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Re: New Book I'm Writing! (Dragon Ball Revenge)

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arceus090909 is not online. arceus090909
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03 Oct 2011 06:19 PM
Hi fellow ROBLOXians! This is my new book, Dragon Ball Revenge.
I'm going to give you the beginning of my story and I want you to tell me if you like it and if I should continue. DO NOT SAY THIS IS COPIED FROM DRAGON BALL, BECAUSE I AM COMPLETELY AWARE OF THAT!!! Here it is:

He lay helplessly on the ground, beaten and tired. I laughed. "You are pathetic! You know you can't beat the power of a true Super Saiyan. Why do you even try?" He did not reply."Well?" Still nothing. "Pitiful..." I said. "GRAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!" Yelled the creature as he shot a beam of energy from his hands. "Hahaha!" I laughed. "Weakling!" I easily deflected the attack, which shot to somewhere behind the creature. There was a huge explosion as the rocks and the earth disintegrated almost instantly. "No!" Said the creature. "Lets end this!" I said. "Kame..." I started, "Hame..." I continued, "HA!" I yelled as I thrust my hands forward. A big blue wave of energy that had been gathering in my hands shot out and hit the creature. The creature barely had time to scream before he died.

So? What do you think? Should I continue? If enough people say that I should continue, I will. If you wish to hear the rest and others do not I will personally send you a message containing little bits of the story. Archive them to hear them all!

Bye!

-Arceus
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arceus090909 is not online. arceus090909
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03 Oct 2011 06:30 PM
Btw, every once in a while I will post something random on here so that it will stay on the new page so more people will see it and comment and it will stay new and blablabla you get the point.
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player1213 is not online. player1213
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03 Oct 2011 06:31 PM
>based on anime
Get out.
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pandasrock is not online. pandasrock
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03 Oct 2011 06:31 PM
I will give you a 1/10 for attempt. Be more subtle when trolling next time and you may just get a higher score.
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arceus090909 is not online. arceus090909
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03 Oct 2011 06:32 PM
Ahem...
Do you SEE an anime section? Stfu.
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player1213 is not online. player1213
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03 Oct 2011 06:32 PM
@Arceus
Ahem, do you know anime sucks? Stfu.
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sonicfan276 is not online. sonicfan276
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03 Oct 2011 06:33 PM
PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFT

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA HA HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAHAAAAAAHAAAAAAAAAA
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLORFOCOPTERROFLLMFAOLOLOLOLOLOL
HA HA HA HA HAAAAAAAA
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.....

ah ha ha...ha...ha...
*clears throat*
Dragon Ball? Seriously?
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arceus090909 is not online. arceus090909
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03 Oct 2011 06:33 PM
@player
Ahem. Do you know a lot of people LIKE anime? stfu
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pandasrock is not online. pandasrock
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03 Oct 2011 06:33 PM
@Arceus
It's called roleplaying troll.
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player1213 is not online. player1213
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03 Oct 2011 06:34 PM
@Arceus

Only those fat unsocial weeaboos/otakus no one cares about or treats them like they have a disease.
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moose1997 is not online. moose1997
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03 Oct 2011 06:34 PM
its not going to be built upon

Gappo gappo
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doomspire392 is not online. doomspire392
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03 Oct 2011 06:34 PM
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arceus090909 is not online. arceus090909
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03 Oct 2011 06:35 PM
@player
Ahem. Do you know I have a lot of friends, none of them treat me like I have a disease? Stfu
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sonicfan276 is not online. sonicfan276
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03 Oct 2011 06:36 PM
Ahem. Do you know I have a lot of friends, none of them treat me like I have a disease? Stfu
----------------------------------------------------
Because they have the same disease.
HA
HA
HA

I R SO FUNNEZ!
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player1213 is not online. player1213
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03 Oct 2011 06:36 PM
@Arceus
>Friends

Oh look it's a kid who's pretending he has friends and he's attempting to be cool by constantly using the word "STFU" which isn't even a word.
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03 Oct 2011 06:36 PM
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Gengar49 is not online. Gengar49
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03 Oct 2011 06:38 PM
Hello. You must be new to the internet.
Let me welcome you with a gunshot.
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arceus090909 is not online. arceus090909
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03 Oct 2011 06:41 PM
You know what? Just SHUT UP! Stop being jerks, stop bullying and trolling on my posts! Get a life! You people with 5000 posts just go around looking for someone to post something you don't like so you can go say "Oh you nerd with no friends HAHAHAHAHA I'm so awesome" Just SHUT UP, because ultimately, you are just going to fail in this world and end up in jail someday because you just wanted to troll people and be a jerk.
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03 Oct 2011 06:42 PM
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player1213 is not online. player1213
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03 Oct 2011 06:42 PM
I love how he thinks he locked the thread, what a new faaaaaa-*shot*.
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sonicfan276 is not online. sonicfan276
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03 Oct 2011 06:43 PM
You know what? Just SHUT UP! Stop being jerks, stop bullying and trolling on my posts! Get a life! You people with 5000 posts just go around looking for someone to post something you don't like so you can go say "Oh you nerd with no friends HAHAHAHAHA I'm so awesome" Just SHUT UP, because ultimately, you are just going to fail in this world and end up in jail someday because you just wanted to troll people and be a jerk.
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Trolls win again.

Trolls You
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rocknrolldude3212 is not online. rocknrolldude3212
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03 Oct 2011 06:43 PM
Please, let me show you the way out.
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pandasrock is not online. pandasrock
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03 Oct 2011 06:43 PM
Being a jerk will get me in jail? Okay. Anyhow I don't work like that. I am just a terrible person and have to post negatively on almost every thread I want to reply to.
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aerosmith09 is not online. aerosmith09
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03 Oct 2011 06:43 PM
Lol someone got trolled
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arceus090909 is not online. arceus090909
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03 Oct 2011 06:43 PM
I don't think I locked the thread, loser, and wow, is that your best comeback? See you in heaven! Oh wait...no I won't.
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