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| 03 Oct 2011 08:20 PM |
It was a winter that I will never forget. I was just a pup wen this bloody war happened.The Frost pack was at war with the Shadow pack. My parents wanted me to live during this war,so they sent me with a Flame pack family to keep me safe.The Frost pack and the Flame pack were both allies so I was with them for bit. About a week or two later i was kidnapped by the Shadow pack,but I escaped. On the way back i found a sleeping Flame wolf leaning on a tree.I started to sniff her then when i was sniffing her,she woke up and what she saw startled her. A pari of dark blue eyes glaring right into her red eyes. I said in a soft squeeky voice "Froststar". She looked at me like I was physco,but she said back "Flameheart". I helped her up and we both walked back to her teritory. By the time we got backthe war was over! But when Flameheart walked me back,nothing was there but destroyed dens and blood. I started to cry when I what had happened. When Flame walked me to her territory we ran into a hurt wolf lying on the ground. I said "Oh my gosh he's hurt!" The wolf said back "No I am fine but can you take me to the nearest territory?" I nodded back respectfully so did flame. "Call legend,my full name is Legendpaw." I said back "That's a nice name." We arrived at the Flame pack's territory.
pt.2 coming soon! once i get 10 likes ill continue! |
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| 03 Oct 2011 08:22 PM |
What the freaking heck.
"Legendpaw" |
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| 03 Oct 2011 08:23 PM |
Meh. Decent.
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| 03 Oct 2011 08:26 PM |
| well my dream is to become a bioligist and an author so i'd really better start fixing |
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| 03 Oct 2011 08:26 PM |
4/10
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| 03 Oct 2011 08:27 PM |
| legendpaw is my favorite character |
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Chewie98
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| 03 Oct 2011 08:27 PM |
BEHOLD! THE NEXT SEPHEN KING!
"Boys I put my pants on the same way you do. One leg at a time. But when I put mine on, I make gold records" |
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| 03 Oct 2011 08:28 PM |
| what the heck does that mean |
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qwazola
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| 03 Oct 2011 08:29 PM |
... Yeah seriously, in all honestly, that wasn't that good. :/ |
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| 03 Oct 2011 08:29 PM |
qwaz Did you like mine over hers?
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| 03 Oct 2011 08:31 PM |
| -sigh- my dream of writing is oveh ill just make a new one check it out when im done its called wolves of the world |
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qwazola
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| 03 Oct 2011 08:31 PM |
Oyus. Much better.
Violin, you seriously need to work on that if you ever wanna be an author. |
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| 03 Oct 2011 08:32 PM |
| nvm what should i write about humans or wolves or both? |
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| 03 Oct 2011 08:32 PM |
Wow. You give up easily.
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| 03 Oct 2011 08:32 PM |
| Also, write about something else. Stuff like this is always poorly written, (In my eyes atleast), considering it's one of those Warrior's fanfic thingies. |
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| 03 Oct 2011 08:34 PM |
Good LORD I cannot stand the warrior animal junk.
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| 03 Oct 2011 08:38 PM |
| ITS NOT ANIMALS ANY MORE YOU JUST WANT TO BE BETTER THAN ME AND YOU'RE NOT GONNA BE BETTER CAUSE IF YOU THINK YOU'RE BETTER THAN THAT USUALY MEANS YOU'RE NOT BETTER sorry for caps i am loking at the keyboard |
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