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| 26 Sep 2011 03:16 PM |
Read previous parts if you haven't, if you don't, you'll get lost in the story. PART 1 - http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=53258728 PART 2 - http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=53322890 PART 3 - http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=55297121
___ >WSC Enclosed of Heart, First Vaktovian War. >In orbit of planet Ceiti-IV, Ceiti system. Behind VAK borders.
"The VAK ship has entered the system, sir."
"What's the status on that ship, ensign" Captain Roberts asked. "It doesn't seem like they spotted us" Roberts got alerted. "Are you sure or not?" he rudely asked. "No way to tell. For all we know these atmospheric conditions are known by the VAK, and give away our position." the Ensign answered.
"Seems like a tricky situation. We leave and stay cloaked, or stay here, save our men but get detected." the First Officer concluded. The Captain turned around. "We can't leave our men there, we can't leave orbit. We're not going to lose this position." First Officer Mackenzie questioned the Captain's decision. "Then what about that VAK ship? If we stay here we risk being detected, and a swarm of VAK battleships might head this way. That ship right there might be just a simple scout, but they'll call for help. You know that." "I know, Mackenzie. But there's a fleet waiting on the other side of the border. We can't contact them now, as we're in comm silence, but one probe away and they'll come for us. This position is vital to the war."
The Captain continued. "All stations, go to red alert. All decks must be on full alert. Take battle positions. Stand-by damage control teams." Suddenly all the blue screens on the bridge turned red, and the mood switched to a focused, eerie one. "We expecting a fight, sir?" "It's war."
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"How are we holding up, Commander Davis?" the Captain spoke over the comm from his chair. "Engine status nominal, 98% power efficiency. Anything else you'd like to know?" "Yes, distribute power evenly over shields and weapons. Minimal life support if necessary." "Aye sir."
"The VAK scout is on the other side of the planet, sir" the Helmsman announced "They haven't spotted us yet." the First Officer concluded. The Captain looked over the ensign's shoulder, on his console's display. Very clear scans were shown of the planet and the VAK ship's location. "No.. this isnt right. You don't change course when in regular orbit, DROP THE CLOAK! POWER OUR WEAPONS!".
"Hail them."
A Vaktovian Captain came on the main viewscreen. Captain Roberts stood up. "This is Captain Roberts of the WSC Enclosed of Heart, representing WIJ. We have men on this planet and we are not going to leave without them." "You have violated VAK space in the middle of a war, Captain. Don't think you can just walk away like that. You're on your own. In our space. Don't think you stand a chance."
"..you know, Vaktovian.. in our culture.. there's a saying.." The Captain stared very intimidating at the VAK captain. "Get lost." "You and your crew will NOT s-"
The Comm officer closed the channel. The Captain nodded.
"Forward phaser array. Fire."
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ndagon12
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| 26 Sep 2011 03:24 PM |
Don't fight for first please, lol.
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Dralin
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| 26 Sep 2011 03:25 PM |
| Another wonderfuly written chapter! :D |
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nahom007
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| 26 Sep 2011 03:37 PM |
| Oyus chapter 5 will be excellent. I can't wait to hear that. *Lightbulb* You should make a vignette or a YT video of this story. Liek a baws. |
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zezimax1
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| 26 Sep 2011 03:37 PM |
One word, B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L...
Hey there Dralin :D |
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| 26 Sep 2011 03:40 PM |
I like it how you base it on Halo: The Flood.
[_/See You starside\_] |
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| 26 Sep 2011 03:41 PM |
Coo sotry bro. Tell it again
Can I be in it pl0x?
I`m good with snipahz |
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Rovert10
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| 26 Sep 2011 03:47 PM |
| Epik. Thrilling storyline. Can't wait for chapter five :D |
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Rovert10
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| 26 Sep 2011 03:48 PM |
| No wait it should be Fire PROTON Torpedos! :P trolololol |
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SGAbrett
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| 26 Sep 2011 03:49 PM |
| Finally, something other than Jenkins xD - Sergeant SGAbrett |
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| 26 Sep 2011 03:54 PM |
I look at the top 1000 american surnames.
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| 26 Sep 2011 03:54 PM |
| I canz do SOOOOOO much bettah SS read mah Dominance series :-D BTW this is coolio foolio. |
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squidboi2
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| 26 Sep 2011 04:05 PM |
| inb4 wij become overpowered and beat vak in like two days of "hard fighting" |
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| 26 Sep 2011 04:07 PM |
This isn't about beating VAK, it's about gaining a vital position in the war.
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squidboi2
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| 26 Sep 2011 04:08 PM |
yes but you were talking about it in such way that you'd expect WIJ to crush the VAK homeplanet in 2 days.
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MM233
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| 26 Sep 2011 04:11 PM |
| Great story so far, Sir. Can't what to read how we woop that VAK ship. And even if its a close encounter, and our guys barely survive, we still win. Who won this war anyway? Or did it just end in the treaty? |
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MM233
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| 26 Sep 2011 04:12 PM |
| Guess those last few post explane it. |
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squidboi2
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| 26 Sep 2011 04:12 PM |
@SS,
i'm used to it.
that's how most stories involving vak go. |
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