Zaradox
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:04 PM |
"Father!" I cried. "Ugh, why is it kings must always be swarmed by peasants and beggars in public?" I muttered. I am Zaradox Pullus Creatura, prince of Zartox, and this is my story.
It was a cold and crisp day on Zartox, with commons and peasants swarming around the kings escort. My father demands he have his own escort, as he needs to think privately a lot. The same applies with my mother. Being the only royal child on the planet, I have my own escort. "This is such a nuisance." I said to my driver. "Perhaps, but you will speak with your father soon your majesty." He replied in a deep voice. The escort continued to vibrate, while my mobile battleship flew through the sky. The sky was unusually bright. I wanted to ask my father if he can run solar scans on the star of Zuritel. We continued to soar until an enormous BOOM shook the ground. A rain of debris soon followed. Dirt, rock, metal and people (or at least the remains) littered the ground, as hundreds and hundreds of tons of debris fell upon the planet. The sky split apart, and enormous fissures formed scars on the fragile planet. I heard screams, and then silence. The silence was the least of my problems, as my ship was flying through space faster than comprehension. Faster and faster I hurled through space, screaming in terror.The ship suddenly burst into flames, almost baking me into a cake. Wait, there is no oxygen in space I thought! As soon as what would happen next occurred to me, I heard a terrible sound of metal on rock scraping against each other. The ship rattled with resistance, but was soon torn apart. If my accommodation area hadn't been reinforced, I would have been dead. My room was torn to pieces, sending me sprawling onto a filthy, burnt, and bent mountain of metal. "AHHH!" I creamed as metal cut my flesh into ribbons. I tumbled down the remains of my ship, unconscious and broken. My body was nothing more than a ragdoll, as flesh met metal, and small drops of green liquid (Ector Blood) leaked from my body.
When I was revived, my eyes fluttered open. I thought it was a dream, but then the feeling of pain and blood shook me back to reality. I had an enormous ache all over my body. I felt weak, and my body refused to move. I lied there for hours, mind buzzing, heart pumping with horror. Soon, I began to weep. The events were terrible. I knew I was the only one left, and the thought struck me like a bullet. I am now the only Ector in existence! Eventually, my body managed to obey commands, and I stood up. I looked in awe at my surroundings. The sky was red, and I was apparently on top of a mountain. I could see a city barely within eye sight. Enormous ships flew through the air, with lights dotting the sides. My mind was overloading, and I almost wished I died in the crash. Undoubtedly, this planet would not be pleased with a military class flag ship crashing into their territory. Most people would consider this a declaration of war, and a 12 year old prince vs an entire planet didn't have much of a chance. Before I could think of my next move, I heard men in black military uniforms and helmets yell "Yes, sir!" I spun around, as lasers were erupting from rifles. One nicked me on my shoulder, while another hit my knee. I was barely alive by that point, and I collapsed, but remained conscious. They wanted me alive, I thought. I crawled on the ground, trying to reach cover from the soldiers. I might as well been a snail racing a cheetah. I loud THWACK and a searing pain came from my back. One of the men had a whip that buzzed with sparks. He continued to hit me until one of the men yelled "Enough, it appears to be a child." My attackers backed off, and the man stepped forward. "What might your name be, boy?" He asked in a firm but polite tone. "My n-n-name is Z-Zaradox P-Pull-u-us Cre-e-tura." I stammered. The man helped me up to my feet, but pushed me back down. "Wait, your the prince of Zartox, are you not?" He asked in a brutish manner. "Indeed" I whispered, almost incapable of speech. "Then I am afraid your presence here is unwelcomed, and your death is a necessity." My eyes widened in horror as he pulled out a sword, and this time, he didn't seem as friendly...
To be continued...
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:04 PM |
I can has more paragraphs?
-This post has been posted by me, copyright 2011.™ |
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:06 PM |
its funny because every wannabe vak makes themselves sound important on their rp planet or whatever.
[_/See You starside\_] |
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:07 PM |
| SNOOOOOORE.... what was that? you lost me at the first sentence. |
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Zaradox
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:09 PM |
| Hey, I did this for fun really. I'm not the greatest forum poster. By the way, I might be a prince, but my planet is destroyed, I become the only Ector in existence, and I am incredibly weak. Not very kingly, and I no longer have a planet to rule. |
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:12 PM |
More more more!
-Emperor of C&G |
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Zaradox
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:13 PM |
CMON' MAN!I have a whip with sparks here...
-Emperor of C&G |
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Zaradox
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:15 PM |
| By sparks I mean electricity. If you want randomly added into the story, tell me. Me : "No, stop!" |
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Zaradox
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Zaradox
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:34 PM |
You'll be the guy who gets his head lopped off!
(Kidding) |
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Paradoze
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:36 PM |
Nobody cares about Vaktovians. All they do is DESTROOOY EVERYTHIINGGG!
(also floodcheck) |
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:40 PM |
^
Please make him that person Zaradox. I do hate flamers. |
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:41 PM |
Agreed.
@MAKE THE REST OF THE STORY ALREADY! |
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Paradoze
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:42 PM |
I'm not flaming. I'm stating FACT. Maybe VAK is too ignorant to listen to COMMON SENSE. |
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:43 PM |
| Ironically, you don't have any. |
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:45 PM |
| VAK Doesn't 'destroy everything'.They believe in their own ways of expressing their points. |
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Paradoze
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:45 PM |
Ya i do.
I played a sophisticated game before coming to ROBLOX. and also my group is awesome. meaning I have common sense.
GO AWAY. NOBODY LIKES NOOBS. |
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:47 PM |
| I suppose an account that barely has any friends and post is a noob. I have recently deleted most of my friends. So, you are what you might call, a noob. |
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| 25 Sep 2011 02:47 PM |
Says the guy with 14 forum posts and that joined a month ago.
Just because you played a 'sophisticated' game doesn't mean you have common sense. |
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