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| 03 Oct 2011 06:19 PM |
Hi fellow ROBLOXians! This is my new book, Dragon Ball Revenge. I'm going to give you the beginning of my story and I want you to tell me if you like it and if I should continue. DO NOT SAY THIS IS COPIED FROM DRAGON BALL, BECAUSE I AM COMPLETELY AWARE OF THAT!!! Here it is:
He lay helplessly on the ground, beaten and tired. I laughed. "You are pathetic! You know you can't beat the power of a true Super Saiyan. Why do you even try?" He did not reply."Well?" Still nothing. "Pitiful..." I said. "GRAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!" Yelled the creature as he shot a beam of energy from his hands. "Hahaha!" I laughed. "Weakling!" I easily deflected the attack, which shot to somewhere behind the creature. There was a huge explosion as the rocks and the earth disintegrated almost instantly. "No!" Said the creature. "Lets end this!" I said. "Kame..." I started, "Hame..." I continued, "HA!" I yelled as I thrust my hands forward. A big blue wave of energy that had been gathering in my hands shot out and hit the creature. The creature barely had time to scream before he died.
So? What do you think? Should I continue? If enough people say that I should continue, I will. If you wish to hear the rest and others do not I will personally send you a message containing little bits of the story. Archive them to hear them all!
Bye!
-Arceus |
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:30 PM |
Btw, every once in a while I will post something random on here so that it will stay on the new page so more people will see it and comment and it will stay new and blablabla you get the point.
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:31 PM |
| I will give you a 1/10 for attempt. Be more subtle when trolling next time and you may just get a higher score. |
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:32 PM |
Ahem... Do you SEE an anime section? Stfu. |
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:32 PM |
@Arceus Ahem, do you know anime sucks? Stfu. |
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:33 PM |
PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFT
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA HA HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAHAAAAAAHAAAAAAAAAA LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLORFOCOPTERROFLLMFAOLOLOLOLOLOL HA HA HA HA HAAAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.....
ah ha ha...ha...ha... *clears throat* Dragon Ball? Seriously? |
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:33 PM |
@player Ahem. Do you know a lot of people LIKE anime? stfu |
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:33 PM |
@Arceus It's called roleplaying troll. |
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:34 PM |
@Arceus
Only those fat unsocial weeaboos/otakus no one cares about or treats them like they have a disease. |
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moose1997
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:34 PM |
its not going to be built upon
Gappo gappo |
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:35 PM |
@player Ahem. Do you know I have a lot of friends, none of them treat me like I have a disease? Stfu |
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:36 PM |
Ahem. Do you know I have a lot of friends, none of them treat me like I have a disease? Stfu ---------------------------------------------------- Because they have the same disease. HA HA HA
I R SO FUNNEZ! |
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:36 PM |
@Arceus >Friends
Oh look it's a kid who's pretending he has friends and he's attempting to be cool by constantly using the word "STFU" which isn't even a word. |
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Gengar49
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:38 PM |
Hello. You must be new to the internet. Let me welcome you with a gunshot. |
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:41 PM |
| You know what? Just SHUT UP! Stop being jerks, stop bullying and trolling on my posts! Get a life! You people with 5000 posts just go around looking for someone to post something you don't like so you can go say "Oh you nerd with no friends HAHAHAHAHA I'm so awesome" Just SHUT UP, because ultimately, you are just going to fail in this world and end up in jail someday because you just wanted to troll people and be a jerk. |
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:42 PM |
| I love how he thinks he locked the thread, what a new faaaaaa-*shot*. |
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:43 PM |
You know what? Just SHUT UP! Stop being jerks, stop bullying and trolling on my posts! Get a life! You people with 5000 posts just go around looking for someone to post something you don't like so you can go say "Oh you nerd with no friends HAHAHAHAHA I'm so awesome" Just SHUT UP, because ultimately, you are just going to fail in this world and end up in jail someday because you just wanted to troll people and be a jerk. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Trolls win again.
Trolls You ------- ---------- 1 0 |
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:43 PM |
| Please, let me show you the way out. |
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:43 PM |
| Being a jerk will get me in jail? Okay. Anyhow I don't work like that. I am just a terrible person and have to post negatively on almost every thread I want to reply to. |
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| 03 Oct 2011 06:43 PM |
| I don't think I locked the thread, loser, and wow, is that your best comeback? See you in heaven! Oh wait...no I won't. |
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