rsmithnvm
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| 02 Oct 2011 09:26 PM |
[Before you read this, if you haven't read Chapter 5, do it now. http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=55532119]
I sat there confused, a teen. I didn't know what happened of course, I wore a Vaktovian suit, black with the Private First Class symbol. I was a Vaktovian Army Corp, but I guess not anymore. It's like the future has zoomed ahead. - I walked out the door my head in a knot, I saw Xevon, and Javier by the gate. I walked towards them, "What happened?" I asked. They looked at me confused, "CT forfeited, but he hasn't gave up yet." Xevon told me. "Not what I meant." I asked, "Why am I a teen?" I asked him. "Don't you remember anything?" Javier asked. "Nope." I told him. - "First, we had a celebration for our glorious win. Second, years passed after that. Third, you kind of got cought, and now your memory has been lost." Xevon said. "Wow, that's new, I remember you both shooting me with a gun that made me faint." I told him. "The machine makes you think differently." Javier told me. - "So what's going on now?" I asked, "Well, Vaktus our Glorious Emperor! Has planned an attack on RAT. To finish it all, alot of us will die. Also you met up with another brother. His names Vivex Xul." He is a Vaktovian Army Corp, but of course you wouldn't remember anything." Xevon said. -- "When are we attacking?" I asked. "Tomorrow morning, our Emperor is not going to participate, we are too bring CT to him. Then he can finish him off himself. This will be the end of the whole war, which alot of us are going to die in the end. Can't promise we wont all die." - "That's awesome, this war is going to be a blood shed." I told him. "Why wouldn't it be? Wars are always bloody." Javier said. "We need to rest, we haven't slept in days. Which my eyes are melting down to the limit." Xevon said. "We shall all rest, besides it's the middle of the night." Javier said. "Is everyone a sleep?" I asked, "Yup." Replied Xevon. We walked too our little homes, and we went to sleep, except me. - I stayed up thinking : Am I going to die? Am I going to live? Would we all survive the war? All I had were questions flying out of my head, but I couldn't see the future. I closed my eyes, the lid covered my light green eyes, and all I saw was the darkness, of the end of life, and the end of future. - My head was filled with questions and answers, I knew I would die maybe, since I was already killed once already. Which that was my second life, everyone knows you never get a third, but my soul will roam Vaktovia and always stay with it. R.A.T were going to get put down to their puny size. We will win this war! - I woke up, as did all the others, they were prepared, glowing helmets, dark armor. We were all ready for the war, we will not fall, we are the strongest, no-one can defeat us. I headed out the door, and there stood lined up Vaktovians holding guns, most were grown up, most weren't. I was the oldest Teen Vaktovian there, besides the older Vaktovians that have been serving Vaktovia for years. - Two gunships sat outside which were going to be packed with Vaktovians, "We will destroy these R.A.T!" Yelled someone. I stared at the Vaktovian commanding, and he wore a uniform like a coat. Xevon came up to my side. "Who's that?" I asked pointing. "That would be our Emperor, he is commanding the Vaktovians, and giving them the top plan." Xevon told me. - The Vaktovians huddled out the gate, and into the gunship. The Emperor took a glance at us, and started walk towards us with his hands behind his back. "Are you ready for our Invasion?" He asked. "Yes, Sir." Xevon said saluting. I took a look at him, "Come back alive, I have plans for you." Vaktus told me. "I'll try." I told him, and I saluted. - "Now, Go." Vaktus told us, we walked out the gate and into the gunship. We were in the battle.
VAK Vs. R.A.T
[Vaktovian {2} Chapter 7, Coming Soon] |
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Rockzdude
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john2122
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| 02 Oct 2011 10:52 PM |
| Your story is really good. Oh and btw if you didn't notice i include your characters in my last story. |
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moaf
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| 02 Oct 2011 10:53 PM |
"First, we had a celebration for our glorious win."
/ this is a kids game |
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tuxedoo
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Ryanr23
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| 03 Oct 2011 07:36 PM |
moaf
says the one that raig that he didnt get promote to level 2 in VAC |
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Ryanr23
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| 03 Oct 2011 07:37 PM |
opps not the right person
sorry moaf |
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Dravolt
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Elendill
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| 06 Oct 2011 12:11 AM |
"Good Job!" But seriously, These Vaktovian stories are getting annoying. |
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kremon
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| 06 Oct 2011 03:07 AM |
| Nice, I enjoy reading these, Cant wait for Chapter 7, Hail Emperor Vaktus! |
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mokoa3
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| 06 Oct 2011 08:49 AM |
| The story is great! can not wait for more chapters. |
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| 06 Oct 2011 09:02 AM |
well written, would love to see the next chapter
-PtCC |
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