no rock un turned, I want this place secure now on the double men!" Crak reconginzed most of the men Who Bravely Saluted the general and made they're venture into the dangerous Jungle they're where four Grey Knight soldiers Oxide, Eaglesword They are Grey knight forgemaster and the other two where Toberdam and poik12 They where both Champions in the Grey knights.
The private sat in his chair shocked that General Korvak himself gave him a order "Your still here?" said General Korvak giving the Private a dirty eye The Private quickly turned and ran out of the drop ship almost falling over in the process, Crak chuckled as he sat back down in his Seat, The General spoke softly but firmly. He told crak that the war agains R.A.T was Nearly won, and all that was needed was one final push, "But." said General Korvak and Crak smirked, "Theres always a but." he said looking out into the wilderness he could see the grey knights Slicing stray raiders to pieces. "Da, there is always a but." He then went on to explain that they we where being cut down by a Rat Ally Rms, they decided to join the conflict. "And let me guess sir, You want me and a couple of men to push Rms back away for the final battle so that you and the other troops may concentrate on Rat." Korvak smiled and nodded.
Crak Nodded, He knew what he had to do "You going to pick my team, or do I get the honors?" Korvak Smiled and said "I already have a team picked out for you, but feel free to make additions." Crak smiled and said. "It depends on who you picked." Korvak smiled at him and said "Well, theres Toberdam, Oxide, Brickster, And Minktorav. Minktorav will help you lead the team, sound right?" Crak smiled and said, "Tell me when we move out."
*4 weeks later*
The time was 4 in the morning, Crak and his team crawled slowly toward the Rms Camp of soldiers, Crak and Tober where on a cliff where two snipers looked down on the camp, Minktorav and the others made they're way through the woods, Crak made eye contact with Tober and made a count down with his fingers, 1....2....3 The both stood up slowly Knives drawn, Crak moved faster than a Puma, He wrapped his Hand Around the mouth of the Rms troopers mouth and Slit his throat slowly, Corner to corner, blood oozed from the dead soldiers Neck, Tober moved just as fast but He stabbed the Rms soldier reapeatedly until the Unsuspecting soldier ceased to move, Crak called Minktorav through the Radio "You ready on your side?" within seconds Pogrom Minktorav answered "Da, we are in position are the snipers dead?" Crak Answer back just as quick "Roger, the buggers didin't even know what hit them." Minktorav Answered back "Good, your call when do we charge in?" Crack grabbed the Rms soldiers sniper rifle and aimed down at a soldier Leaning against a Truck, He pulled the trigger and the soldier fell down missing his head. "Now..."
Within Seconds, A full out fire fight began, Crak and Tober made they're way down the cliff, The kept they're eyes on the battle and they're guns ready to fire, when they reached the battle they could see the Unit Shooting and ripping apart The Rms Troops, Minktorav Was cutting them apart with his two favorite swords which where a 2 Spatha blades, He sliced through his enemies like there was no tommorow, Crak smiled, the Carnage was immense and there was no reported casualty on our side, The Rms soldier where trying to run, but it was invain. The Vaktovians ripped through them, Minktorav stomped on the back of they battalions leader. The Leader screamed in Pain The scream was blood curling Minktorav laughed and screamed at the man "SQUEAL PIG! SQUEAL!"
all the other vaktovians laughed but one laugh stood in abundance, a Rather pained laugh it came from the man on the ground, the man said "Fool! hahaha! We where but a portion of the men in this camp they should be back any moment now,then you will really feel pain! hahahah!" The man coughed blood up Minktorav dropped one of his swords and picked the man up off the ground with one arm, and threw him into the windsheild of a truck. "Say hello to Lucy for me? will you?" Then he stabbed into the mans chest, the blade went straight through and could be seen inside the truck, the Man ceased to breath within seconds.
The Vaktovians looked around, obviously on edge could what the man said have been true? could there be more of them? Minktorav saw this and tried to re-assure them "Oh come on Fellas, This man was obviously bluffing there is no more people here! we did it!" Just then a explosion occured, A tank projectie smashed into the camp making Minktorav jump "or not." Minktorav Muttered The Vaktovians quickly got on guard, The opened fire, but where quickly overwhelemed Oxide took a bullet to the chest, Toberdam and Crak pulled him behind the building, the entire team was there now, Out of the corner of Craks eye he saw the Private running out with a Rpg, He yelled "FOR THE VAKTOVIAN EMPIRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" And aimed the Rpg at the Tank, the missle was enough to take out the tank,Sadly The Rms soldiers quickly gunned him down, He fell backward. Crak looked away from the Private he always mistreated, he Died to help they're cause and Crak couldn't even be nice to him.
Minktorav looked at him and said "it isin't your fualt, Rhodes died to help us." Then it occured to Crak he didint even bother to ask The private his name it turned it it was Rhodes Just then Crak had a crazy Idea. "If I get you that Rpg can you take out the tank?" Minktorav said "Yeah, but getting to it is impossible unless...NO!" but it was to late Crak was already out of cover, He opened fire on the Rms soldiers catching them off guard, he managed to kill a couple of them, He grabbed the Rpg and spun and threw it towards Minktorav who caught it, He Screamed at Crak to get behind cover, but it was to late The Rms soldiers opened fire, Crak felt every singly bullet hit his body,blood oozed from his mouth, He fell back gasping for air.
Minktorav screamed in anger "NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He ran out and fired the Rpg At the tank destroying it, The Others Began to open fire Oxide had died of his injury And the Remaining Vaktovians were Iching for a fight, Brickster told Minktorav to Move it but Minktorav was way ahead of him, and the Until Ran toward the Enemy at the speed of sound and quickly finished them off, but to what end? three casualties before the fight even started, Minktorav ran to Crak who was still gasping for air, "Stay with me!" he shrieked as he called for a Medic, but It was no help, Craks wounds where to plentiful, they got him on the dropship to the main battle field, but He died of injurys within the hour.
CrakTheRaven is to be remembered as a Vaktovian Hero who gave up alot to be in the empire, May he be remembered as one of our Brothers.
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| 07 Oct 2011 10:19 PM |
| Mike, Sir, Can you come to my place? I Wish to speak with you. Thanks. |
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meto02
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| 07 Oct 2011 10:19 PM |
| And den crak and me lived happily ever after. |
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| 07 Oct 2011 10:19 PM |
"He wrapped his Hand Around the mouth of the Rms troopers mouth and Slit his throat slowly, Corner to corner, blood oozed from the dead soldiers Neck"
mmmmmm-mmm,, thats how i want to die - right there yum |
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| 07 Oct 2011 10:20 PM |
| give me a sec and is no one reading it? |
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Elendill
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Pixiepie9
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| 07 Oct 2011 10:21 PM |
| A good but confusing soul. A good story but I wonder what his last hours really were. |
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| 07 Oct 2011 10:21 PM |
Studioscript the writer of this short story thinks you are one sick puppy x3
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| 07 Oct 2011 10:23 PM |
[19:54] Miss Octavia (Crak): looks kinda ugly without a body [19:54] Miss Octavia (Crak): ;v [19:55] Miss Octavia (Crak): And it's too pink. [19:55] Miss Octavia (Crak): >>. [20:00] Miss Octavia (Crak): wekk [20:00] Miss Octavia (Crak): i quit vak [20:00] Miss Octavia (Crak): ;v [20:07] Miss Octavia (Crak): meettto [20:15] Miss Octavia (Crak): Meeeetooo [20:16] [Marshal] meto02: back [20:16] [Marshal] meto02: WTF [20:17] [Marshal] meto02: YOU QUIT VAK?!!??!
His last minutes.^ |
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| 07 Oct 2011 10:25 PM |
Meto for once, dont do something that stupid and enjoy this story.
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meto02
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| 07 Oct 2011 10:27 PM |
| its really what happened. >.> |
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| 07 Oct 2011 10:28 PM |
OK but I didint ask not did anyone else. Just read the story, Which Im sure you havent
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| 07 Oct 2011 10:28 PM |
| Nice story, Though I always wonder what Crak might have done if he had stayed one bit longer. |
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blazar
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| 07 Oct 2011 10:54 PM |
Technically.
He was soon to be exiled for joining RAT. |
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| 07 Oct 2011 10:56 PM |
| Yeah, but atleast He left on his own. |
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| 07 Oct 2011 10:57 PM |
"Tober moved just as fast but He stabbed the Rms soldier reapeatedly "
...*Grins* |
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| 07 Oct 2011 11:03 PM |
| Quite, amazing I should say. Just quite amazing. Me and Crak were always friends, Till I was randomly exiled. I shall no further make contact with Vaktovia. |
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| 07 Oct 2011 11:08 PM |
I see you liked it huh Tober hehe
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