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| 01 Oct 2011 06:03 PM |
Book:2 Chapter:1/Start of the Race Part 1 Start of the Race Part 1 It has been almost 2 months after the death of the assassin and maple’s escape. Luckly, not much had been heard from maple. Was he dead, or was he planning something? Well, it was not in the matter of FEAR right now. Things had not gone so well in the past 2 months. Killer had left FEAR and was now SiC of sleet clan. The friend they used to have was not there friend anymore. But, they were almost done rebuilding. And there would be a big celebration when they were done. Though with celebratrion there is always somebody to crash it…… “WHAT!”yelled maple slamming a screen. “Sir, the m-map to th-the key is with someone at the party…”said maple’s new assistant. Kaijin16. Maple turned back to his screen as Kai stepped back. The new assistant did not want to be in the killing range of Maple. “Who!” yelled maple. “Two girls. They are friends, and both have a part of a map. “Just give me the bloody names!” yelled Maple. “Starlightlurvv and animalmagic.” Said Kai in shaking. “Hmmm well I would love to introduce myself two these two, SET THE COORDINTES TO VENIZA!” Maple orderd. Kai noded and in no time they were off to destroy a party…… “Another drink madam?” asked the waiter. Star was not listening. She was thinking just thinking. About 3 months ago she was training in VS when an assian came. She was the one who protected Justgoaway. Then she became a general. Sitting there, people asking her for pictures and autographs. She felt good. Good that no one new about her past. “Well hello there beautiful.” Said a voice. Star turned around. To see a FEAR high rank. “Well hello there.” She said back as polite as she coul. “Stop troubling the girl.” Said another voice behind her. She quickly recognized that was FEAR leader johnster. “No, No its quite fine.” Star reassured. “Are you sure. Reaper can be a bit of a trouble maker.” Questioned John as Reaper elbowed him in the stomach. Then something quick happened. Reaper left and left the two alone. They started talking and then dancing. At the end John was about to ask her something. Though it was interrupted….
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cjt61
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| 01 Oct 2011 06:09 PM |
Yupp i is epik! :D and maple you never pm me anymore when you release a book. >:L
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cjt61
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Johnnysha
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Johnnysha
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| 01 Oct 2011 06:15 PM |
Maple? Could you please find a way to squese me inthere I would aprriciate it sir.
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| 01 Oct 2011 06:17 PM |
Lacks paragraphs.
-The naked old man who is possibly chocolate... |
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Johnnysha
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| 01 Oct 2011 06:18 PM |
| http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=55461714 Mape could you read this if you have time? I'd like you to rate it since your such a good writer... Oh and sorry if I'm annoying you with all this stuff... |
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| 01 Oct 2011 09:59 PM |
| Oh shnat the team has trouble with some girls :3 |
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| 01 Oct 2011 10:00 PM |
| Book 1:http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=49048390 |
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Kaijin16
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| 01 Oct 2011 10:02 PM |
| FINALLY you made it! I'm in it too! XD |
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| 01 Oct 2011 10:04 PM |
Hey guys if u like join:http://www.roblox.com/My/Groups.aspx?gid=337177 ALSO: Future characters... No one lol. I need good people GOOD famous cand gers to try out. Thanks. PS:All charcters that did not die in book 1 WILL appear |
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Kaijin16
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| 01 Oct 2011 10:05 PM |
| You made me look...pitiful. LOL. I'm not scared of you...XD |
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| 01 Oct 2011 10:07 PM |
| lol kai its the only place in the b00k i could fihtu in. |
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Kaijin16
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| 01 Oct 2011 10:09 PM |
| You'd better at least put me in some fights and make me kick butt XD |
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Batman438
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| 01 Oct 2011 10:10 PM |
| I want to be in the story:/ |
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Kaijin16
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| 01 Oct 2011 10:12 PM |
| At any rate, I'm going to go make chapter two of my book! If you guys like Maple's book, you should take a look at mine too. The link is on my profile. |
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| 02 Oct 2011 12:40 AM |
| Great start maple! I will get started with editing and making this one into a book as soon as I appear in a chapter. Lol. (Ill be waiting....) |
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| 02 Oct 2011 03:06 PM |
Ahhhhhhhhhhh Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh
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cjt61
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| 02 Oct 2011 05:10 PM |
| Maple, we needeth the next chapter! |
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| 02 Oct 2011 05:42 PM |
Maple can I be in a story one day? :o
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