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| 27 Sep 2011 04:53 PM |
[Chapter Eight: Suddenly.] Chapter seven here:http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=55460443
The sun was setting. It was starting to become cold. The wind continued to howl and blow sand about. The barking has died down. The sound of firefights reducing. The RAA capital ship pelting the clone bases with heavy blows. Two RGRM battleships trying to take down the capital ship.
(*General Andy's squad*)
"The enemy has been here longer than us, therefore they may have set up in buildings, perfect for ambushing. We'll go quickly and safely. Do as I say or get punished. Let's move!" Andy shoved a extended clip into his morita, setting the strap on his back. The squad began to sprint forward into the darkness. "Where are we going, sir?" Asked Jeff. "To the battlefield." Replied Andy. Max gave Jeff a confused look as they were running. "Sir, A-" Max was shushed by Jeff. "Best not to ask questions at this time, Max." Said Jeff. They continued to run. Far off, a RAA scout saw the dust being kicked up by Andy's squad. He ran to report to RAA commanders. After ten minutes of intense running, Andy threw up a hand, signalling to halt. "Take cover, now!" he said quietly. Jeff took cover behind a spacecar. Max took cover behind a huge pile of rubble. John took cover beside Andy beside a building. They waited in silence. They heard the march of many feet. Andy signalled to Private Rosie to come to him. She ran quietly towards him. A small squad of RAA soldiers turned the corner as she was halfway to him, in the middle of the road. Rosie dropped like a stone to the floor, waiting as she held her breath. Andy signalled for her to crawl to him. He overheard the RAA talking, the commmander questioning the scout from earlier "You're sure they came this way? I don't see anything but blasted clone bodies..." "Yes, sir. I know for certain they'll come here, sir..." said the scout. Andy picked up a small piece of rubble, taking aim and throwing it behind the RAA squad, it struck a metal door, causing a loud noise to be heard. The RAA squad instantly turned around, taking aim. Rosie got up and dashed the rest of the way towards Andy. Patting her back for her to stay low he said "We're going to wait for them to pass us, then we'll open fire if needed." She nodded. Andy signalled to Jeff and Max to stay quiet. The RAA slowly marched forward. Rosie held her breath again, shaking nervously. John put his hand on her shoulder to calm her. It made a silent thud. Suddenly another heavily armored RAA looked directly at them, staring. Certain she'd been seen, Rosie grabbed for her pistol, halfway there Andy's hand grabbed hers, halting it. The soldier stared for another moment, then continued walking with the rest. Rosie sighed in relief. The RAA soldier instantly turned around, pelting her location blindlessly with bullets. Hearing this, the rest of the soldiers turned, starting to fire. Andy stood, returned fire, felling the soldier that was the closest. "Max, John, Rosie, take the others down the road, keep going towards the objective! Jeff, stay with me!" Andy fired upon the heavily armored RAA soldier, hitting his soldier, causing his gun to drop. The soldier charged Andy shoulder first. Andy finished giving orders, looking infront of him, but it was too late.
*To be continued*
[Chapter eight coming soon!] |
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| 27 Sep 2011 05:03 PM |
| i want to be in here as Luke. :3 |
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| 27 Sep 2011 05:14 PM |
| Can i lead a squad or something ;/ i wish to explode killing alot of enemys with me. (Battle Cry) Long Live MB-can i say it on radio ;/ |
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| 27 Sep 2011 05:14 PM |
BTW nice stuff, but let me give you an example of the highest quality writing.
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=55148234 |
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| 27 Sep 2011 05:35 PM |
| Thanks but no thanks, the thread was made by you, and all I saw that was better was it was spaced out, making it a longer read. |
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| 27 Sep 2011 05:47 PM |
| Snake i want to be an ace pilot wing leader. :3 |
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