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Re: Vaktovian {2} - Chapter 1

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rsmithnvm is not online. rsmithnvm
Joined: 31 Jan 2010
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25 Sep 2011 09:16 PM
[If you haven't read ANY of book 1. Do it now.http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=55374158]

Yes, this is my second story. Now, to where I left off.
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My gun aimed at CT's head, his gun aimed at mine. I pulled the trigger, and the sound I didn't want to here came out. It was out of ammo, "Nice knowing you... Not!" He said.
My eyes closed, hopelessy. I heard a boat engine from far away, there came a boat, and I saw the VAC and VAK! Xevon, Javier, Profit, Xenondryyak, all of them. They were coming to get me. Zerrox stood up, with a RPG. Oh god, I thought in my head, they weren't trying to save me. They were trying to kill CT.
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CT stood up with me, still pointing his gun at my head. "Vextrus!" Spargon yelled. Zerrox lowered his RPG. I quickly elbowed CT in the face, and I jumped off the boat. I landed on the front of the boat, but slipped. I now held on to the tip of the boat, and my feet motored through the water. CT jumped onto our boat, and grabbed me by the throat. "Say goodbye to your little Vaktovian." He told them. Xevon jumped onto CT, and then I flew, I held on right next to the engine and its blade. Xevon took his fist and shoved it into CT's ribs, making deep impact.
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A R.A.T looked behind at us, I saw him with a phone. He was calling a dropship. I took a peak behind me, and there it was, a dropship aiming straight at us. He lowered down, to get a better aim at the boat. He lowered next to the engine, I grabbed onto the bottom, and swung inside. I took out my knife, and stuck it into the pilot's neck.
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I grabbed the pilot, and threw him out of the gunship, and he landed in the dead ocean. "Get in!" I yelled at the others, and they jumped in quick. Xevon was to busy beating the crap out of CT. "Come on, Xevon!" Javier yelled. He got off CT, and jumped inside. Javier took pilot, and CT jumped onto the side. No-one noticed he was hanging on, "We're taking out the rest of R.A.T," Xevon said. "To Celeste!!" He yelled. Javier aimed the dropship towards Celeste and in no time, we arrived.
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CT jumped off the helicopter and on to the dock. We grabbed our guns, and ran inside Celeste.
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[CT's Point of View]
I walked into the gunship, and I loaded the missiles, I started it, and took it into the air. I was going to finished these VAK!
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[Vextrus' Point of View]
I heard a gunship in the air. "Great, another gunship." I said. We jumped threw the back, and attacked the R.A.T. The gunship came over our head, and I looked into the pilot seat, "It's CT," I told them. Xevon, grabbed his knife and slaughtered R.A.T with it. CT fired a missile at the first person he saw, Profit. The missile flew at him, and he jumped out of the way.
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[Profit's Point of View]
Oh god! I almost got my limbs splattered! I looked over at a sniper in a tower, and I put my finger on the trigger, but he shot first. The bullet punctured the air, and hit my chest. Pain overwhelmed my body. I fell to the ground, blood pouring out of my chest like a bloody waterfall. My vision blurred, my spirit traveled out of my body, and into the air. I was officially dead.
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[Vextrus' Point of View]
I stared at the dead Profit, sadness filled my body. My friend had died, Zerrox went to him, and dragged him out of Celeste. Xenondryyak looked at me, "He's gone to paradise now." He told me. A missile landed between us, and Xenondryyak flew inside the building hitting the wall. I flew against the window and went straight through, glass scattered everywhere. I got up quickly, as did Xenondryyak. Xevon was at the elevator, all that were down stairs and alive went on the elevator to the 2nd floor. We got to the second floor, and shot the R.A.T clearing the floor. We walked upstairs to the terminal, "You fools, I had bombs planted in every section in the building!" CT said. I stared at all of the people that were with me. "Jump out the window!" Yelled Xevon.
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We ran towards the window peircing threw it, and the building blew up, we all were forced away from the building, and there we fell from a Three story Building. Glass spread everywhere. We all faced the ground, explosion, death.

[Vaktovian {2} - Chapter 2 Coming Soon]
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blazar is not online. blazar
Joined: 15 Jul 2008
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25 Sep 2011 09:22 PM
I did not understand a thing, primarily because I didn't read the first book. But also because it's confusing going from different points of views that rapidly.
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naruto4400 is not online. naruto4400
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25 Sep 2011 09:31 PM
Another Succesful chapter and book Im acious for chapter 2!!
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JackBloxxer97 is not online. JackBloxxer97
Joined: 28 Sep 2010
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25 Sep 2011 09:33 PM
I love reading these, it's very interesting.
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ridergunman is not online. ridergunman
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25 Sep 2011 09:34 PM
Awesome
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Junker666 is not online. Junker666
Joined: 18 Mar 2009
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25 Sep 2011 09:41 PM
Yaaa 2nd book beginning is awesome!
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moaf is not online. moaf
Joined: 17 Sep 2008
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25 Sep 2011 09:43 PM
All the same...

"I aimed the gun at CT's head".

Gimme a break.
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79narn79 is not online. 79narn79
Joined: 10 Jun 2010
Total Posts: 60
25 Sep 2011 09:44 PM
I'm In It as "Vixtron Ra'zac ButHe Hasnt said my name In a While... Sad..
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55555micheal is not online. 55555micheal
Joined: 02 Mar 2011
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25 Sep 2011 09:44 PM
Awesome but Where am I (Virex)
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skaterdude89 is not online. skaterdude89
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25 Sep 2011 09:48 PM
Zerrox has made his return! hahaha
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DeathsAssassin3 is not online. DeathsAssassin3
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25 Sep 2011 09:52 PM
Awsome
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silvershield898 is not online. silvershield898
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25 Sep 2011 09:55 PM
Very interesting. It has inspired me to write my own story.
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arcaneclone is not online. arcaneclone
Joined: 20 Nov 2008
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26 Sep 2011 09:29 AM
I liked this once. I think it's great how you're not just "Pwning" R.A.T. But you're letting them pile on some points.
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Blockkiller001 is not online. Blockkiller001
Joined: 25 Jan 2011
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26 Sep 2011 10:14 AM
These stories are great, but you keep changing from this person's view to the next. After a while you forget who's who, and it kinda makes the story not as good as it really should be. Nice work though.
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Blockkiller001 is not online. Blockkiller001
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26 Sep 2011 10:16 AM
And also, to tell the truth, CT wouldn't put himself in such a situation. A bunch of R.A.T are always near him, and he barely goes on raids.
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VladimirSmirnov is not online. VladimirSmirnov
Joined: 28 Jul 2010
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27 Sep 2011 12:24 AM
So i guess VAK got a journalist who jots these stuff down. :o
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SorlorALT is not online. SorlorALT
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27 Sep 2011 12:25 AM
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Superme555 is not online. Superme555
Joined: 23 Mar 2011
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27 Sep 2011 04:04 PM
I wonder if I'll be in one of his stories.
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theplaner is not online. theplaner
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19 May 2013 08:19 AM
Two years have passed and VAK has died...
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