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| 27 Sep 2011 03:41 PM |
[Chapter seven.] Chapter six here:http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=55452099
The sun continued to beat down on the RGRM capital world. Dust and sand now flew around wildy, blinding anybody without protection. The wind howled through the broken city. Buildings fell. Walls crumbled. Civilians cried out in pain. Shrieks of RAA bombers filled the sky. The sound of a massive explosion rang out, the RGRM battleship was falling out of the sky. It crashed outside of the city, sending massive amounts of sand in every direction. Shots rang out from everywhich way. The screams of agony rose from the city. The bark of dogs. The terror stricken voices of soldiers in tightly pinned areas.
(*General Tango's side of the battle*)
*Bang* *Bang* *Bang* "Continue fire on that mech!" Ordered Tango. Private Jordan loaded a RPG, stood and fired at the incoming mech. It struck, tipping it over on it's side, rendering it useless. "Excellent shot" Said Daniel, as he fired at a RAA soldier, felling him. Off to the left, Tango saw a massive squad of clones, charging at the RAA soldiers, firing as they went. Shots burst into the flanks of RAA, killing many. Ceasing attention towards the Mobile Bloxxers, RAA turned to the incoming clones, firing at will. Both sides lost many. "Nows our chance! Let them have it!" Ordered Noah, as the stood up to fire at the side of the soldiers. The other Mobile Bloxxers did the same, quickly thinning the ranks of the RAA soldiers. Panic struck both RAA and RGRM clones, as they were being fired at by two sides, they retreated. This sent cries of joy from the clones, only to be ended by the deadly load of a RAA bomber. The bomber went too low for the drop, the explosion reaching the backend of it, sending in crashing into a building. Seeing this, the RAA soldiers charged the Mobile Bloxxers. Quickly, the Mobile Bloxxers, threw out grenades and fell back to more cover. They chose the wrong spot, the area provided cover and access for both sides. RAA poured over the small walls of the building, falling over in death and pain. A wild shot rang out, heading towards Tango. Suddenly Antti rammed into Tango by accident, tripping them both, Antti bashed his shoulder into a sharp fragment of the building, causing massive bleeding. Tango rolled down a hill of rubble and into a wall, charging back up he saw RAA flooding over. A soldier got to close to him, Tango instantly kneed him, spun him around and sent a heavy blow into the back of the soldiers neck, paralyzing him from the neck down. Tango picked the body up, using it as a shield, firing at the massive ammounts of RAA troopers. Many of them fell, many bullets hit the body, causing Tango to throw it down, he quickly then took cover behind a wall, peaking out to fire a explosive into a crowd of soldiers, they flew everywhere. One soldier kicked the explosive, causing it to fly into the sky, destroying a pack of bombers, the explosives raining down onto the RAA troopers, thinning them. Noah came to Tango in a hurry, followed by the rest of the Mobile Bloxxers. "We've got to retreat now!" Shouted Noah. Tango nodded and said "Let's g-" He was halted by Antti, as he informed "I've lost too much blood to be running around, sir. I'm too heavy to be carried as well, You go, I'll thin them further, sir!" Understanding, Tango nodded and said "You'll be remembered, Antti." "Get going" Shouted Antti, as he turned in his crouched position, letting a stream of bullets fire into the soldiers. "Get in line!!" He shouted, as he continued to fire recklessly into the RAA soldiers, felling many. "Here's more!" "Here's more!" "Get some more!" he screamed to the soldiers as he fired. Antti, pulled a grenade from his belt, bashing it into his helmet to set the charge, throwing in deep into the soldiers. It blew, causing chaos. Antti continued to fire upon them. A loud *Click!* sounded, realizing he was out of ammo, Antti pulled out his magnum, firing slowly at the soldiers. Taking three down, wounding two. Massive fire came onto Antti, felling him. He let out a loud gasp as his head stuck the rubble, never to rise again.
*To be continued*
[Chapter Eight coming soon!] |
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funny5953
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| 27 Sep 2011 03:53 PM |
| So Im Just In The Night Watch? |
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anding777
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| 27 Sep 2011 03:54 PM |
| First you offend me by tripping Tango, then you kill me? Ouch! LOL. |
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| 27 Sep 2011 03:55 PM |
| You're offended by saving Tango's life? :o Then Saved the whole squads life. :o Yeah, sorry. I was thinking of killing the medic(Dogdan) but Alice told me not to. |
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dogdan17
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dogdan17
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| 27 Sep 2011 03:59 PM |
| Wow I must have a ton of lag, I only saw the first post. Also I tell Alice thanks for saving my life. lol I would have been fine dying. |
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anding777
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| 27 Sep 2011 04:01 PM |
| I was joking LOL! I though that was obvious. But I guess not |
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anding777
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| 27 Sep 2011 04:06 PM |
| You really should write a book or something. This could get famous! |
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| 27 Sep 2011 05:11 PM |
Can i die in this storey honourably two? Something epic like someone throws a freaken gernade near some important person and i grab it and it freaken blows my arm off and save us all!? Id like it if a massive mech apeared and i got a rpg and ran 30 feet out of cover and shot it down, but was shot 500 times, my strength carried me on. (Battle cry) LONG LIVE MB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| 27 Sep 2011 05:12 PM |
| Can i be in the storey >_> |
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| 27 Sep 2011 05:12 PM |
Nice too, but you can use some improvement.
Use paragraphs. |
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| 27 Sep 2011 05:49 PM |
Fable, message me a name for your character.
Yeah, it could use a ton of improvment. |
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