AbCatchem
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| 29 Sep 2011 05:48 PM |
Our class had to make a fall poem that rhymes. Here it is. Enjoy.
Autumn, the school-free summer was fun, Sadly, it is done.
Autumn, the beginning of school, The end of the pool.
Autumn, the time of Thanksgiving, and when the dead come to the world of the living.
Autumn, the time of candy and pie. Look - in your garden, there some pumpkins lie!
Autumn, begins in a warm September, Ending in a much colder November!
Autumn, look at those crimson-crisp leaves, Before you know it, the fall off their trees.
Autumn, ghosts and zombies walk through the night, Leaving mortals frozen in fright!
Autumn, a black cat streaks past you feet, May as well take another street!
Autumn, you spy a Jack-O-Lantern as you come home at night, It glows with an eerie yellow light.
Autumn, greedy little children stuff their faces with pie, Before getting sick and not telling why.
Autumn, the time to for costumes and clothes, So you can put on some Halloween shows!
Autumn, the season of Will-O'-the-Wisps and ghosts, Creatures likely to scare most!
Autumn, the time to harvest and feast, Autumn is a lot of fun to say the least!
Autumn, one of the best seasons, as you can see, I love it for many reasons!
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Xadrin
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| 29 Sep 2011 05:57 PM |
"Ending in a much colder November!"
Interesting. I've been misled all my life. I was told my birthday and Thanksgiving were during fall. |
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AbCatchem
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| 29 Sep 2011 07:30 PM |
| Oh sorry...you are right forgive me... |
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Xadrin
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| 29 Sep 2011 07:54 PM |
Wait, what?
I mean, it's a simple fix. Just replace "November" with "December". Same syllables, still rhymes. |
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| 29 Sep 2011 07:55 PM |
| And over use of the word "autumn", but other than that it's good. |
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| 29 Sep 2011 07:59 PM |
I say that at the beginning of every couplet. You are correct, December rhymes. |
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