Furvain
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| 07 Oct 2011 05:48 PM |
The dark lands, the home of the vile Korblox Tribes. The legions of The Redcliff march towards the domain of the Korblox. As the Redcliff meet their adversary on the windswept plains, the sound of steel against steel is prevalent. Warriors on both sides are fighting and dying for their cause. As a lone Redcliff soldier charges toward a Korblox Deathspeaker, a Berserker steps into his path. Enraged, the Berserker brings its mighty claymore down upon the soldiers shield, shattering it. Seeing his chance to strike, the soldier drives his blade into the rocky surface of the Berserkers stomach. The Berserker then let out an ear-piercing shriek, a horrid distortion of a human scream of agony. Distracted by the scream; the Deathspeaker stabs its accursed dagger into the back of the soldiers neck. The soldier’s comrades caught up with him and as they looked on, the soldier got up and starred into their eyes. His face a mask of horror, his eyes then rolled up into his head and his jaw dropped, arms raised; he staggered towards his comrades. Just then, a flaming arrow streaked past the other soldiers head, razing his facial hair and planted itself in the forehead of the undead soldier. The undead soldier fell to his knees and slumped to the ground; this was the first death and it will not be the last. The end of peace has come; the beginning of chaos is neigh.
(May be a few grammatical and spelling mistakes, thank you for reading)
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ultima44
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| 07 Oct 2011 05:51 PM |
just to let you know, i didn't read it but i liked it |
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Furvain
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Furvain
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Screeper
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| 07 Oct 2011 05:52 PM |
Neigh?
Other than that, GREAT! |
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| 07 Oct 2011 05:53 PM |
You should put this in the RT forum. Make it as a choose your fate kind of thing. For example:
You turn to face another soldier:
A: Run B: Fight C: Shout for help
Will you do this story in that kind of form? |
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Furvain
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| 07 Oct 2011 05:53 PM |
"Neigh"
N-eye
Meaning "Now" or "Soon" |
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Furvain
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| 07 Oct 2011 05:55 PM |
Masterpilot.
That is a great idea, I may enact it. |
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Furvain
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Cubeish
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Furvain
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kinglute
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| 07 Oct 2011 06:05 PM |
| Send me the link to the thread by PMing me when it's up. I'll be one of your readers. |
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Furvain
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| 07 Oct 2011 06:10 PM |
@Kinglute
I love Roblox, yo. Enough to write a story about it. Yes. You're right. |
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Furvain
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| 07 Oct 2011 06:12 PM |
@Masterpilot
I won't be starting it in awhile. I have to wait a bit before I get some more inspiration juice.
Sorry brotha. |
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Furvain
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| 07 Oct 2011 06:30 PM |
Now I find the saying I say to many is now incredibly difficult for me to follow:
Patience is a virtue my friend.
-_- |
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Furvain
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| 07 Oct 2011 06:31 PM |
| Yeah, my threads always drop like rocks in a pond though. |
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fuggi23
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Furvain
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| 07 Oct 2011 06:35 PM |
Thanks fuggi23.
Just for ya'lls information, this story was actually from a dream I had about Roblox. Yes, I'm that addicted. |
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| 07 Oct 2011 06:35 PM |
@Furvain
Try a bit of tea while typing. It's helped me quite a bit. |
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Maddie369
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