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| 01 Oct 2011 05:04 PM |
[Chapter Eleven] Chapter ten(Part two) here:http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=55625950
(*At the capital world of RGRM*)
The moon was up, shining high in the sky. The stars twinkled and sparkled like diamonds. A gentle breeze swept across the lands, stirring up sand and dust. Fires blazed in the city. Firefights broke out randomly. Panic on both sides. A loud blast rang out, as one of the RGRM battleships fell to the power of the RAA capitalship. The battleship was sent crashing far outside the city. Civilians ran throughout the city in panic and misery.
(*General Tango's squad*)
They continued to run across the city, being followed by a massive squad of RAA soldiers. Panting as he spoke, Noah said "We need to change course, we'll be seen if we keep going." "Negative, we'd be going slower, and the soldiers would catch back up." Replied Tango. As they were running, Daniel was applying some sort of pain patch to Private Jordan's neck. A bandage was already in place, behind it shards of glass and metal stuck into his skin. "I'm having trouble breathing, Daniel." Said Jordan. Daniel nodded and told Tango "We do need to stop, sir, otherwise we might lose Jordan." "Fine then, you have two minutes! Make it count!" Ordered Tango. The squad ran into a tall, crooked looking building. Rubble everwhere. Daniel layed Jordan down with his head bent to the right. "Hold still" he said, then he ripped off the bandage, taking most of the shards with it. Jordan's body jolted upright as he gasped in pain. "GAH!!! That hurt!" He gasped out. Noah suddenly ran out the door, acrossed the street into another building. "Where's he going?" Asked Daniel. "None of our business, back to your work" Replied Tango. Daniel applied the pain patch to Jordan's neck. "Put your helmet back on buddy." He did so, sitting up. "Two minutes up! Let's move! I can hear the soldiers coming. The squad dashed out of the building into the streets, instantly spotted by the RAA soldiers. The soldiers fired at them as they ran. "Where's Noah?!" Shouted Jordan. Daniel shrugged as he ran. Suddenly Commander Noah raced out of the building he entered, charging towards the squad. The RAA picked up pace, running after them. A loud blast rang out, the building Noah had entered exploded, toppling over into the path of the RAA. "That'll slow them down I hope."
(*Squad411 of RAA soldiers*)
Sergeant Lukas stomped his foot down in rage, yelling at his troops to get over the building. Three of them began to climb it. Suddenly a brute of a soldier, named Dash stepped forward, shoving aside a soldier, bashing into another, grabbing his RPG, loading it as he took aim, he fired at the building. Destroying a large amount of it, as well as the three soldiers that were climbing it. "I like your thinking." Said Lukas. Dash fired another shot, destroying even more of the building.
(*General Tango's squad*)
Two large blasts were heard, as Tango looked over his shoulder he noticed that the soldiers were almost completely through the fallen building. Worried he ordered "Double pace!!" The squad continued to run in the star filled night.
*To be continued*
Chapter twelve coming soon! |
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| 01 Oct 2011 05:53 PM |
| I love it, I love being in story's :) |
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| 21 Oct 2011 02:38 PM |
| This is such a great book snake! |
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| 21 Oct 2011 02:41 PM |
| Actual troops. But thanks. |
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| 06 Dec 2011 03:50 PM |
I like how the story's set out aswell
Tangy D |
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