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| 30 Sep 2011 05:29 PM |
If you have not read chapter 5, I would recommend reading it, as you won't understand this at all: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=55570944 ________________________________________________________________________
iKeyloggz: Everybody, go to the Terror's armory and grab some a gun, and a stun stick.
Others: Yes, sir.
iKeyloggz: Igunaa, Xmansos, drop us behind the base and draw their fire.
Igunaa/Xmansos: Yes, sir.
Desertedbart: The RED HQ is in sight.
Greatirondaniel: Good. I'm ready.
Vendaris: Me too.
Gromlix: We all are!
Axelvts: Yeah!
iKeyloggz: Vendaris, Gromlix, Axelvts, Greatirondaniel, and Desertedbart, on me.
Others: Yes, sir.
iKeyloggz: Jump out, and come line against the wall. Whisper, do not talk loud.
After they jumped out, the RAID Terror started to shoot at them from above, and the RED fired a missile.
Igunaa: Oh no… Xmansos, jump out! Quick! Go join the others!
Xmansos: What about you, sir?
Igunaa: Just go!
Xmansos: Yes, sir
And Xmansos jumped out, the plane exploded. Igunaa was dead.
[Back at RED Base]
Desertedbart: Plane down, let's see. Igunaa and Xmansos will come soon.
Xmansos: I'm here sir. Sir Igunaa… he sacrificed himself.
iKeyloggz: He's dead…? Everybody, one of our generals has died
Everybody: WHAT?!!??!
iKeyloggz: Quiet! Let's go in the base.
Everybody: Yes, sir.
They were creeping silently into the base, when…
RED Enlist: I heard something…
Just as he said that, he fell over dead. The RED members looked up to see the RAID squad!
DoctorCooper: I thought we killed you!
iKeyloggz: Nope! RAID, ATTACK!
DoctorCooper: RED, Defend!
And so the battle begun, bullets flew threw the air. The battle was on.
Vendaris: That's one down.
RED Lieutenant: You're going to die, RAID member!
Vendaris: Not if you die first!
And so, Vendaris took out his shotgun, and started to shoot the RED Lieutenant, but the Lieutenant dodged the bullets.
Vendaris: How?
RED Lieutenant: Secret. Now, die!
The RED Lieutenant pulled out his sword, and Vendaris pulled out his stun stick. Vendaris trusted, and the Lieutenant dodged and trusted at his arm, making a big gash
Vendaris: OW!
RED Lieutenant: Now, die!
The Lieutenant trusted at his torso, and it went right through his stomach. The lieutenant pulled his sword out, and Vendaris fell to the ground, dead.
RED Lieutenant: Who's the one who's dead n---
The Lieutenant fell over dead, Epicfacekiller123 had shot him.
Epicfacekiller123: Vendaris… is dead…
DoctorCooper: Now… Let's kill iKeyloggz
DoctorCooper pulled out his sniper, and sniped iKeyloggz in the leg, making him fall down unconscious
Desertedbart: iKeyloggz is down! Defend me while I get him to the raider base. Retreat RAID!
Everybody: Yes, sir!
DoctorCooper: That ought to do it.
________________________________________________________________________iKeyloggz was sniped, will he survive? Find out in chapter 7.
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| 30 Sep 2011 10:37 PM |
| Deserted u should make your own COMIC BOOK SERIES!!! |
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| 30 Sep 2011 10:45 PM |
| i want to hire you to make a story lol |
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Vendaris
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| 30 Sep 2011 11:08 PM |
Lol, I died xD
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=55602534
Read this book I wrote guys. |
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| 30 Sep 2011 11:09 PM |
Read this book I wrote guys:
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| 01 Oct 2011 03:48 AM |
| Desert you know you should make a comic book about this because its so epic ;) |
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| 01 Oct 2011 07:18 AM |
| YAY!!! LETS POWN EM! but i have a fealing we should not speek too soon about who will win... if we make one mistake we are in for one big heck of a fight... |
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| 01 Oct 2011 11:35 AM |
DESERTEDBART Y U NO ADD ME IN STORY? |
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| 01 Oct 2011 12:00 PM |
| Don't advertise your story on my story |
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