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| 01 Oct 2011 06:42 PM |
The soft glow of the moon swept through the thickly forested landscape. A dirt path snaked through the dense foliage, unoccupied as the slice of moon rained down cold light around it. Almost. All of a sudden, a man came flying down the path on a white horse, dust flying under it's hooves. He was dressed in a tattered red cloak, which billowed out wildly behind him like a shadow, a white emblem showing a gryphon with a spear between it's talons flashing from it. At his side was an old, but elegant-looking sword, and a staff with various runes carved into it and charms tied around it's shaft was strapped to his back. He wasn't alone. After him came troops in shining white armor with black trim, wielding nasty-looking axes. The red rider tried to lose his pursuers, but the skilled rider caught up with him. One of the soldiers fired an arrow into the side of the man's horse, and he was thrown to the grown as it toppled over. The soldiers all laughed with a menacing coldness and moved towards him. One picked him up by the tunic and ripped off his cloak, revealing a face that was strong and determined, with elfish features, and slightly weathered with age. The soldier barked out, "You're coming with us, traitor." and all the others howled with that chilling laugh. The only response he got from the other was a snarl. The man spit in the soldier's face. The soldier shoved the man roughly back to the ground, drawing out an 'oof!' from the helpless victim. The soldiers took him and rode away. Soon after the road was as it was before, with only a light screen of swirling dust that shimmered in the moonlight.
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Alright, so the plot of this story is that the entire continent, Lucar, is controlled by Alderus Empire, an empire of humans that have driven citizens into misery and hard labor, and have chased out Dwarves, Elves, Celestials, and Orcs alike. The Daemons are the only race who have been allowed to stay, for their promise to provide the humans with power, weapons, mercenary work, and other such things. However, the circle of Consulars, a group of exalted mages, who have been driven out, have formed a group known as Magiste, a secret order of rogue humans, Elves, and Celestials who combine weapons with magic. They wield melee weapons together with staves or spears, to combine holy magic and dueling expertise. Together, they will rise to confront the Aldurans.
~Races~
HUMANS - Uh, humans? ELVES - Tall, pointy-eared, incredible eyesight, all characteristics of elves. They inhabit forests and are skilled warriors, and holy, entirely good beings. DWARVES - Short, stocky, powerfuly, hairy humans that inhabit places below ground, in mountains, or in some large cities. Master blacksmiths. CELESTIALS - Angels on Earth. Types of half angels who are very wise and work for the balance of the people. Tall, pale, fair-haired, silvery, shimmering wings. Hunted by evil humans and daemons alike. DAEMONS - Demons on Earth. These demonic exiles are powerful, greedy, evil people. Very dark skin, red eyes, leathery red wings. ORCS - Savage, green-skinned, low intelligence. Orcs are tall, vicious barbarians who either do mercenary work alone or live in tribes. |
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| 01 Oct 2011 06:54 PM |
It sounds great. :3 It seems that it's a good RP revolving around a fictional battle between the corrupt and congenial. :D |
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| 01 Oct 2011 06:56 PM |
Thank ya. Just need some help with the various rules and CS's and stuff, and I can post it. |
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| 01 Oct 2011 06:57 PM |
| Wow. It's original and it looks like you put some actual work in to creating it. I would join, for sure. Very nice. |
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| 01 Oct 2011 07:00 PM |
| If you'd like, I can copy a list of rules from one of my RPs. Most of them apply for any RP, but you may want to change a few things. :3 |
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| 01 Oct 2011 07:02 PM |
Thanks! I'm glad some people actually took the time to read it!
Hmm... for a title... how about 'Incantus'? |
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| 01 Oct 2011 07:02 PM |
CS (Temporary, feel free to change what you like)
Name:
Gender
Age:
Race:
Appearance:
Personality:
Biography:
Items:
Special Skills: (I kind of made this one up, I think that the characters should have something that sets them apart from others. Just an idea.)
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| 01 Oct 2011 07:02 PM |
A list of rules? Sure!
Floooooooodcheck. |
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| 01 Oct 2011 07:03 PM |
Incantus. "To Enchant".
I like it a lot. |
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| 01 Oct 2011 07:06 PM |
Name:
Gender
Age:
Race:
Appearance:
Personality:
Biography:
Items:
Special Skills: (I kind of made this one up, I think that the characters should have something that sets them apart from others. Just an idea.)
Spells:(Optional)
Side:
Profession:
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| 01 Oct 2011 07:07 PM |
| (YOU KNOW, LIKE, NUNCHUK SKILLS, BOW HUNTING SKILLS, COMPUTER HACKING SKILLS...I DONT HAVE ANY SKILLS!) Sorry bout that, I just finished watching Napoleon Dynamite. |
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| 01 Oct 2011 07:10 PM |
--Character Sheet Rules-- -You need to be VERY descriptive -"To be revealed" is not acceptable! -"My robloxian" is not acceptable in 'Appearance' -Use grammar -You must be accepted to begin -You may have only ONE main character
--Roleplaying Rules-- -Use grammar, and be descriptive -Please mention your character's name in every post -Story mode, please -Keep romance at a minimum -Keep curse words at a minimum -NPCs are acceptable -Be realistic please -Try not to acknowledge EVERY post {Say, someone had a thought. You can't acknowledge that, because you can't read thoughts} -No instant teleportation {Don't suddenly teleport from one place to another. Explain how you arrived at that place, and what obsticals you had to pass through} -No instant-killing, and godmodding. Your character - is NOT invinsible.
--Other Rules-- -Please, don't spam the thread with off topic conversations -No trolling, flaming, or criticism {It will result in an instant report} -Try to keep OOC {Out of Character} conversations on parties, please, unless you have a question or nobody's online, or something along those lines |
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