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Blockkiller001 is not online. Blockkiller001
Joined: 25 Jan 2011
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28 Sep 2011 01:19 PM
“Levrak... Levrak? You ok?” a muffled voice said. My arm was killing me, sending shocks of pain around my body. “Who... who are you?” I groaned my vision all blurry. “It’s me, Nero,” Ariach said. “You’ve been unconscious for an hour. The shots were only flesh wounds, but they tore a nerve off and that made you black out. The Admiral got away, but we detonated some explosives at the terminal. That should put Celeste Outta action for a while. The VAC by the door is Kasihan Kaisar. He’s our guard, for now. We’re currently in the infirmary in a secret space station orbiting Frostaria. It often does Space-to ground artillery strikes. R.A.T doesn’t even know were here!” Nero laughed. “I doubt that they will even suspect that we are-” an explosion cut him off. Sparks flew out of a computer terminal while an alarm went off. “INTRUDERS IN SECTOR 3-05. INTRUDERS IN SECTOR 3-05” an automated voice repeated. A VAC with both legs blown off crawled into the room, bleeding badly. “They’ve found us, R.A.T has found us!” the VAC coughed, before collapsing onto his back and coughing blood out his mouth and nose. Kasihan ran to him and checked his pulse. “He’s dead.” Kasihan said. “You two stick with me. We need to get out of this place!” Nero shouted. R.A.T guns could be heard down the corridor from which the VAC came. “Quick! This way!” Kasihan said, gesturing to another door in the room. We rushed out of the room, quickly grabbing StA-11s as we did. 3 VAKs, also armed, came to join us off from another corridor. We stopped to check our weapons and identify each other. “Hello Sir,” one of them said to Nero “I’m Lieutenant Burjray Kcalifa, and this is Sergeant Wildex and Corporal Feria Superior. I’m also the Guard of Captain Xevon, the Captain who covered your evacuation. We’re searching for him now, although he may already be at the shuttle bay.” Nero listened while I saluted the 2 other VAKs. I looked at Burjray’s massive eye for a head, and Nero noticed me looking. “He’s another alien race, called the Messmar. We have quite a few of them serving the Empire,” Nero explained. Another Vaktovian ran from down from further up the corridor. “CONTACT!” he shouted. I recognised him as Valdemar from the assault. I guess all of the team was taken here. 2 R.A.T were instantly killed with the fire from the 3 SMGs and 3 StA-52s. “The shuttles are this way!” Sergeant Wildex said. We ran round a corner into a bulkhead door. “The mechanisms jammed!” Valdemar exclaimed. “Get that door open, and get it open FAST!” the trainer ordered “You 3 cover us!” he gestured to the other 3 VAK. As Wildex, Feria and Burjray took up positions, another 5th VAK ran round the corner, carrying a powerful metal cutter. “We found you lot cooped up here on the scanners, and found that the door was jammed. The mechanism’s completely fried, so I came to give you lot a hand. The name’s Vadim Gerasimov.” the arrival said. “Stand back,” the trainer warned. As the Vadim got to work cutting the door open, bullets hit the wall. “Cadet, help the other VAK cover us!” Nero said. “Yes Sir!” I replied quickly, feeling a bit dizzy from all the action. I stood behind the crouching VAK as 3 R.A.T came round the corner. Bullets and lasers flew across the small space between us, but the R.A.Ts had terrible aim. The first one fell back with blood spurting from a series of holes dotted along his chest, and then I took out the second with the rest of my clip. The third R.A.T took out a pulse and began shooting wildly, making us dive for cover. I felt for another ammo clip around my pockets, and then forgot that I had left all my gear back in the infirmary. “Outta ammo!” I shouted over the gun fire. Nero threw his Officer’s pistol towards me, as well as a few clips. “Don’t lose it,” he said, before returning to getting the door open. I quickly jumped from behind the wall and shot the third R.A.T straight through the head. “We got injuries!” one of the VAK said, as he examined Feria Superior who had taken damage. “He’s taken a shot to the left arm and lower right leg,” he said. “We have Aid kits in the shuttle. And… done!” Nero said, kicking down the cut door. “Get through; we got 30 seconds before the door shield goes down!” Vadim exclaimed. The VAKs quickly packed away their guns and lifted up their fallen comrade, before rushing through the door just in time, as a laser force-field took the place of the door. “That should slow those R.A.Ts right down,” one of the VAK chuckled. 8 VAK and 4 scientists stood by the door to the last shuttle. “Ah, there you lot are. And Burjray, I thought you’d never find me. The other 2 shuttles have already taken off and successfully warped. We thought you would never make it,” Captain Xevon said. “We got a man shot in both his left arm and right leg. We need to treat him as quickly as possible,” Nero Ariach said. Xevon Regat nodded. “The medic’s in the shuttle, now let’s get a move on!” one of the VAK said, as he opened the airlock. Nero walked over to Xevon and whispered something in his ear; Xevon gave a quick nod before Nero ran to a nearby computer terminal and tapped in a code. Suddenly, the automated voice bellowed “SELF-DESTRUCT PRIMED AND ARMED. DETONATION IN 3 MINUTES. LOCK-DOWN INIATIATED.” We all ran into the shuttle and closed the airlock. “We’ve undocked! Let’s get this shuttle to warp before the station goes off like a firework!” the pilot said, who was Dimitri Oranicus, the same pilot who dropped us off at Celeste. The medic quickly attended to the injured VAK. “Sir…” Private Bektor asked “I thought when the Self-Destruct was activated all access weapons would be fired at an entered target.” The trainer nodded. “I didn’t have time to type in the co-ordinates, so I chose the largest pre-programmed target available. Which would be…” the trainer glanced at a computer and pressed a few buttons, “The recreation centre, and the main military areas.” The shuttle shook as the main engines gained speed. Hundreds of rockets fired from all over the station, heading down through the thick atmosphere to their intended targets. “We’re gonna have to wait a while for the warp engines to warm up, they haven’t been updated with the new operation system yet,” Dimitri said. The 3 main cannons on the station beamed downwards, through the thick clouds that floated above Frostaria. “They’re ready right about…. Now! Warping to SMO!” The Pilot shouted. The shuttle quickly sped up as the Station exploded behind them. “We just about made it!” Bektor said, relieved. “No kidding,” Vadim agreed.

Down on the planet of Frostaria…
Fire licked the bodies of dead R.A.T. Screeching sirens and alarms were going off everywhere, with entire docked battleships destroyed. No-one on the planet knew what just happened, with smoke billowing from the destroyed buildings of what was the R.A.T recreation centre. Nearly every military area within range of the station had been damaged. Some weapons missed and blew up in the sea; Huge tsunamis were caused due to this, with many coastal settlements and seaside military facilities seriously damaged. Fort Celeste was also seriously hit, with its building flooded, and the soil surrounding the underground passageways collapsed. It would take months to reverse the damage caused. Rebuilding work quickly began on Celeste, however, the remains of the Space Station continued to orbit the planet until eventually losing speed and succumbing to the Planet’s gravitational pull. The scarred, burnt remains completely destroyed the inside of Fort Celeste, eventually leading to the rebuild of Fort Celeste II. R.A.T’s leader watched the burning remains of what once had been grand military facilities. A R.A.T admiral hurriedly walked into the leader’s officer, holding a thin folder. “Sir…” the Admiral asked. R.A.T’s leader slowly turned around from his grand window, which had a clear view of what just happened. “We had managed to retrieve the remains of a missile from the damage, and our scientists have proved that it is of Vaktovian design.” Anger flashed in the eyes of the colourless leader, eyes hidden behind a white hood that hid his face. Formally dressed in black and white robes, he strode over to the Admiral. “Call all troops to fall back and defend Frostaria while we rebuild and remobilize. Today shall not be forgotten,” the Colourless leader said, before returning to his position behind his desk. The Admiral quickly nodded and then saluted, before walking out into the smoky outside, into his private helicopter. As the helicopter lifted up into the smoke-filled sky, the wail of the sirens continued to cry into the night.
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dw24cod6 is not online. dw24cod6
Joined: 03 Dec 2010
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28 Sep 2011 01:29 PM
Great! can't wait for part 4. Im SGT wildex btw.
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BowMaster9 is not online. BowMaster9
Joined: 11 May 2010
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28 Sep 2011 01:34 PM
It's great, but can you attempt to make the paragraphs smaller?

[_/See You starside\_]
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Blockkiller001 is not online. Blockkiller001
Joined: 25 Jan 2011
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28 Sep 2011 01:42 PM
Credits to those who allowed me to include them in the story (In order of appearance in this part:
bretty167- Nero Ariach
skulldude6453- Kasihan Kaisar
TelabuildIII- Burjray Kcalifa
dw24cod6- Sgt Wildex
SuperiorSaturday999- Feria Superior
VorVelm- Valdemar Vor-Velm Symaen
EthanShark- Vadin Gerasimov
Ultru- Xevon Regat
briggsy19- Dimitri Oranicus
BishoBlox- Bektor

Part requests for Part 4 now being taken!

I am Levrak, for those who don't know.
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Blockkiller001 is not online. Blockkiller001
Joined: 25 Jan 2011
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28 Sep 2011 01:44 PM
There will be paragraphs for Part 4. Sorry about that.
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Trigus is not online. Trigus
Joined: 08 Apr 2011
Total Posts: 611
28 Sep 2011 02:47 PM
Once again, Levrak, you've shown great writing talent. You should be in the VAK Scribes Division.

~={[Trigus]}=~
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SAMSONITE2 is not online. SAMSONITE2
Joined: 28 Oct 2009
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28 Sep 2011 02:51 PM
I saw the size of it and passed...
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sombernicklol is not online. sombernicklol
Joined: 17 Oct 2010
Total Posts: 336
28 Sep 2011 03:34 PM
VERY GOOD, I LOVED THE ENDING, (The back to frostoria part) Very well written.
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sombernicklol is not online. sombernicklol
Joined: 17 Oct 2010
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28 Sep 2011 03:36 PM
Remember, im in part 4 as Lieutenant Costa, I am guessing im at part 4 because you said I would be at the SMO part, and they are going to SMO.
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crazybone111 is not online. crazybone111
Joined: 13 Aug 2008
Total Posts: 3134
28 Sep 2011 03:43 PM
Frostaria is a country, not a planet.
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sombernicklol is not online. sombernicklol
Joined: 17 Oct 2010
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28 Sep 2011 03:44 PM
Watever
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nickonator1 is not online. nickonator1
Joined: 02 Jul 2008
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28 Sep 2011 03:49 PM
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Blockkiller001 is not online. Blockkiller001
Joined: 25 Jan 2011
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29 Sep 2011 10:01 AM
Frostaria would be far more better as a planet, as the size of R.A.T demonstrates. Also, it's for the sake of a story.
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VorVelm is not online. VorVelm
Joined: 01 Oct 2010
Total Posts: 473
29 Sep 2011 10:14 AM
I love these stories. I also like being in them, haha.
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