rsmithnvm
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| 28 Sep 2011 06:48 PM |
[If you haven't read Vaktovian {2} Chapter 3, Do it now. http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=55489999]
[Still Xevon's Point of View] --------------------------- My finger pulled the trigger, and the bullet flew straight at CT. He quickly moved out of the way, and the bullet made home in the wall. CT shot his pistol, and it came at me, following me everywhere I go. It was hard to distract the bullet, but as soon as it came close to me. I ducked and rolled towards CT, and I punched him in the ribs. He fell back backwards, and he came straight up. He put his gun against my head and fired, but a click came, he was out of ammo. He threw his gun to the side, opened the door, and ran out of the room. - Incoming R.A.T came, and I hid by the door, I peaked over the corner and shot. Bullets hit the R.A.T and they collapsed immediately. I looked over the corner for more R.A.T, and it was clear, I snuck up ahead further. I walked over the dead, bleeding R.A.T, and looked over the corner. I walked further, and there I saw CT standing, a machine gun pointing at all of the prisoners, all of the VAC and VAK. "Your so called 'plan' failed." CT said, "R.A.T, take him out." CT said lightly. He grabbed all the prisoners, and walked out the door, to the outside. - R.A.T stood infront of me, pointing guns at me, VERY strong guns. I grabbed the back of my belt, where grenades stood. I pulled one out quietly, "Ever played with an explosive?" I asked, they looked at eachother like I was retarded. I pulled they pin, bashed it against the ground, and threw it. - The grenade traveled the air, and it hit the ground. I looked over the corner, and the R.A.T looked at eachother with bolging eyes, and then the grenade exploded. As soon as the grenade finished, I looked over the corner, and saw scattered limbs all over the floor. I walked inside, stepping over guts and limbs. I walked through the door way turning left and right through the halls. Where it lead me to a cave, bricks rose up in the air. Water all over the place, spikes were below the water. I saw skeletons, with holes through there bodies. - "Here we go." I said to myself, I ran to gain speed, and I jumped on the brick, almost falling into the deadly water. I hopped onto another, and another, until I finally got to the end. I heard missiles flying in the air, turrets firing. I looked outside a hole, and a gunship flew in the air spinning out of control. The gunships tail was on fire, and it was a R.A.T's gunship. It quickly crashed into the ground, making an explosion. -- I opened a door to a room, a secret room. The only place CT could possibly be, I walked through the door, and there I was in a white blank room, but I heard something. The wall suddenly came up with a gunship staring at me, CT stood in the back with the rest. Ropes over there hands, feet, and mouth. The R.A.T pilot aimed his turrets, and fired. I saw the bullets coming at me, like slow motion. I quickly zig zagged, dodging the turrets bullets as best as possible, I tried to reach the gunship, I ran forward, and stopped zig zagging. - I quickly jumped, and landed on the glass window of the gunship, the front. I held onto the sticking out turrets, and they were baking hot. I let go before my hands cought on fire, and I grabbed another grenade, pulled the pin, and I threw it in the top propellars, I quickly dropped below the gunship, and I grabbed the ledge. The grenade exploded, and headed towards the water. - I let go of the edge, and jumped, I saw the VAC and VAK struggling to get out while CT was forced against them. The gunship hit the water, making an explosion of water, and I landed directly next to it. My fellow VAC and VAK couldn't get out. I grabbed my knife, and swam down, I jumped inside, and started cutting ropes. They swam above water quick, I was running out of air, fast. I held my knife, and cut the rope that held Casterma, and I rose above the water. I took a big gasp, and we all sat above water. CT stood on land, with a person in his hands, Ghost Dagger. He held a knife at his throat, and quickly, Ghost elbowed him in the ribs bringing his knife off. He kicked him backwards, and there stood R.A.T. All the R.A.T that have been in the base, are here now, watching us all. We stood surrounded, guns pointed at us. We were finished. -----------------
[Vaktovian {2} Chapter 5, Coming Soon] |
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Ipwny0u
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| 28 Sep 2011 07:10 PM |
| Awsome story. Only a few grammar mishaps. |
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blazar
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| 28 Sep 2011 07:20 PM |
"My finger pulled the trigger, and the bullet flew straight at CT."
These words, put in images, probably illustrate every Vaktovian's dream. |
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| 28 Sep 2011 07:25 PM |
Why am I not in it.....
-Sad face-
Actually, I have no idea if I am in it, I just read like 3 chapters when they were on the front page becuase I cant copy and paste links in this browser, no me. Unless I am going to be the super awesome mega hero at the end of this, which would be a good representation of me. |
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79narn79
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| 28 Sep 2011 08:00 PM |
| Er... Please Gimme a Better Role Vixtron Ra'zac... But Storys AWESOME! |
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| 28 Sep 2011 08:21 PM |
I like how Rs trys to put us all in the story. I can imagine it that way. So, remember when he says, 'us' or 'my fellow VAC and VAK' that he means everybody who has been introduced in the story so far.
I'm Zeno, and I want a piece of the cake (Code: I want to fight some RAT)
~Zeno~ |
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| 28 Sep 2011 08:47 PM |
| Where am I?! GRR! And Ultru I leaving VAK. But anyways, nice. |
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| 28 Sep 2011 09:31 PM |
| By VAC/VAK, it should mention some new charecters. Some charecteristics could be known from the charecters. |
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